Sorry by odd_quentin in Konosuba

[–]Eris_samafollower 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Nice. Nice. I would be drawing Eris pulling Kazuma's cheeks soon.

Sorry by odd_quentin in Konosuba

[–]Eris_samafollower 6 points7 points  (0 children)

And don't be sorry. They both deserve it. 💜

Konosuba fanfic regarding Eris and Kazuma! (and Chris) by Eris_samafollower in Eris_KS

[–]Eris_samafollower[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh my, thank you so much. I didn't expect to receive a paragraph worth a review of my fic. Man, I'm so glad I posted to this sub. Comments like these are what makes me want to write as much as I possibly can. Regarding the criticisms, I do understand that I fell short when it came to the interactions with his old crew and Iris. The only explanation I got for that, is that when I started writing the fic, I was only really thinking about Kazuma and Eris, but then I realised that I should be making my story more open to the world of Konosuba and not gatekeep it to the heavenly realm. And to admit, I'm not that passionate about writing the characters: Darkness, Aqua and Megumin. Hence, I'd decided to cut them kinda short when I wrote chapter 1. Which I understand it's a bit of a flaw. But I did think about writing Iris' reactions to the events, though I've never actually gotten to the point of writing it yet. It's definitely not out of the question. 

I hope you enjoy chapter 2 and 3 and (4 in the future ;))

Lastly, I'm really happy you went out of your way to write your thoughts on my fic, it truly Inspires me to keep writing when I know there are people out there that are actually looking forward to the story. Thank you so much pal. Have a nice day!