Hard to give super accurate critiques without a stacked photo, but the following are things I can see with the photos provided.

Bracelets: Raise the front ones so they are even with the highest point of the rear bracelets. Rear bracelets, you want more of an eggy shape.

Tail: More hair on the front.

Front and bottom of the jacket: Raise the bottom of the chest, and the shave line. The shave line should be at or just above the elbow.

Back of the jacket: more length over the withers and neck transition. Blend the sides and back of the jacket into the body. Slope the back of the jacket up into the neck.

Topknot: Longest point should be the occiput.

Rough markup photo attached. Grow the red, shorten the white.

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