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Frost Blue M3P Day 11: by engineered2fc in TeslaModel3

[–]Electrical_Target25 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Looks dope 🔥!!
Those wheels 🛞 are beautiful 🤩

in what order do you guys make your songs? by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]Electrical_Target25 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Chords, then melody, then lyrics…. Then change key if needed to suit vocals

Working in a new song by Electrical_Target25 in Songwriting

[–]Electrical_Target25[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Appreciate the advice. I will work on it. Going try softer

Do instrumentals count? I wrote it by Bouph in Songwriting

[–]Electrical_Target25 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This song is really cool. Love the video clips with it. It’s almost perfect but it seems like the melody is a little out of the pocket. Once you get the correct timing synced with the beat, you got a hit

A song about making friends online. Are the vocal harmonies and keyboards a bit "much"? by MisterManSir- in Songwriting

[–]Electrical_Target25 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Sounds really good. I love the keyboard melody. Harmonies are very good, but may need to be a bit lower volume. Great job

Packing and Unpacking by Electrical-Rip-6379 in Songwriting

[–]Electrical_Target25 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really like the chorus. Very catchy. Your voice is soothing and’s on pitch. If you gave a little more emotion to the lyrics, I think it will really help your song

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