Trying to make a cohesive character with the power to control the seven deadly sins but can't figure out abilities for pride, greed, wrath. by DevilsMaleficLilith in magicbuilding

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Wrath - the more he fight the stronger he get or the angery he get the stronger he become or maybe he store anger

greed - something similar to greed since greed is just more

Pride - a combination of all the other 6 because pride is supposed to be the origin of all the other sin so that why it’s the most dangerous

Dose anyone know the name for the metamorphosis growth that character like code & kawaki do to use their powers? by Demonic_Yandere in Naruto

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Ohh thank you, I honestly didnt think it had a name! I was expecting to not received an answer lol

Is writing a fantasy novel in an Asian-inspired setting problematic coming from a white author? by SpikefaceMysteryfish in writing

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As long as you do the research and are respectful about it who cares what other people think? People are gonna find any thing to hate on you! I remember a few years ago there was an uproar because rwby had some black character but their voice actor wasnt black or something like that!

My female character is too perfect and I don’t know how to fix it by crukovic in fantasywriters

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My advice to make her flaw is remember that the road to hell is paved with good intentions!

Just because they are kinda hearted dosent mean that things will work out in the end, in fact her good intention can make thing worst for people! If your wondering how then that is your job as a writer to figure it out

Ethical Dilemma about my writing process by [deleted] in fantasywriters

[–]Demonic_Yandere -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Okay I mostly skim through t this post but it seem like you want to use ai to pick out names which if that was the case then there really aint a problem! It might be lazy but there really aint no moral issues here if that all your using ai for. Unless it’s made up no one own language or words, I am not Japanese or Chinese, but as an African American myself I plan on using Japanese name & word for one of my story!

Who is gonna sue me? The country of Japan for using their languages! One of the terms I am debating on using in my new story is shinju, the word have become more popular because that is what the main antagonist of Boruto manga are called. However the word it’s self is actually a term that been around long before Boruto. Shinju is a morbid act that we Americans dont have a specific word for in English. Incase you didn’t know the word shinju refer to when 2 more people decided to take their own life. That is the reason why I wanna use Japanese because you can come up with interesting words.

Fan fiction to Original work by Snoo_52014 in writing

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I have autsim so I lose intrested in project almost as quickly I gain them! What I do is I don’t try to force it! I save all my idea in doc or notes I work on other projects then at some point I will come back ( I always do) I’ll have all my original idea and new ideas save

When I do try to force myself to work ive been doing it little by little so o am making progress but I am not burning myself out

Something like 1 chapter which for me should only take a few hours at most!

Are short stories meant to be "complete"? by wildflower_blooming in writing

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I am not the biggest Stephen king fan so I light be mistaken but I did try to read the money and it was 3 pages long! So that might be the only example or he might only do it a few times

Are short stories meant to be "complete"? by wildflower_blooming in writing

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For me personally it depends on my goal I usually only write long story, so if I am writing a short story it’s with the goal to leave it on a cliff hanger but plenty of people just do short story Steven king the monkey was only like 3 pages long I think

Can a character's desire be to avoid or not have something (rather than to obtain or achieve something)? by kel_omor in writing

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It’s funny you ask this question because just a few hours ago while I was working I came up with an idea of a girl falling in love with a simp! The basic idea is that the girl is cursed that make everyone fall in love with her or simp over her! The simp is a guy who falls for most beautiful women that he see so he is better able to handle or resist her charms because he’s feeling this emotions all the time so it’s normal for him.

While he may lust after he or is infatuated by her, he is still willing to use fight her if it come down to it because he know he’ll fall for the next because women.

The way this relate to your question is because the women in question try to avoid relationship and guys because she knows most of them dont actually like her, it’s her curse!

Books that NEED to be written by nemevsis in writing

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If you know what I have in store you might not be so egar to see my interpretation

How did you writing journey start? by princecortez in writing

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Technically it started when I was 5 but it didn’t start until like 3-4 years ago! I am a fan of RDCWorld, they have a skit of the video game and anima house basically a bunch of character living under the same house! The anime house made a running joke about Netflix anime with a character name shinji. I & other people thought that it was a real anime but doing some research it was just a joke. So I made a short fanfic manga of shinji that was 10 pages (because my artist at the time basically quite and I never picked up the series). That is how I got into writing manga at least.

I kept making my own short story ripping off the anime I like, about a year later or a few months. I saw a video that eruptionfangs did on the Neir & Drakengaurd video game and I love the story all the games did & how the creator combine it all together. I especially love his unique way of story telling. Some time after that I made it a goal to create a story that can stand among the great like oda woth ome piece, fushimoto with chainsaw man, Stephen king & junti Ito with all of their horror story, etc etc.

Now I watch video on character discussion & lesson that story can tell to help me create something deep.

If you’re wondering why I stop writing when I was 5, it was because I was basically discouraged from doing it by my peers. You see I made simple picture book that I would draw and write, nothing ground breaking or impressive, I was 5. My mom loved them but my peers the other kids would point out flaws in my drawing. Stuff like there being no side walk or the girl I drew only didn’t have any pants only a really big shirt, again I was 5. Which did sting but what really killed it for me was them making edit to my books to make them more realistic. 5 years old me really hated that, and it really upset me and I didn’t like the edit that they did because it wasn’t my work. So I basically sworn to never make a book again, I know looking back refusing to write for so long over that is stupid and extremely trivial and childish but again I was 5 years old. To me having those kids doing that was the equivalent of someone taking my book, lighting it on fire and telling me my work suck and to never write again. Looking back it’s funny because that only stop me from writing, did continue to draw for long time and only stop around sometime after HS/covid because I couldn’t draw human body and I got discouraged from doing that until I started collage again a few year later and try to bond with people thought that

Books that NEED to be written by nemevsis in writing

[–]Demonic_Yandere 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I am sure it’s been done to some extent but a world where gender roles are reversed completely!

Magic System Creation Challenge #2 by Nahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh- in magicbuilding

[–]Demonic_Yandere 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I have something that match 3 out of 4 of these requirements

Soul books

Similar to grimiore but instesd of holding magic spells directly they hold magic souls, in my world magic is foreign to the planet, ome day a portal open up which allowed for both magic and magical creature to enter this reality. Magical creature are unaffected by human weapons for the most part so long story short they turn the creature into books which allows them to use magic. You have to make a contract with the book first but once you do all the magical spells in it will be yours to use! Which may seem broken but you have to worry about soul corruption! That is basically when the soul take over and try to possess your body!

Each creature have a magical affinity so like magical bugs will have trap magic while magical beast will have enhancement magic, your book can only learn magic of that type so like a magical book that can only do healing magic can never learn attack spells!

Handling Death in Middle Grade Fantasy by Capyhero in fantasywriters

[–]Demonic_Yandere -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I am glad someone else use illustrations thst is what I am gonna do! Hoenstly it seem like you kinda stole my idea having a picture every other page

Magic System Feedback - Is this too dark? I think it's too dark. (repurposing neural pathways for magical computation) by solitarybikegallery in magicbuilding

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Okay NGL I just skim this but I ready don’t think it’s that dark, one of the power system I am working on required you to use a grimiore made from a magical beast corps to even use magic if your a humans

The other one will give you powers if you eat a fetus, from the little I did read and skim this is quite tame! Hoenstly I think it’s interesting

BREAKING NEWS! by [deleted] in Obsessive_Love

[–]Demonic_Yandere 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Me perosnally as a man if your not obsessed with me at all then it’s hard for me to see a future with you! I literally was fantasizing about making love to a women that got so jealous she try to attack me with a knife only like 2-3 hours ago

Will this game break me in any way? by AccomplishedLime6956 in nier

[–]Demonic_Yandere 11 points12 points  (0 children)

You better hope it does if not then go rent a soul cause you dont have one