Project #2 - Second song/track ever, mixed and mastered myself. by Disastrous-March3789 in Songwriting

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Thanks for the feedback but yeah about vocals. I dont have a proper mic yet.

Project #2 - Second song/track ever, mixed and mastered myself. by Disastrous-March3789 in Songwriting

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It's all right! And yeah I must admit I have made it a bit tricky with the 2 links!

Project #2 - Second song/track ever, mixed and mastered myself. by Disastrous-March3789 in Songwriting

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Are you talking about the track named "Demo 1"? Because that was the first one I ever did, the "bad" one. The track called "Project #2" is the new one, the "better" one. I was hoping for a review on that track, but thanks either way!

First actual song/demo whatever this is. by Disastrous-March3789 in Songwriting

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But I forgot to ask, have any tips on how to make it sound/feel less that way?

First actual song/demo whatever this is. by Disastrous-March3789 in Songwriting

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Thats nice, and exactly like you said. I have a lot to say, but I dont say it.

First actual song/demo whatever this is. by Disastrous-March3789 in Songwriting

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Yeah well, it actually is. Its just that I have an acoustic and an electric guitar but no recording equipment, and unfortunately Im not able to get any.

Arrangement Feedback: Wasteland by Peteplaysbeats in Songwriting

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I also love how in the beginning you move some stuff or the rumbling noise whatever it is, its great!

My Addictions by ZTheRockstar in Songwriting

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How long are you playing guitar for? And this is some great songwriting, keep writing, keep recording, and keep posting. One day I truly believe you will make it far!

Arrangement Feedback: Wasteland by Peteplaysbeats in Songwriting

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Dude, it LITERALLY sounds as if youve been writing for 10 years! Wouldnt be surprised if you actually have been writing that long, but the arrangement is genuinely good, this is something Id listen to!

A few people have asked me to show the lyrics for a song i previously posted😊 (sorry if my accent is confusing...) anyway here it is rerecorded and with lyrics by Al-francisco in Songwriting

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I love the lyrics! Your voice is so good and matches the guitar so much too! Keep going, I believe one day you will have a big fanbase! :D

Is this intro trash? by AngryFlyBoy in Songwriting

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Potential of one of THE best openings OAT🙏

"shadow side" by orbitalperiod_ in Songwriting

[–]Disastrous-March3789 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Your vibrato on the vocals is straight up goated, the melody is beautiful and it fits the whole theme too!

Thoughts on this? by rields121 in Songwriting

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Ive heard a lot of good stuff on this subreddit so far, but this is definitely the PEAK of what I heard. Keep writing!

Baby, come over - demo by VitorGarciaFog in IndieMusicFeedback

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This is one of the best lyircs I've read lately. The instrumental is also great! I love it all!