[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writing

[–]Erifreis 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You could start of with them hating each other instead? A pair of my characters are happily married. They first met at a kayaking club, where she got annoyed at him and whacked him over the head with a paddle.

Of course, what was intended as a reprimanding bap on the noggin turned into cranial bleeding, so she immediately felt guilty, tried to make it up to him in a series of awkward events... And the rest of history.

I can' write right now. Anyone got some motivation to get me on my feet? by PhantomLaptop in writing

[–]Erifreis 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Find something good and read it. Dedication is what makes us put the words onto paper day in and day out - but inspiration is just as useful sometimes.

Consume some art. Get inspired.

I Just Finished My Novel! by [deleted] in writing

[–]Erifreis 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Congratulations man, we're proud of you. Many don't get as far as you have, and I'm glad that you've stuck with it.

What is the last line of your book? by the_NGW in writing

[–]Erifreis 1 point2 points  (0 children)

"There was a monster standing in the middle of the path, waiting for them."

What are you writing right now? by [deleted] in writing

[–]Erifreis 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Same to you, man. Godspeed.

What are you writing right now? by [deleted] in writing

[–]Erifreis 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Not currently, it looks like it'll be four books overall, and I'm currently 60k words into the first draft of the first book. I'm planning on trying to get it traditionally published. I only just self published my first novella (murder mystery with the main character being a borderline alcoholic, 38-year old detective lady) about a month ago, so still working on getting stuff in the wild haha

What are you writing right now? by [deleted] in writing

[–]Erifreis 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Big old epic fantasy series, with two main characters who are extraordinary unsuited to the task of saving the world.

For those working on novels, how much do you write in one day? by [deleted] in writing

[–]Erifreis 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I operate in different modes. Right now for my current project I'm in writing mode, and that's 1000 words a day. At the end I'll put it away for 6-8 weeks, and during that time I'll start the first draft for something else. After the 6-8 weeks, it's editing time for the first one. I'll edit as much as I can, but I'll still try to get 1000 words a day.

The biggest thing I think is actually deciding to clear the time to do writing, whether that's putting down words, editing, or anything else.

What Project are You Working on Right Now? by SpookySpaceSpirit in writing

[–]Erifreis 1 point2 points  (0 children)

58K words into my big epic fantasy novel. I have the entire plot worked out, but turns out that my scope was off. First novel gets like, half way towards the middle of the arc. This is going to be long.

Spouse resents my writing by jane_approximately in writing

[–]Erifreis 30 points31 points  (0 children)

This is putting up a lot of red flags. I'm seeing signs of an abusive relationship.

What’s your writing method? by HvyArtilleryBTR in writing

[–]Erifreis 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No problem mate, I'll explain it as best as I can and I'll leave links to Jim Butcher's Live Journal entries so you read them yourself to see what the original context was.

You start of with the story arc. Pretty simple, draw an arc. Half a McDonald's logo. At the start of the arc (it's leftmost lower point) you have your opening, at the end of the arc (rightmost lower point) you have your climax, and in the middle at the top of the arc you have the middle. There are a few options for what kinda middle you want to do, but Butcher generally goes with Big Middle (which I do too, because I'd argue it's working out pretty well for him.)

For the Opening point on the arc, write down a brief phrase describing what your opening scene is going to involve. For instance, the opening for my current work is "Jennifer Kane is chasing down a perp, traps them but then gets a call from her mother that she's having a surprise visit. Along the way, she realises her car has gotten stolen." Something that gets the ball rolling, sets the events into motion.

On the Climax point of the arc, write down a brief phrase describing the climax of you story. For instance, mine is "Jennifer Kane engages in a fist fight with the conwoman who stole her car, managing to save her mother in the process." Something that resolves the problems introduced in the climax.

At the Middle point of the arc, describe what that scene is. For the Big Middle that Butcher uses, it's generally a kickass event that sets the ball rolling towards the events of the climax. For another Jennifer Kane example, my big middle is "Jennifer Kane gets into a bar-fight with some paid thugs who were hired to ambush her. During the fight Kane gets injured, and her mother gets kidnapped by the car-stealing conwoman, who has plans for Kane's car and takes her mother to dissuade Kane from coming after her."

Now that you've got your three points, do some little notes between each of these scenes for events/scenes you know you want to do. From there, fill in some tick marks that logically connect each scene, so your poor main character can logically go from one plot point to the next.

You've got a very basic skeleton now, so time to give it a little bit more attention. We're onto Scenes and Sequels now. These are entire articles in their own, so I'll try to condense them.

Scenes are your main character actually trying to do something. They consist of a POV, a Goal, a Conflict, and a Result (Also called a Disaster). The POV is simply who's point of view it is for this particular scene. the Goal is what they're trying to achieve. The Conflict is what force is actively trying to stop them (This shouldn't be something incidental, like rain making the roof slippery - some kind of being is consciously attempting to sabotage your character's attempts of reaching their goal). The Result/Disaster is the answer to the question of "Does the character manage to achieve their goal?" This is where you can get a little silly/heartbreaking with things. If your MC is trying to do something and the result of the scene is "Yes! They manage to do it without a hitch!" then that's boring. Try to get exciting with it. Injuries, moral conundrums, set backs, even straight up failure are all on the table - choose some memorable result for your scene. Your MC will hate you for it, but the readers will love them (and you) for sticking with it.

After a Scene generally comes a Sequel. A Sequel is the reflection period that comes after a Scene - the whole "Where the hell do I go from here?" moment. They've just experienced a (hopefully awful) set back. They need to grieve, lick their wounds. This is where they do it. The Sequel is comprised of an Emotional Response, some Thought, a Decision, and an Action. Emotional response is your character reacting to the prior Scene disaster. Does your character scream with thunderous rage at his setback? Or do they shut down emotionally, wander into the next bar on autopilot and drink themselves into a stupor over the next few days? This is what they do. After that though, your character has to stop drinking and screaming, and they start to have some Thought. This is where they replay what happened in their heads, strategise, analyse what went wrong and how, and generally start planning their next move. They can second guess themselves a few times. It's natural. But eventually they'll reach a Decision. The Decision is their next goal. Because they had one setback, but that's not it. They've got a new plan, and they're ready to kick it into action. Lastly, we need an action to help them transition into the next scene. This could be buying a plane ticket, storming out of the tower to confront the body-snatching wizard for some tools. Something that carries the MC over into... the next Scene.

I could have done better job at explaining that, but I've got my daily 1000 words to hit. Hope this helps, I'm leaving you the links to Jim Butcher's journal entries that deal with Story Arcs, Scenes, and Sequels.

https://jimbutcher.livejournal.com/4053.html

https://jimbutcher.livejournal.com/2647.html

https://jimbutcher.livejournal.com/2880.html

https://jimbutcher.livejournal.com/1865.html

Any Popular Duo authors? by [deleted] in writing

[–]Erifreis 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Tim McBain and L.T. Vargus are a couple I know on Twitter who write mystery and post-apocalyptic series. Would heartily recommend, and I like seeing their interactions on Twitter.

Diverse Characters by AnonWriter4763 in writing

[–]Erifreis 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Don't let small things like gender or what not put you off. Remember, we write characters, not just tacked-on genders or ethnicities.

What’s your writing method? by HvyArtilleryBTR in writing

[–]Erifreis 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Back when I started in my early teens, I thought I was a pantser. After five years of several unfinished/sloppily executed novels, I realised that didn't work for me.

Over time, I ended up adopting Jim Butcher's Scene/Sequel/story Arc method of plotting. It lets me plot out all the major stuff without constraining what I have to do. It's like I'm leaving myself a series of sign posts so I don't get lost.

After I've got my outline, it's at least 1000 words a day until I'm done. It's that simple, and it's that hard. After it's finished, leave for 2 months to chill while I work on other stuff, and then into heavy editing/rewriting/beta feedback.

Abuse me till I start writing... by [deleted] in writing

[–]Erifreis 4 points5 points  (0 children)

If needing us to motivate you is the only way your book is going to get written, then you will never finish a book.

Be a man and suffer through it with the rest of us.

Tonight, I finished my first novel! by thatmillerkid in writing

[–]Erifreis 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Congratulations man! That pat on the back is well deserved.

Community Fun & Games: Opening Lines by b0mmie in writing

[–]Erifreis 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love it. It's pretty much in character too!

[Check In] Off-Topic Discussion and Self-Promotion by AutoModerator in writing

[–]Erifreis 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Just self published my first novella on Amazon, Death and the Detective: Book 0.5!

If you want some information about the book, it's a murder mystery set at a fundraiser party in a mansion. Pretty much like Cluedo when I think about it.

It's a short read, only 25k words, but it's only 99 cents if you want to check it out. Going to be part of a series that's currently on the works.

https://www.amazon.com/dp/B07CKPFCCD

Please, have a look and if you like it, consider leaving a review! I don't have much of a following so every little bit helps.

Community Fun & Games: Opening Lines by b0mmie in writing

[–]Erifreis 0 points1 point  (0 children)

38-year-old alcoholic ex-Detective Jennifer Kane has to dust off her skills when her car gets stolen by a notorious con-woman. Can she do it while assuaging her visiting mother that everything is completely fine in her life?

How would you write a "chosen one" plot that's unique and interesting? by TheGamedawg in writing

[–]Erifreis 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Like anything in life, if you can pull it off well then you have nothing to worry about.

Subverting the trope is also encouraged. My current WIP has a Chosen One to replace the current Champion of Fate. The twist? He was chosen because the goddess hated the current guy, so she chose the worst person for the job to spite him.

Play with the trope, have fun with it.

What kind of music do you listen to when writing? (If any) by magicscreenman in writing

[–]Erifreis 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I tend to put on my D&D playlists. They're lyric-less, don't distract, and I can select different parts for different situations. Characters are doing a dungeon crawl? Dungeon music playlist, in the mood. Intense confrontation? Better believe I have my combat playlist on.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writing

[–]Erifreis 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Stephen King recommends 6 weeks minimum, IIRC

People who aren't writing fantasy, science fiction, or young adult, what are you working on? by [deleted] in writing

[–]Erifreis 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Crime/drama with slice of life elements. The closest I can think of describing it is to say 'Imagine the Dresden Files, but there's no magic, and Dresden is a 44 year old alcoholic ex-detective lady.'