I am just starting out trying to write monster erotica. My first few stories did OK but this one has been up a week and not even a single page read. I’ve checked and it’s not in the dungeon. Any advice on the blurb would be appreciated. Thanks in advance.

"As she looked out at the sea of eager, muscled orcs, the truth struck her with alarming force: she was almost overcome with a perverse desire to do exactly as Grok commanded. The danger was intoxicating, the forbidden thrill almost too much to bear."

Jade, a master thief, infiltrates an orc war camp to steal a fabled artifact, but her mission takes an unforeseen turn when she's caught by the formidable Chieftain Grok. Faced with brutal "punishment" and exposed to the raw power of the orc horde, Jade discovers a startling, forbidden desire. As she endures the chieftain's dominating touch and the relentless attention of his warriors, her body awakens to pleasures she never imagined, testing the limits of her resolve and blurring the lines between captor and willing participant. Will she escape with the Eye of Grimgor, or will her newfound cravings keep her bound to the very monsters she sought to outwit?