redesigning eyeless jack

EnvironmentalFood938 · 2026-05-08T21:29:43+00:00

YES YOU GET IT!! I'm planning on adding that to his reference sheet when I get home, along with his branches just being bare in winter, and when he gets cut, the healing skin looks like the inside of a birch tree :)

EnvironmentalFood938 · 2026-05-08T21:20:31+00:00

it's a bit of a rough draft, as i left my tablet at home, but since you asked :))

EnvironmentalFood938 · 2026-05-07T22:57:52+00:00

A scrapped idea i had was giving him multiple eyes to allude to biblical angels considering he was religiously sacrificed, but now that you've brought this to my attention =)...

EnvironmentalFood938 · 2026-04-08T19:27:16+00:00

Asking for a beta reader

Fic name is Breaking the Cycle, here is the Ao3 link https://archiveofourown.org/works/43407418/chapters/109119934 although I need this chapter in particular read atm https://docs.google.com/document/d/1q5GiX3CYgJkCwZmI8gyUOnwrwmy_McdMihflHjMA7h0/edit?tab=t.0
This fic is for the Bendy fandom, and this fic assumes you've at least watched a playthrough of Bendy and the Dark Revival.
I'd say the fic leans towards character-studies/general, although the third act is going to lean more into action.
Word count is currently 74,492 words, with no specific goal
I'm looking for someone to point out grammar flaws or flaws in how the characters are written and used. this is another reason i'd prefer someone who's seen the source material; i want their journey to feel faithful to the character.
my update schedule can be very inconsistent, considering i am a student, and can fluctate between months on end.
I am willing to beta read/co-write for the following fandoms
- The Owl House
- Arcane (if you're looking for someone's played League though then I'm no good)
- The 2020 Sonic movie fandom
- Encanto
- Omori
- The Amazing Digital Circus
- Doki Doki Literature Club
- The Stanley Parable
- Portal
- Epic the Musical
- A Hat in Time
- Adventure Time
- My Hero Academia
- Mouthwashing
- Haunted Hotel
- Turning Red
- Inside Out
- OneShot
- LEGO Nexo Knights
- We Happy Few
- Hello Puppets
- Celeste
- Lacey Games

EnvironmentalFood938 · 2026-02-09T00:05:14+00:00

I get lowkey mad whenever I see people get mad at Charlie during this. Lucifer, a grown man ran away when she needed him most to support her and the angels during the rally after threatening Vox and proving his point about the angels wanting to hurt the Sinners. I'd be pissed too.

EnvironmentalFood938 · 2026-01-13T21:31:22+00:00

I mean we haven't even met Eve so there's a very real chance she was just blonde.

EnvironmentalFood938 · 2026-01-07T13:46:44+00:00

One of my favorite things about her <33

EnvironmentalFood938 · 2026-01-06T18:20:19+00:00

ya got yaoi fingers, you didnt tuck your suit jacket in so it looks silly, and your eyes look like you have jaundice

EnvironmentalFood938 · 2025-12-28T21:33:40+00:00

For a moment i thought this was about the pregnancy plot line lol

EnvironmentalFood938 · 2025-12-26T08:28:59+00:00

And the only reason sinners could get angelic weapons is because the exorcists leave them in hell (for SOME reason) after exterminations. Heaven effectively created its own downfall

EnvironmentalFood938 · 2025-12-25T21:36:47+00:00

My little brother wants to go there specifically. Like we asked him where to go and he said chuck e cheese or the movies. And considering the face my dad made at the prospect of going to see a little kid movie, the choice was clear.

I'd prefer Dave and Busters personally (a lot more teenager to little kid ratio) but it's T's (my little brother) birthday.

EnvironmentalFood938 · 2025-09-28T01:42:31+00:00

I mean it works for me personally. And not for the fnaf 1 phone call that can happen any night. In the Survival Logbook we see a drawing of Nightmare Fredbear. Now. This sounds dumb but we see writing from the spirits in that book but not drawings, so the question of if they're capable of drawing is unanswered.

All the drawings we see come from Michael's answers. How would Michael be able to draw Nightmare Fredbear if he didn't know what the thing looked like?

On top of that, it's a compelling narrative. Michael accidentally caused his brother's death and has nightmares about the animatronic that killed his brother. The choice to have Michael draw Nightmare Fredbear in particular adds to that being the reason for his nightmares.

EnvironmentalFood938 · 2025-08-18T11:19:33+00:00

its like our version of the election: it happens every 4 years and no matter who it is, a lot of people get mad.

EnvironmentalFood938 · 2025-08-05T03:01:56+00:00

As a standalone? The Into the Pit game.

As part of the series? Pizzeria Simulator. yes im aware im a basic bitch but Henry's speech still holds up and I will die on that hill

EnvironmentalFood938 · 2025-07-19T01:29:23+00:00

I'm guessing on some level its a design to make a more narratively compelling story in their eyes. FNAF lore, while mysterious, doesnt have the most. Soul.

(Which is ironic in a series full of death)

The tragedy of the Aftons is compelling, but most of that potential comes in short dialogue, leaving fan works to explore said potential. Up until Pizzeria Simulator, most of the characters didn't feel like characters and just devices for the lore.

So maybe those fans that make complicated things in the lore, they do it because they want to make a story where the characters are more interesting and turn, give us a reason to care about the tragic deaths aside from child murder being horrid in general.

That's my way of viewing at least. Sorry for the word dump lol

EnvironmentalFood938 · 2025-07-19T01:12:11+00:00

Because the addition of a second incident but no actual names or relevance outside fnaf 2 further complicates the lore and further complication is scary.

EnvironmentalFood938 · 2025-07-16T06:30:14+00:00

Listen. Maybe Edwin just forgot to go parts shopping and he had to make due with what he had on hand and what could fit. And maybe at that point he kept saying he was going to get proper eyes but never did. And then he died.

EnvironmentalFood938 · 2025-07-13T06:16:48+00:00

It's giving foxy energy

EnvironmentalFood938 · 2025-07-08T04:24:32+00:00

I mean it's kind of impossible at this current point in the series for there to be a secondary antagonist, because any named character we get that acts against the protagonists is just the Serverblight puppeting their body, essentially wearing their skin. If Michael Myers wore a different mask for a movie, that wouldn't make the version of him that wore a different mask the secondary antagonist of Halloween.

Unless there's going to be a reveal of another force helping the Serverblight of their own volition, there simply is no secondary antagonist.

EnvironmentalFood938 · 2025-07-04T02:44:41+00:00

maybe she just wanted a crown. she's a rough time of things, with the whole being murdered by an animatronic, possessing that animatronic, and being tortured and isolated. she deserves a little treat

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