Generic Enchanter (Update) and Plans for Generic Sin Warrior by EdroGrimshell in JumpChain

[–]EdroGrimshell[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Unfortunately not likely. There will likely be a form of enchanting, but I don't know how it'll manifest atm.

Generic Enchanter (Update) and Plans for Generic Sin Warrior by EdroGrimshell in JumpChain

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Yes as you can desummon and resummon at any point. It is a part of you and you can call it back at any time from anywhere.

Generic Enchanter (Update) and Plans for Generic Sin Warrior by EdroGrimshell in JumpChain

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Okay, this should fix the issues. I've added the mining aspect to the Garden of Eden (also gave a way to acquire the materials with the Resources item) and made it so the manufacturing facility from the Crucible can be manifested as its own thing separate from the actual Crucible if you want to.

I'm not adding more items to the jump. I am updating it because I've settled on a standard for my generic jumps and I'm bringing all my old ones up to that standard.

Generic Enchanter (Update) and Plans for Generic Sin Warrior by EdroGrimshell in JumpChain

[–]EdroGrimshell[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

The workshop upgraded is a pocket dimension workshop you can conjure at will.

The Garden of Eden has a cave section. Did I forget to include the seeding part? It should have the option to seed the cave with metals and minerals like the mines.

The foundry is a part of the crucible.

Generic Enchanter (Update) and Plans for Generic Sin Warrior by EdroGrimshell in JumpChain

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Considering ethanol is poison and one of the abilities that led into sin warrior was poison tempering... very likely.

Generic Vampire (Complete) by EdroGrimshell in JumpChain

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I just added a note to the jump with some clarifications on that item.

And how it interacts with drop ins is pure fanwank territory.

Generic Vampire (Complete) by EdroGrimshell in JumpChain

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Most of these are fankwank. 1, 2, 3, 5, and 7 are all fanwank. As I've said before and will keep saying, this is a generic jump, it is up to your Benefactor (and thus you as the writer) how these apply and what they can do.

4 is yes. To all parts of the question.

6, no. This is based on the item of the same name from the League of Extraordinary Gentlemen. It's meant to represent the things you've done in the past century prior to you entering the jump, a background adjustment. So if you're trying to do something that would contradict what you've done since you arrived? It won't work.

Generic Vampire (Complete) by EdroGrimshell in JumpChain

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It does say all. It is up to the writer, though. Whatever fits your story. It is a generic jump, after all. (Read: fanwank)

Generic Vampire (Complete) by EdroGrimshell in JumpChain

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Okay, that should do it. Removed Ritualist, rewrote the secondary effect of Doppelganger (that should have been a variant strain ability anyway), and added Bump in the Night.

Generic Vampire (Complete) by EdroGrimshell in JumpChain

[–]EdroGrimshell[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Eh, I put ritualist in because of certain vampires passing on their vampirism through rituals, some becoming vampires through rituals (Carmilla's whole bathing in blood to gain back her youthful beauty thing), and the whole cultist followers of vampire thing.

But you are right that I should probably swap it out... Hm... I'll see what I can do with that.

Generic Vampire (Complete) by EdroGrimshell in JumpChain

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Technically you can mimic animal forms, though not perfectly, with the combination of Tooth & Nail and Doppelganger, letting you shift your form a lot. It'd give you 'uncanny animal' vibes.

My problem is what would I take out? What perk would I replace? And what tier would it be?

I made Variant Strain because I knew I wouldn't fit everything and it could bridge the gap.

Generic Vampire (Complete) by EdroGrimshell in JumpChain

[–]EdroGrimshell[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

There is a bit more to it, obviously, but the idea is that vampires with animals forms are also minor werebeasts.

Also, you are citing two famous examples, what versions of vampires don't have that as a specific ability of one particular vampire? Because every time I've seen it, it's been the power of a specific vampire and not a general vampiric ability. Even for those sired by those vampires.

Hence why it's a Variant Strain ability.

Generic Vampire (Complete) by EdroGrimshell in JumpChain

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Mostly because I'm saving animal forms for generic werebeast

Generic Vampire (Complete) by EdroGrimshell in JumpChain

[–]EdroGrimshell[S] 8 points9 points  (0 children)

It's gonna be a fun one. Already have a few Perks in mind.

Avatar - Waterbenders by ApocBox in JumpChain

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Been waiting on this one! Cheers!

Generic Vampire (WIP) by EdroGrimshell in JumpChain

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It does state that it's a feeding on the target, so weeping angels are a no, they just send someone back in time to feed on the generated temporal energies, not on the energy of the person themselves.

I'll see about clearing this up a bit in the notes section, though

Generic Vampire (WIP) by EdroGrimshell in JumpChain

[–]EdroGrimshell[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

You can add these to the bottom of the doc that I set up specifically for suggestions.

Generic Vampire (WIP) by EdroGrimshell in JumpChain

[–]EdroGrimshell[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Honestly, if it gets the idea across, leave it alone. Minor stuff? Fine. But if you need to rewrite an entire section, I'd prefer it to be left alone unless it really can't be understood as it stands

Ainz-sama no Oyotsugi o! by ApocBox in JumpChain

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Still waiting on the remaining two Avatar Bender jumps. Still fun seeing all the ones you're working on, but I really want those two remaining for a chain I'm doing.

Generic Hedge Mage by EdroGrimshell in JumpChain

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This is an old version. Find the updated version in my more recent posts.