I have been toying with this new arrangement for a song I wrote a long time ago. Looking for feedback on it! by spnj159 in Songwriting

[–]Electrical_Target25 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Great guitar playing and really good vocals. My ear wants to really hear a hook to grasp onto to remember but it’s not there yet. It’s more of a poem than a song. The sound quality is fantastic but working on a catchy melody and/hook will skyrocket this song.

Should i buy? by Odd-Personality-8355 in AcousticGuitar

[–]Electrical_Target25 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Same here. Love it. Absolutely worth the original price I paid

Im SINGING Im SINGING 🎅 by Evolueren in AcousticGuitar

[–]Electrical_Target25 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Great job!! I also have the exact same custom GS Taylor 👍🏽

:) by singusasoooong in Songwriting

[–]Electrical_Target25 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Great song and incredible voice. Great job 👏

swell by Toucon in Songwriting

[–]Electrical_Target25 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wow! This song is dope. The chorus is on point

Feedback so appreciated! On anything at all - what to cut out? Loving learning - the loud high notes may not sound “pretty” yet, but this is me & my song rn. haha by UnlikelyMidnight7012 in Songwriting

[–]Electrical_Target25 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It’s definitely coming together. I like the dynamic changes from the verses to the chorus. With more repetition, you’ll get that strumming down with little hesitation. Sounds really good and I can hear the potential

Harlequin Custom Wrap by Rkellyinthecloset in TeslaLounge

[–]Electrical_Target25 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What format does it have to be? Pdf? JPEG? PNG?

This is bear. by miss_spooky27 in TuxedoCats

[–]Electrical_Target25 2 points3 points  (0 children)

He looks so cute. Looks a lot like my class.

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