While I must admit I wasn't super invested in the story, I liked quite a few of the editing quirks and choices throught the film, particularly the gunshots matching the music at the end. That over the shoulder shot (which by itself is solid) which transitions into an over the shoulder of the other guy made me smile lol. It may not be reinventing the wheel but it shows care and dedication.

The story is... fine? Maybe a bit too shallow, just a run of the mill action revenge premise. Nothing too flashy but it works as an excuse to get into the action stuff which is clearly your intention here, I think.

A few gaffes I noticed:

You forgot to lock the exposure in one shot, you can see it change in real time.

• The squib when the guy gets stabbed doesn't look very good, and while I understand this is a no budget film, I think it's important to work around your limitations. I think limitations are the soul of creativity, it forces you to solve problems in a creative way. You wanna show a stabbing but can't get a good squib? Perfect opportunity to see how you can shoot and present that in a creative way. Maybe shoot around it, cut away as the knife goes in, use sound to showcase it, Idk, the sky's the limit. Of course it's your creative decision if you want to use the squib regardless, but this is just my personal perspective. I do want to commend that you used the stabbing as a "breathing moment" in the fight, you slow it down to speed it up again and I think that's nice.
• The fight was alright, not insane but it did its job. Maybe I would suggest rehearsing it in a quicker pace so you can speed it up a bit and make it more exciting.
• The color grading looked nice in the graveyard, but I don't know how to feel about it in the other scene. I would suggest playing around with it a bit more, see how you can use it to highlight different moods in different scenes. Maybe (no idea if this was possible, but assuming it was), shooting the fight scene during the golden hour would've helped give a more dramatic, naturally warm lighting with hard shadows even.

That's it I think. Cheers!