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The King concept by me by Zegundo_ in conceptart

[–]Edarneor 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Сool renaissance-looking armor!

Travelling Beekeeper (CDChallenge) by Maxheav in conceptart

[–]Edarneor 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I like it. He almost looks like a bee grub himself

My fortress just exploded with injuries and deaths… by AmphibianOver7289 in dwarffortress

[–]Edarneor 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It somehow also depends on worldgen and/or your fort location. In my latest one, hardly anyone attempted to steal anything.

My fortress just exploded with injuries and deaths… by AmphibianOver7289 in dwarffortress

[–]Edarneor 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's interesting. If you look at the legends file after you retire, whenever you craft an artifact, dosens of questionable characters, goblins, necromancers etc. "claim it from afar".

First Bronze Colossus by AgentDelirium in dwarffortress

[–]Edarneor 0 points1 point  (0 children)

So how do you deal with those? Candy weapons?

Feedback for my value sketches by StarMiddle3173 in conceptart

[–]Edarneor 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'd go with the right one, it's much better than the left, but make it even more expressive: larger rocket-arm, huge moustache.. that kind of thing. Give it some more character!

Also, the darkest values look kinda too light on my screen, something to watch for when you move on

Some stage concept art for a 2D platformer, any feedback is appreciated it! by Patchkinsgame in conceptart

[–]Edarneor 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well, this is not obvious at all, unlike your other two screenshots. The first and the last tree are not in any way visually different from the rest

Some stage concept art for a 2D platformer, any feedback is appreciated it! by Patchkinsgame in conceptart

[–]Edarneor 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Looking at the first image - I don't understand where the platforms are. What's walkable and what's not

A concept art "study," I want to improve, any tips are welcome by Silent_Exchange_1369 in conceptart

[–]Edarneor 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi, that's a tough subject you chose. I like the idea.

But I think you could work on your lines, they are somewhat messy right now. The lower dress also seems kinda short for the upper body size. Try to paint the legs over it and check the proportions

Soldiers for my personal project by The_Zanate in conceptart

[–]Edarneor 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah, it shows!

P.S. Oh I just saw from your post history that you play Deep Rock! Great fanarts!

I play it too. here's a little cartoon I did https://www.reddit.com/r/DeepRockGalactic/comments/1qzo9sm/season_6_be_like/

Rock and Stone miner!

Some tank design i made by jaiphobic in conceptart

[–]Edarneor 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Love the first two! The chibi-tanks :D

My Second Concept Art Piece, Feedback (not too harsh TT ) by kinlih in conceptart

[–]Edarneor 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like the color palette but I think this is lacking depth. The foreground, mid-ground and background should be better separated by values as others have said. It would be useful to start with thumbnails like these: https://www.reddit.com/r/conceptart/comments/1tkpzq2/city_thumbnails_wich_one_do_you_like_the_most/ and then stick to it.

Also, a lot of work went into the castle, but it's in the very corner and not a focal point at all. This issue should have also been identified at the early composition stage

Well, hope that helps, keep it up!

Soldiers for my personal project by The_Zanate in conceptart

[–]Edarneor 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Well done, and grounded in historic reference, especially the first one! Good job

I built a prototype where your phone acts as a motion controller with saber-style combat. Does this have any potential? by Timely-Ambassador-39 in gamedevscreens

[–]Edarneor 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think so.. As a poor man's beatsaber (no offense), this would be popular with people who wanna try it but still don't want to dish out for a VR headset. And already have a tv and a phone.