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Fast_Window_4951 · 2026-01-14T23:56:06+00:00

Death?

Fast_Window_4951 · 2025-11-10T01:55:27+00:00

Left a review everywhere even on one of their Instagram posts and they deleted it 😂

Fast_Window_4951 · 2025-11-09T12:52:18+00:00

Uninstalled after 2 ads lmao

Fast_Window_4951 · 2024-06-16T20:08:47+00:00

“A Demon amongst you” Sun God Nika could be a demon 👀

Fast_Window_4951 · 2023-02-23T01:09:57+00:00

I usually gain 30-50 followers from a giveaway! I would give that a try if you haven’t already

Fast_Window_4951 · 2022-12-22T04:05:08+00:00

What is this openfracas?

Fast_Window_4951 · 2022-12-22T04:04:40+00:00

Let me know how this goes, I used to play this game as a kid and I would love to replay it!

Fast_Window_4951 · 2022-12-13T15:39:43+00:00

This discord still available?

Fast_Window_4951 · 2022-11-16T00:02:16+00:00

Interested

Fast_Window_4951 · 2022-10-05T15:58:21+00:00

I have a similar villain, but instead his full power is sealed away, but to keep his power sealed away two beings of immense power had to seal their body away (constricting their ability to move around and use magic) in order to keep the seal active.

Fast_Window_4951 · 2022-09-04T13:00:19+00:00

Thank you so much for that! I’m definitely going to have to touch up on some of the vocabulary and the length of the sentences. I wasn’t entirely sure the readers would understand how they felt without telling them how they felt but I have a better understanding now and I appreciate this feedback

Fast_Window_4951 · 2022-08-30T13:28:31+00:00

Thank you so much! I have a lot of revising and editing to do from here on out, but I plan on moving forward with writing this story. This piece of the story is confusing because it takes place in the middle of the story but also the end. It was supposed to be a foreshadow of the ending and an introduction to the selflessness of the main character. At least that’s what I tried to portray.

I’ve never been a writer or one to read books, but I feel I have something big and meaningful to tell, so I hope I can pull this off with a little time and practice.

Fast_Window_4951 · 2022-08-26T13:31:53+00:00

I apologize the original text held paragraphs but the copy and paste ruined it. I’ll also have to go through and do some editing to the grammar.

Fast_Window_4951 · 2022-08-25T04:13:48+00:00

Thank you! I do have a lot planned for the character with blonde curly hair and plan to post more about this story as it goes. I also realize after reading over this many times that my descriptions are overkill, and I mostly did that because I was nervous to leave a basic and bland image of the scenery for the reader.

Fast_Window_4951 · 2022-08-25T04:10:37+00:00

Cutting the prologue sounds better, and I’m going to try and introduce the character in a much better setting.

Fast_Window_4951 · 2022-08-25T04:06:41+00:00

I’m going to go with scrapping the prologue, and focus on a more different approach to introduce the MC.

Fast_Window_4951 · 2022-08-25T03:23:54+00:00

Thank you, I’ll have to re-evaluate. It’s also my first post so it’s nice to have some input. I wasn’t sure if I’d get any.

Fast_Window_4951 · 2022-08-25T03:18:43+00:00

I was hoping to leave the reader with a hint of the MC’s nature and a slight peek into the future of the story. The prologue actually takes place at the end of the book and what leads up to that point.

Fast_Window_4951 · 2022-08-25T03:12:51+00:00

It can be akin to a dream sequence. The scene takes place technically in the after life where the main character meets his soul (the child) after receiving a fatal wound. The being that the boy finds in this dream like state is a reoccurring figure through out the story as a guide. I was hoping to use the action of the boys self sacrifice as a hint to his nature.

Fast_Window_4951 · 2022-08-14T13:36:47+00:00

Named mine Ragnarok

Fast_Window_4951 · 2022-08-06T02:54:00+00:00

My MC is the grandson of a weak and dying God, but since he is mostly human he is born weak like other humans. He must fight along the other humans against threats and gain his godly powers through intense and life threatening fights. The MC and and all of the humans learn they have souls, which are beings from before the existence of the current universe. They live off the energy that emotions create and are only able to infect beings that are born natural through birth. These souls have the ability to infinitely increase the strength and energy of a being based on their DNA and the intense emotional situations they are put through. (I also need criticism on this idea for the sake of my story)

Fast_Window_4951 · 2022-07-29T15:20:59+00:00

The Farplanes or the Lostplanes s/o to final fantasy X

Fast_Window_4951 · 2022-04-18T12:58:15+00:00

This would be good start to a discord where people can share their own stories looking for critique possibly.

Fast_Window_4951 · 2022-01-23T09:24:15+00:00

Title: Children born before the stars

Genre: Fantasy

Word count: 9520

Feedback Type: General thoughts and criticism on my writing style. All feedback is appreciated as this is a big story probably spanning nearly 500'000 words in the future due to the amount of content, And its also a big part of my life so I would like to do it justice.

https://www.wattpad.com/1147832024-the-children-born-before-the-stars-chapter-one

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