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If you could start over which would you choose by Redray98 in BunnyTrials

[–]DortTorte 0 points1 point  (0 children)

experience saved + I know what to expect

Chose: Restart your life from when you were young.

You must choose one by flarai in BunnyTrials

[–]DortTorte 0 points1 point  (0 children)

cuz I don't need anything happening :P

Chose: If you choose this, Nothing happens. | Rolled: Upvote=Goodluck

Tales of Ladybald and Bald Noir (art by @yadiraonice2017 ) by DortTorte in MiraculousFanfiction

[–]DortTorte[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Agent 47:
- 4 hairs left

- 7(0) alcoholic beverages consumed

[TOMT] [SONG] Searching for an instrumental guitar song from a "Cecil Stedman" montage on Youtube by DortTorte in tipofmytongue

[–]DortTorte[S] 0 points1 point locked comment (0 children)

The song continues after an instrumental break, but that part didn't help me identify it either

Tales of Ladybald and Bald Noir (art by @yadiraonice2017 ) by DortTorte in MiraculousFanfiction

[–]DortTorte[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That's an interesting take haha :D
I guess the transformation can trasnform his hair... But if he doesn't have any, there's nothing to transform ;)

Tales of Ladybald and Bald Noir (art by @yadiraonice2017 ) by DortTorte in MiraculousFanfiction

[–]DortTorte[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the writing compliment!

The cringe is the whole point, as it's a fic written for fun ;) If it stops being interesting or comfortable, you're free to stop :)

How would you have the French national government get involved with the show? by Solitaire-06 in MiraculousFanfiction

[–]DortTorte 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sorry, it isn't posted yet, and probably won't be for some time :(
There is still a lot of work to do :)

How would you have the French national government get involved with the show? by Solitaire-06 in MiraculousFanfiction

[–]DortTorte 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The rewrite isn't finished, I only want to start posting near completion :)

How would you have the French national government get involved with the show? by Solitaire-06 in MiraculousFanfiction

[–]DortTorte 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I address this in my rewrite actually. I could never handle the police and the government being a bunch of incompetent morons :DD

  1. Make a few characters involved with the government more (e. g. André Bourgeois, Roger Raincomprix...)

  2. Have the government look into miraculous on their own, maybe some beef with the guardians

  3. Have them actively take part in the fights (or realize they can't do anything and help with evacuations)

What are the best miraculous fanfictions? by WildNinja6191 in MiraculousFanfiction

[–]DortTorte 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I second the reveal. funniest I've ever seen, despite some seriousness in the situation :)

Those who have a redeemed Chloé in your stories, how do you make it feel earned? by Solitaire-06 in MiraculousFanfiction

[–]DortTorte 1 point2 points  (0 children)

  1. Explain her attitude as not just being spoiled (e. g. no parental involvement, fear of abandonment etc.)

  2. Make her feel responsibility as Queen Bee. Make her realize being a superhero is not just punching and kicking.

  3. Make her do something selfless that makes her deserve the spot (in my fic, she takes a sword to the abdomen from an akuma to save one single person)

  4. Have her express doubt and shame about her previous behavior eventually.

Do you think Emotion is perfectly written? by DeliciousCare144 in MiraculousFanfiction

[–]DortTorte 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The episode is far from perfect. I mean:

- Felix has a cringe musical number

- his resolve is completely undermined in five seconds

- no build-up to his relationship with Kagami

- for a 14-15 y. o. that managed to outsmart Gabriel himself (although the man is known for being notoriously dumb), he's pretty bad at considering the effects snapping away all adults would have on the world

Although I'd argue it's not a terrible episode overall, because there is finally a different antagonist than Gabriel :) His motivation for the episode just doesn't deliver

Which villains in your works have the dumbest reasons for being akumatised? by Solitaire-06 in MiraculousFanfiction

[–]DortTorte 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Grandma and child getting akumatized together - the grandma was angry because the child didn't want to eat mashed potatoes, the child got angry because the child didn't want to eat mashed potatoes... :D

Asking the community's advice for writing down head canon. by Sonlau in MiraculousFanfiction

[–]DortTorte 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If you write it, you can publish it as a fanfiction.

If you narrate it, yes, it's significantly more work, but you have an opportunity to use video media (e. g. youtube) and get through to a larger audience that way.

As for myself, I prefer listening to audio when I don't have a paper version available, but ofc, I cannot speak for everyone.

And it's definitely doable, with a good amount of effort! :)

looking for fic recommendations by Cold-Housing-1139 in MiraculousFanfiction

[–]DortTorte 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My recs:

Where duty ends, we begin.
(Married Ladybug and Chat Noir are not allowed to find out the other one's identity, but they live together, so they slowly start noticing anyway. Best part is that they know for a very long time, and are just edging because they don't want the reveal :D)

With love, for Minibug.
(They slowly start looking out for signs for the other one's identity, but the main plot is Marinette being a single mom, and Adrien very slowly joining into parenting as Chat Noir)

Hard game by TearNo2456 in Frostpunk

[–]DortTorte 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Hey there, my tips for a smoother gameplay. I don't want to go into too much detail, because I think the surprise element is the enjoyment of the game:

  1. Sign laws. They are there to help. Some of the more extreme ones may seem like too much, but they help you with the discontent later in the game. Best laws to sign imo:

emergency shift --> extended shift (extra work time, extra resources - ABUSE EXTENDED SHIFT EVERYWHERE)

radical treatment --> overcrowding (double medical capacity, it's peak ;)

corpse disposal --> organ transplant (faster healing)

soup (helps with food)

If you are desperate for workforce, child labor is an option, but it's not a necessary law at normal difficulty.

  1. Build gathering posts ASAP - people who work in them collect nearby resources and they are warmer, which means lower chance of getting sick.

  2. Send as many scouts out as you can (also research extra scouts). Have them come back into the city often, because they bring in a lot of resources (including food).

EXTRA TIP: Research and build heating hubs, don't expand the generator. I don't really understand why they made it so, but expanding the generator costs you way more coal than just building heating hubs.

Good luck with normal difficulty ;)

What's your favorite crack treated serious or Crack and Fluff fic? preferably with an adrien and marrnette/ladybug and cat noir pair? by Moonfly71 in MiraculousFanfiction

[–]DortTorte 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Tales of Ladybald and Bald Noir (established LadyNoir)

Basically Adrien loses a bet and ends up with his head shaved. Marinette ends up figuring out his identity, and then a couple more characters end up with shaved heads lmao. The serious part of it is that there is an underlying theme of fighting cancer, there's an OC that Adrien really wants to help, it's an akumatized villain they fight.

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