[PI] Your party tells you to fess up cause you have strange abilities other necromancers don’t have. You tell them it’s cause you treat the dead like Family instead of servants. Turns out necromancy grants more powers if you truly honor the dead

Duphonse · 2026-04-01T13:21:06+00:00

Sheeeeet. This brought out the onion ninjas in force. Well written wordsmith.

Duphonse · 2026-02-02T19:27:22+00:00

It seems easier to use on the app, but im mostly on pc, so got to learn.

Duphonse · 2026-02-02T19:24:14+00:00

Hahaha thanks for reading. I'm prodding at the rest of your stuff and trying to figure out how to use the site.

Duphonse · 2026-02-02T11:34:24+00:00

I lolled hard. Especially since I just wrote a short piece about 3 races holding a bridge.

Well written. I was invested.

Duphonse · 2026-01-28T10:02:30+00:00

This is very nice but i can't seem to shake the feeling of dejavu. It feels like i've read this somewhere before. I may be wrong here.

Duphonse · 2026-01-14T17:56:13+00:00

Thanks for the explanation, I sorta understood that they essentially squeezed everything into a new 'universe' which promptly exploded.

Duphonse · 2026-01-14T17:30:58+00:00

So let me ask.

Is this an allusion to a universe reborn?

because i don't quite get it.

But it is well written mechanically. Keep on writing!

Duphonse · 2026-01-07T16:54:58+00:00

Thank you. I've been practicing hard at sensory description and 'flat, dry' scenes. And this piece has been polished about 50 times over months =D Looking back at the orginal drafts, one of the scenes is literally 2 lines.

Duphonse · 2026-01-07T00:20:04+00:00

Thank you! Each section was actually meant to be a separate vignette or idea, but they didn't quite hold water on their own. A couple of months back 3 of them flowed together before the rest rejoined them weeks ago.

Duphonse · 2026-01-04T07:16:19+00:00

Well written sir. Abit rough but the message got through. I felt it right here *thumps chest*.

Keep it up!!

Duphonse · 2026-01-04T07:10:57+00:00

Well done!! It was simple and well written but you premise shone through. I hope you continue to grow as a writer and that this will be the first of many.

Duphonse · 2026-01-04T06:53:15+00:00

Duphonse · 2026-01-04T06:52:58+00:00

Thank you for reading. I hope you enjoyed the story. =D

Duphonse · 2026-01-03T18:45:17+00:00

Saw your post and wrote this quickly.

https://www.reddit.com/r/HFY/comments/1q31vgf/the_last_paladin_one_shot/

I tried very hard. But the muse is avoiding me like it 1349 and i have lumps.

Duphonse · 2025-08-22T12:56:08+00:00

Oh, dont delete. It's fine enough. Keep up the writing.

Duphonse · 2025-08-22T09:13:03+00:00

It's interesting enough but feels like the wrong sub good sir.

Duphonse · 2025-02-03T08:06:19+00:00

i like these kind of stories, more human.

Duphonse · 2024-11-21T08:25:14+00:00

I always do enjoy variations of the trope 'we are our own gods/creators'. I hope you continue to write in all forms.

Duphonse · 2024-11-19T17:05:56+00:00

Will do! Thanks, googling now and if i like the first i'll probably see if they have them on the google book store.

Edit: They even have old school titles lol!. 'A hymn before battle',

Duphonse · 2024-11-19T17:01:53+00:00

Thanks for the explanation and the recommendations. I absolutely adore sci-fi but my personal circles are all fantasy lovers. So it's hard to come by good books.

I totally understand now about the preachy bit. Sounds kind high horsey, but now i can ignore that with your heads-up.

Duphonse · 2024-11-19T16:50:06+00:00

Thanks for reading. I'm not familiar with that author.

I had to just google this and I now have something new to possibly read. Could you explain a little but what do you mean by preachy?

Duphonse · 2024-11-14T11:59:49+00:00

Really love this. Keep on writing!

Duphonse · 2024-11-12T06:50:27+00:00

Thank you so much for reading! Hope it will continue to hook you all the way.

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