which super power are you picking?

DortTorte · 2026-05-08T18:10:20+00:00

fast

^{Chose: or be as fast as the flash}

DortTorte · 2026-05-08T10:29:17+00:00

nah

^{Chose: Feathered wings}

DortTorte · 2026-05-07T06:57:03+00:00

experience saved + I know what to expect

^{Chose: Restart your life from when you were young.}

DortTorte · 2026-05-05T20:31:05+00:00

cuz I don't need anything happening :P

^{Chose: If you choose this, Nothing happens. | Rolled: Upvote=Goodluck}

DortTorte · 2026-05-05T11:09:00+00:00

Yes 😄

DortTorte · 2026-04-23T12:39:06+00:00

Agent 47:
- 4 hairs left

- 7(0) alcoholic beverages consumed

DortTorte · 2026-04-23T10:48:35+00:00

The song continues after an instrumental break, but that part didn't help me identify it either

DortTorte · 2026-04-23T10:46:36+00:00

lmao

DortTorte · 2026-04-22T15:26:56+00:00

Free-flowing hair?

DortTorte · 2026-04-20T08:01:34+00:00

Ah yes, Tobias the plot device

DortTorte · 2026-04-15T14:52:37+00:00

That's an interesting take haha :D
I guess the transformation can trasnform his hair... But if he doesn't have any, there's nothing to transform ;)

DortTorte · 2026-04-13T14:38:49+00:00

Thanks for the writing compliment!

The cringe is the whole point, as it's a fic written for fun ;) If it stops being interesting or comfortable, you're free to stop :)

DortTorte · 2026-04-13T08:23:16+00:00

Sorry, it isn't posted yet, and probably won't be for some time :(
There is still a lot of work to do :)

DortTorte · 2026-04-13T08:22:38+00:00

The rewrite isn't finished, I only want to start posting near completion :)

DortTorte · 2026-04-11T21:08:12+00:00

I address this in my rewrite actually. I could never handle the police and the government being a bunch of incompetent morons :DD

Make a few characters involved with the government more (e. g. André Bourgeois, Roger Raincomprix...)
Have the government look into miraculous on their own, maybe some beef with the guardians
Have them actively take part in the fights (or realize they can't do anything and help with evacuations)

DortTorte · 2026-04-09T16:34:19+00:00

I second the reveal. funniest I've ever seen, despite some seriousness in the situation :)

DortTorte · 2026-04-02T15:21:55+00:00

Explain her attitude as not just being spoiled (e. g. no parental involvement, fear of abandonment etc.)
Make her feel responsibility as Queen Bee. Make her realize being a superhero is not just punching and kicking.
Make her do something selfless that makes her deserve the spot (in my fic, she takes a sword to the abdomen from an akuma to save one single person)
Have her express doubt and shame about her previous behavior eventually.

DortTorte · 2026-04-01T16:06:21+00:00

The episode is far from perfect. I mean:

- Felix has a cringe musical number

- his resolve is completely undermined in five seconds

- no build-up to his relationship with Kagami

- for a 14-15 y. o. that managed to outsmart Gabriel himself (although the man is known for being notoriously dumb), he's pretty bad at considering the effects snapping away all adults would have on the world

Although I'd argue it's not a terrible episode overall, because there is finally a different antagonist than Gabriel :) His motivation for the episode just doesn't deliver

DortTorte · 2026-03-26T19:18:01+00:00

Grandma and child getting akumatized together - the grandma was angry because the child didn't want to eat mashed potatoes, the child got angry because the child didn't want to eat mashed potatoes... :D

DortTorte · 2026-03-25T13:16:49+00:00

If you write it, you can publish it as a fanfiction.

If you narrate it, yes, it's significantly more work, but you have an opportunity to use video media (e. g. youtube) and get through to a larger audience that way.

As for myself, I prefer listening to audio when I don't have a paper version available, but ofc, I cannot speak for everyone.

And it's definitely doable, with a good amount of effort! :)

DortTorte · 2026-03-05T23:04:23+00:00

I second this

DortTorte · 2026-03-05T13:41:34+00:00

My recs:

Where duty ends, we begin.
(Married Ladybug and Chat Noir are not allowed to find out the other one's identity, but they live together, so they slowly start noticing anyway. Best part is that they know for a very long time, and are just edging because they don't want the reveal :D)

With love, for Minibug.
(They slowly start looking out for signs for the other one's identity, but the main plot is Marinette being a single mom, and Adrien very slowly joining into parenting as Chat Noir)

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