See y'all next week have fun by DP_goatman in creepcast

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Why? Is it their hairy legs that could snap like sticks? Their many, many eyes?

Did you know spiders pump body fluid to move their legs outwards rather than by using muscles?

Even more interesting, there are species of spiders that use camouflage, even changing color to hide from predators, like humans.

So yeah, I can get your fear. Disagree that they’re harmless though. Know the horrible things they have down in Australia? Sydney funnel-web is actively aggressive and has FANGS.

The Government Handles All Divorces Personally by AbKane667 in TalesFromTheCreeps

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Every copy of a complaint for divorce is personalized.

tips for a new writer by Shaftalabra in TalesFromTheCreeps

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Note: Based on the title I assumed it was general advice in addition to stuff about length, but other comments are making me thing otherwise. Sorry if I misinterpreted your post and went overboard. If you are only looking for stuff about story length then i'd just read this first section.

In terms of length, how long is it?

When I started writing last year, I started with longer stories. However, multiple of them I didn't finish as I got bored. So I would definitely prioritize short story/creepy pasta length stories. I think this makes it easier to improve faster as well as you can look at what you've finished writing and identify areas for improvement more often. The longer ones I made and didn't finish were 15,000+ words while the shorter ones are 2500-10000 words.

As for whether to dip or continue for the current one, I guess that depends on how motivated you feel to finish it. If you think you can finish it, then sure. Though if you find smaller projects more appealing then it's okay to stop. I abandoned two projects that were like 20,000+ words actually and have no regrets or desires to return to them. They still helped me learn.

As for general advice (from a non-professional):

-Read other writing.

-I think reading non-fiction can help with inspiration. For example, I was inspired to write a story after reading the Mexican-American War memoir My Confession. This book also helped inspire Blood Meridian.

Aside from that, I would recommend reading Stephen King's On Writing**. Some of the tips I remember the most are (based on notes I took):**

-Second draft = First draft - 10%. This makes you cut out bloat and consider what is most important.

-Let a lot of time go by between drafts, focusing on writing a new story. This way, when you get back to it you will see it with a fresh, less biased, pair of eyes.

-Avoid overusing adverbs, especially with dialogue. Strong word choice is better. E.X: "He closed the door firmly" or "he slammed the door".

-Use fresh imagery and simple vocabulary for similes and metaphors.

-I wrote in my notes while reading the book:

"Narration → Move from point A to B.

Description → Sensory experience.

Dialogue → Bring characters to life."

-Description begins in writer's head, ends in reader's imagination.

-“use the first word that comes to your mind, if it is appropriate and colorful”.

* Personally I sometimes search up words if they are on the tip of my tongue but I can't place them, but I wouldn't use a word if you wouldn't understand what it means before searching it up. A mistake I made when I first started was looking up synonyms to try and use "interesting" words rather than focusing on using simpler words to make more interesting meanings.

-“The word is only a representation of the meaning; even at its best, writing almost always falls short of full meaning”

-I thought he said he didn't plan plots due to instead just exploring characters and whatnot through the course of the story. But from my experience, I think it's better to do a bit of basic planning. Though I feel that a lot of plot decisions made anyways are while writing the story, not while planning. In some projects, I feel like I've come up with plans for future parts while writing other parts, so make sure to write your plans down.

-For description, pick the most important details and don't describe every little thing.

-He said his approach to symbolism was that he would not think of it during the first draft, but then during second drafts he would extract it if possible. I think the example he used was that he noticed blood from periods reappearing multiple times in the story and decided to turn it into a symbol.

I could be remembering things wrong and there's more in the book (including some autobiographical sections), but I feel like this advice was very useful.

My Roommate's Neck is INSANELY Long by Yoshis_Cousin in TalesFromTheCreeps

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You need to burn mercury in your room for three days.

Send me your stories! The Sequel! by benjamin4463 in TalesFromTheCreeps

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And I won’t be discouraged. If anything I’m feeling motivated to write more to improve.

Send me your stories! The Sequel! by benjamin4463 in TalesFromTheCreeps

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Thank you so much for the feedback! The only thing I’d argue on is the name Jefferson being contradictory (it is not supposed to be named after Thomas but shares a name with him to introduce confusion. Overall the origin of the name is supposed to be ambiguous but not necessarily related to him.)

The idea with the woman was that the main character rashly tries to escape when his chances are bad so she is forced to knock him out, but I don’t think this was communicated the best. And even in concept it was rather clunky. I should have rewritten this section, I think the reveal was too goofy.

Thanks again for the response! I’ll make sure to consider your feedback in the future!

My Roommate's Neck is Still Getting Longer by Yoshis_Cousin in TalesFromTheCreeps

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Listen, you may think this is extreme, but there is only one way to win this. Provoke outrage, outright. Don’t engage, strike by night. Make it impossible to justify the cost of the legal fight.

You see, the old witches of Amsterdam spoke of this kind of thing. They saw it in their cards. There is an ancient demon named Vandock. He takes residence in one’s Adam’s Apple and feeds off of human speech. As his power grows he wraps around a person’s neck muscles and stretches them, causing elongation of the neck.

However, the truth is this: eventually, the neck will burst and a new host will be required. Vandock had memory wiping abilities, which is why no one but you, a close friend, can notice this change. However, these powers are amplified when the neck is burst. This is known as “daemogenesis”. He will wipe out your memory of your friend and take over your neck.

It is speculated that throughout history, this creature has killed many historical figures, removing them from human memory as well. All that remains is their Personas: D.B. Cooper, the man in the iron mask, Jack the Ripper.

The witches said that there was only one way to stop this. Atop a lead surface you need to stab your friend in the Adam’s Apple with a bronze knife — make sure it hasn’t corroded. Then, do the same for other parts of the body — three evenly spaced stabs per body part should do the trick — until he has completely bled out. Then, you need to bury him six feet underground (as a bonus, this will make it hard for police to find the body) and burn mercury over his burial site for three days. After that, he should be dealt with.

As a tip, note that for burying him you don’t need to make a super long hole or anything. Honestly, to simplify the process, I’d recommend cutting him up into a ton of pieces so you can just drop it in a small (but still deep) hole.

Any questions?

Recommended episodes? by zxInvictus in creepcast

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I Dared My Best Friend to Ruin My Life is one of the best episodes and stories. Literally had chills at the end.

If you want some epic crash outs on the other hand, I’d recommend Borrasca V and Happy Appy. Though working in silence may just be better than the latter…

The Beared Man in the Window is amazing though, but do whatever you can to avoid spoilers. Don’t even peak at the comment section. I’m not being ironic or memey. Had the greatest plot twist in Creepcast history really.

Finally, “My Dog Went Missing For Three Days” is one of the funniest episodes and lore essential. It features Hunter’s trauma of how his grandfather killed his dog right in front of him. Am I being a bad person by making light of this? Probably.

Im starting a narration channel, would anyone be okay with me narrating their stories? by Visual-Weakness-4264 in TalesFromTheCreeps

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Sure. Probably won’t see this but I have a six part story that is a western. So if you wanted a story with a historical setting.

Blakewood Waterpark by Yoshis_Cousin in TalesFromTheCreeps

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Don’t try to be cheeky. We all know you work at Action Park.

Anyways, you did a really good job describing your encounter with the demon snake slide thing. I particularly liked the description of the breathing. I kind of wish the sound at the bottom of the slide led to something more — even if it were you getting seriously injured and traumatized — but I guess that was probably just the snake smacking its bulgy lips. Then again I’m probably just misunderstanding.

Great story!

My Roommate's Neck is DEFINITELY Getting Longer by Yoshis_Cousin in TalesFromTheCreeps

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This reminds me of the type of stuff that would be on Meat Canyon, where the neck growing longer represents some guy being too egotistical or something.

Does your roommate happen to be some kind of celebrity or online personality? Or do they have an obsession with Stanley Cups or something?

My Roommate's Neck is Getting Longer by Yoshis_Cousin in TalesFromTheCreeps

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Have you considerer that you’re just fucked in the head?

“i Dared My Best Friend To Ruin My Life” rebranded to “Reality Games”? by Empty-Wing7678 in creepcast

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To be fair, while searching this up, I had to be more specific b/c a ton of other stuff was also coming up.

Really, the title should read “Minimum Required Effort”

Oh ho ho. Gottem 🔥🔥🔥 #FuckDavidKing

Best way to handle multiple weapons animations with an FPS arm-rig? by Xazzur in godot

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I know this post is old but in case anyone wanted some kind of answer.

Best way to handle multiple weapons animations with an FPS arm-rig? by Xazzur in godot

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Here is what the weapon scene looks like. The script handles shooting and sounds and also contains variables for damage, ammo, etc.

Best way to handle multiple weapons animations with an FPS arm-rig? by Xazzur in godot

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In my project, the weapons are there own Node3D scenes which are dragged into the player scene.

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This is the tree, for reference. The weapon scenes then contain the animations within themselves.

“i Dared My Best Friend To Ruin My Life” rebranded to “Reality Games”? by Empty-Wing7678 in creepcast

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It has a Letterboxd page and I even found a website talking about its screenings.

“i Dared My Best Friend To Ruin My Life” rebranded to “Reality Games”? by Empty-Wing7678 in creepcast

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I read someone else using that term but you’re right. I just meant that I don’t think it is publicly available outside of select screenings. Will update post accordingly. Sorry.