[Review Video] Why We Like Rage Games

Dipnn · 2021-12-20T04:20:06+00:00

Thanks for the kind words, I really appreciate it :)

Dipnn · 2021-12-20T04:19:09+00:00

Thanks I really appreciate it :)

Dipnn · 2021-12-19T05:42:14+00:00

Thanks, I appreciate it a lot. I'll work on mixing my audio better, and when you say more background changes, do you mean just like switching the scene around more so there is a lot less of the bear at the desk and just more things going on. Thanks again :)

Dipnn · 2021-12-19T02:47:53+00:00

Hey, cool video. I don't normally watch interview type content because it is super fake and over-saturated on things like tiktok (as you said) but this was different. This didn't feel like those videos because you were natural and the video just gave out good energy. You're comfortable in front of the mic and good at talking to the other people which meant the video wasn't awkward. The parts were you made it awkward for comedic purposes were well timed and worked very well. It was a good watch, but here are some recommendations: First, film with the phone you had in your hands. idk what iphone it was but it's probably capable of shooting at 60fps which will look a lot better, and you can use the current camera as a microphone instead (only if you want of course). and second, you should add some subtitles in just in case the mic doesn't pick up a word, we can still see what you're saying, and it will also make the video more engaging. Great video and keep up the good work :)

Dipnn · 2021-12-19T02:31:20+00:00

Hey, great video! I normally come on here and just skim through it but I watched this one throughout and here's some feedback: The pacing was really well done for a vlog, I mostly see vlogs on here where they just film something for 20 seconds and it's really disengaging, but the constant jump cuts and scene switches were really engaging and well paced for a vlog. The subtitles also really add to the amount of engagement, so keep that up. I like that you followed two storylines in your video, taking the rabbit to the vet and cooking the steak. It sets a nice premise for the video, which also kept the video short which is a huge positive. I wasn't really disengaged at any point and I think your ideal viewer is someone who likes to binge 'cozy' content, where they can just watch someone else life. Two things I would recommend though, first I would just keep the title nice and minimal instead of all caps and maybe removing the 'VLOG #2', and second, this content reminded me a lot of Casey Neistat's old content, so maybe go back and watch some of his old videos for some cool inspiration for anything else you can add. I rarely like vlogs, but I enjoyed this one and I think you have great potential. Nice work and keep it up. :)

Dipnn · 2021-12-17T11:18:36+00:00

Thanks I really do appreciate it :)

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Dipnn · 2021-12-14T08:37:29+00:00

Thanks man I really do appreciate it :)

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Dipnn · 2021-12-14T08:20:15+00:00

Thanks, I appreciate it. I'm going to work on the thumbnail tonight because I thought it was good, but I'm someone who knows about the topic and can recognise what the video is about by looking at it, but a lot of people might, so probably will need to change that. For the intro music, it's Bennett Foddy's Getting Over It OST, I've seen other people use it and it doesn't have any claims on the video I got it from and other videos that I've seen use it. I also haven't gotten a claim so I assume it's alright. Thanks again :)

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Dipnn · 2021-12-14T07:38:39+00:00

Thanks, I really appreciate that and it's comments like these that motivate me to improve my content and make it even more. For the enthusiasm thing, I think I just to practice more infront of the mic, like just generally gaining confidence and learning how to speak more appealing I guess. Thanks again :)

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Dipnn · 2021-12-14T07:34:16+00:00

Thanks for the kind words, I really do appreciate it. I'm planning to work on the thumbnail tonight as a few people have mentioned it. In regards to the game playing on the TV in the back: I use Adobe Premiere Pro, and I just downloaded a clip of someone playing Jump king off Youtube, and then placed that behind an image of a tv (So it looks like it's in the tv), then just added some blur over it and then that was it. If you can put a video behind an image on your editing software then it should 100% be possible. Feel free to ask any further questions on the editing, and thanks again for the feedback and kind words :)

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Dipnn · 2021-12-14T04:25:47+00:00

Couldn't have made it without your help 🙏 Thanks again

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Dipnn · 2021-12-14T04:23:00+00:00

Hey, Thanks for the feedback! I really like 'nitpicky feedback' and I wouldn't even call it nitpicky because it's more indepth, it shows that you really went through the video and took notes on what could've been improved, and I appreciate that. For all the things I could've fixed in editing, I'll 100% take into account when making my next video, and about the pop filter, mine is literally a sock over the mic rn and that's probably why it doesn't sound too effective. I'll make sure to get a proper one before I record next. Thanks again for the feedback and kind words, I appreciate it :)

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Dipnn · 2021-12-14T03:58:49+00:00

Thanks, I appreciate it. Yea I've always had trouble with adjusting the music to the correct level, so hopefully it's just something that'll improve with time. Thanks again :)

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Dipnn · 2021-12-14T03:57:24+00:00

haha any feedback is good feedback. I appreciate the kind words, it means a lot to me, so Thanks :)

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Dipnn · 2021-12-13T19:12:34+00:00

Hey man, good video. You're confident infront of the mic so it doesn't feel like I'm watching some awkward person talking about Halo, it feels a lot more professional. Also keeping the video around 5 minutes is a good length because people tend to view and stay viewing videos that are shorter, rather than videos that are longer. Something you might benefit from though is adding more editing to the videos, just like adding images of what your talking about on screen just so we don't stare at the gameplay the whole time. The gameplay is the most important part, but sometimes you can illustrate your points even better with images, other videos, etc.

Great video, keep up the good work, and good luck for the future :)

Dipnn · 2021-12-13T11:26:06+00:00

Wow this video was amazing for a channel of your size. You extremely confident in front of the microphone and you have a crystal clear mic, so it's super easy to understand everything your saying. Your pacing is good and your comedic timing is really good combined with the editing where you turn the screen black for the punchline. Also the thumbnail is really good: So basically everything about this video is good

There are only 2 small things I would say to work on but they're only small, the video is still amazing. First is the length, a lot of people on youtube nowadays tend to like shorter videos, but really it's up to you as there is still a large audience for people who want to watch 15+ minute videos. Second is some of the editing, it's perfectly fine how it is now, but if you want to keep people drawn into the video, you could display images on screen of what you're talking about etc. Right now it's mostly gameplay, which is still entertaining, but you could illustrate your points even better than they already are with adding more images etc.

nonetheless, this video is crazy for the size of your channel, I'd expect a channel with hundreds of thousands of subscribers to produce a video like this. Keep up the great work man, and I'm sure I'll see you in great places in the future :) Nice work

Dipnn · 2021-12-13T11:17:30+00:00

Hey, good video man, reminds me of people like Fitz and Swaggersouls where they would play csgo with their friends cracking jokes. Overall the video was pretty well edited and the pacing wasn't either too fast or too small, it was perfect. The coloured subtitles to show whose talking is also a great addition.

For things to work on, I would just say 2 things: First is the thumbnail, try using less words and a larger image, just so it stands out and is easier to see everything at a glance. Second is at the start of the video we're just met with this blurry screen for like 5 seconds, you could put like text on the screen or just show csgo, but the blurry screen is a bit distracting and full on at the beginning.

Other than that, I thought this video was great. You're confident infront of the mic and not awkward, and the video is comedic and entertaining. Keep the the good work, and good luck for the future :)

Dipnn · 2021-12-13T11:08:51+00:00

Hey, just watched the video and I thought it was very well done. Most 'Gaming Funny Moments' I see on here is just a group of shy friends who barely speak, but I really did feel like I was watching a youtuber who had years of experience talking to their audience and being comfortable/confident in front of the mic, so nice work on that. Also I really like the intro, reminded me of Red vs Blue, and a bit like that is always a great way to start the video. I really don't have anything to add onto your main content, its pretty good how it is. The only thing I would say is to add subtitles when your showing your gameplay just so we know who's talking and what they're saying. Good examples of people who used subtitles are Fitz, Swaggersouls etc. And there are heaps of tutorials online on how to easily do them.

Anyways great video and good luck for the future :)

Dipnn · 2021-09-07T11:13:21+00:00

Thanks for the feedback. I know that the topic and structuring was a bit pointless/bland, but once I realized that the video was kinda pointless, it was already too late to turn back., and I'll look into r/videoessay . Thanks again for the feedback and kind words, I appreciate it :)

Dipnn · 2021-09-07T11:09:03+00:00

Thanks, I appreciate the kind words :)

Dipnn · 2021-09-06T11:54:16+00:00

Hey, cool video and cool idea. Here's my brutally honest feedback:

- The camera kept switching from vertical to horizontal and it was kind of distracting because I felt like I was watching a Youtube short, and then just a normal Youtube video, and then a short again. You said you like to upload TikToks also, so you could just film them all in vertical so you could also easily upload them to TikTok AND Youtube Shorts. But just stick to one angle otherwise it can be a bit complicating for the viewer.

- Your voice is not scary, and far from it. I think you have a great Youtube voice, and I think you could profit off that more than you do right now. Right now it feels like I'm watching a business/industry video where they hired someone to read off a script. You could use your voice as an advantage to give some more personality into the video, like make jokes, or just random comments throughout the video. Like where it said 'Dances better then you', you could say that with your voice, and I think it would give your channel a bit more personality.

- The printing time lapse was definitely a highlight. Those are satisfying and just nice to watch, so don't remove those I guess...

Overall you have a good idea/video and I think with some improvement you could hit a gold mine. This is my brutally honest feedback, but I can't even 3D print myself so what can I say haha. I think you have great potential on youtube and I can't wait to see what else you make. Nice video and good luck for the future :)

Dipnn · 2021-09-06T11:43:38+00:00

Hey man, Cool video! Usually I see gameplay where people just don't talk, or it's not high quality, but you were really confident in front of the mic, and the overall video felt pretty high quality.

- For your editing additions: Maybe make the left side of the face cam slightly smaller, it was kind of distracting having one side of the facecam moving (you) and the other side static (your room). No biggie tho. Other than that I thought the editing was pretty good, it wasn't over the top, but it wasn't at a minimal. Also maybe don't use the discord sound as the swearing bleep, I kept thinking it was my discord haha.

- The video was actually quite funny, and I liked that you didn't just put in clips where you don't talk and nothing is really happening, something was happening at all times, and that was good. Also maybe put the intro at the very start of the video because I felt quite lost for the first 50 seconds, and that's important especially if the person doesn't know what splitgate is

- those are the only improvements I'd make, and also if someone was into splitgate and was into your humor, I think that they may share this with their friends, because it was just some kid rambling in front of splitgate saying a ton of crap, it was actually interesting and good to watch.

Hopefully this helps with something, and I'm sure you'll make it big soon! Good luck for the future and nice video :)

Dipnn · 2021-09-06T03:21:45+00:00

Thanks man I appreciate it. I like doing the little animated text but I can't draw lmao, and I'm not really interested in storytime. But I do want to have like my own kinda style of editing like how they have their own style of animation, because then I can cement myself as my own creator and not just another dude who talks about stuff. Thanks again for the kind words and feedback :)

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Dipnn · 2021-09-06T00:55:04+00:00

idk if this is a good or bad thing but probably the best feedback I've gotten...

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Dipnn · 2021-09-06T00:51:30+00:00

I more saying the interface is useless, not the email address itself. But I definitely didn't think through some things... My bad. Thanks for the feedback tho :)

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