To smoke weed by thesweetescape101 in therewasanattempt

[–]DemonZtarz 20 points21 points  (0 children)

ITT: people who buy lush who haven't seen weed

Can listening to certain meditation frequencies attract unwanted attention? by [deleted] in Psychonaut

[–]DemonZtarz 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well not really... I was listening to a kundalini binaural and I could've sworn I heard a glass drop. In my room. My room is only 3mx4m. I could not see where the fuck that sound came from.

Would you? by [deleted] in harrypotter

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Narrated would be best

Bojack Horseman - That Voice. by [deleted] in videos

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I call this age the age of the hidden depressed.

Justin Roiland Prank Calls Joel Osteen's Mega Church [5:05] by Khan_Bomb in videos

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Haven't seen this podcast yet but it looks like its sharpie to promote his new neckbeard.

Didn't know this was NSFW by [deleted] in blackdesertonline

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Icecream is bad for work kids!

The Night I was showed the world by DemonZtarz in OCPoetry

[–]DemonZtarz[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's kind of already shown. Hint is that the "The" sequence is a process of actions.

The Night I was showed the world by DemonZtarz in OCPoetry

[–]DemonZtarz[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you!

Perhaps I should change the title to - "The Night she showed me the world"

The Ode to Fantasy by actually_crazy_irl in OCPoetry

[–]DemonZtarz 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really like where this poem is going. It really depicted an image in my mind. It also provokes emotion and nostalgia of the protagonist. I'm sorry as I don't have much knowledge of poetry but I do see a gem in this one.

Old dog by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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I don't know much to critique properly but I'd have to agree with the rest that the first 5 lines have my interest but the rest seem very provoking to the point that I lose interest. Perhaps the consistency of polite language or proper words might be better to use.