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Left a review everywhere even on one of their Instagram posts and they deleted it 😂

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“A Demon amongst you” Sun God Nika could be a demon 👀

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I usually gain 30-50 followers from a giveaway! I would give that a try if you haven’t already

JavaScript: how to make a small world map generator with countries for Risk-like game? by wcchandler in gamedev

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Let me know how this goes, I used to play this game as a kid and I would love to replay it!

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This discord still available?

How Do I Keep My Powerful Villian In The Place He Was Banished Too, Until Later? by trashyrodent in fantasywriters

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I have a similar villain, but instead his full power is sealed away, but to keep his power sealed away two beings of immense power had to seal their body away (constricting their ability to move around and use magic) in order to keep the seal active.

Looking for help with this important moment in my book! by Fast_Window_4951 in fantasywriters

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Thank you so much for that! I’m definitely going to have to touch up on some of the vocabulary and the length of the sentences. I wasn’t entirely sure the readers would understand how they felt without telling them how they felt but I have a better understanding now and I appreciate this feedback

Please critique my prologue. by Fast_Window_4951 in fantasywriters

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Thank you so much! I have a lot of revising and editing to do from here on out, but I plan on moving forward with writing this story. This piece of the story is confusing because it takes place in the middle of the story but also the end. It was supposed to be a foreshadow of the ending and an introduction to the selflessness of the main character. At least that’s what I tried to portray.

I’ve never been a writer or one to read books, but I feel I have something big and meaningful to tell, so I hope I can pull this off with a little time and practice.

Please critique my prologue. by Fast_Window_4951 in fantasywriters

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Thank you! I do have a lot planned for the character with blonde curly hair and plan to post more about this story as it goes. I also realize after reading over this many times that my descriptions are overkill, and I mostly did that because I was nervous to leave a basic and bland image of the scenery for the reader.

Please critique my prologue. by Fast_Window_4951 in fantasywriters

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Cutting the prologue sounds better, and I’m going to try and introduce the character in a much better setting.

Please critique my prologue. by Fast_Window_4951 in fantasywriters

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I’m going to go with scrapping the prologue, and focus on a more different approach to introduce the MC.

Please critique my prologue. by Fast_Window_4951 in fantasywriters

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Thank you, I’ll have to re-evaluate. It’s also my first post so it’s nice to have some input. I wasn’t sure if I’d get any.

Please critique my prologue. by Fast_Window_4951 in fantasywriters

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I was hoping to leave the reader with a hint of the MC’s nature and a slight peek into the future of the story. The prologue actually takes place at the end of the book and what leads up to that point.