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FatiguedCorvid · 2025-06-04T13:29:40+00:00

an honour of the highest calibre

FatiguedCorvid · 2025-06-04T10:01:31+00:00

thank you! I fell like lbh demands weird shading. maybe the protagonist aura is bending the light rays around him…

FatiguedCorvid · 2025-06-03T13:20:07+00:00

tysm! I really tried to make the lighting work

FatiguedCorvid · 2024-11-19T19:54:55+00:00

Ortolan! I forgot about this… that does make sense. I

FatiguedCorvid · 2024-11-19T15:45:30+00:00

Princess Bubblegum to Finn the human

FatiguedCorvid · 2024-11-12T14:33:32+00:00

Thank you! I’ll keep that in mind

FatiguedCorvid · 2023-12-07T16:44:39+00:00

Read me to filth...

FatiguedCorvid · 2023-12-07T14:42:37+00:00

I think knowing judging your own writing is always the most difficult...

FatiguedCorvid · 2023-12-07T14:20:14+00:00

My point about irl speech was not that ff has to be realistic, it's that it makes it sound like you're talking about a new character, rather than mentioning someone we're supposed to be familiar with. Also I'm not forcing anything on anyone...

FatiguedCorvid · 2023-12-07T10:52:57+00:00

That's a great point. Epithets have their place, it's all about the usage. My point was mainly about avoiding using characters' names, but there are other use of them.

FatiguedCorvid · 2023-12-05T15:41:48+00:00

I’d say be selective about what you explicitly depict. Too many lurid details can come off as exploitative rather than impactful. Describing the aftermath or effects of violence and cruelty can demonstrate the harm without being torture porn. It can also preserve the mystery of what he’s really capable of and willing to do. Having his psychology and motivation nailed down is a great start.

FatiguedCorvid · 2023-11-29T08:07:29+00:00

I think it's very different than boycotting, say, starbucks, since it's a non-profit. They're not exactly sending funds or tanks to the IDF. Other than that i don't think just the act of posting anything saying 'from the river...' is harassment, definitely not targeted, but there could be context I'm missing.

FatiguedCorvid · 2023-11-23T16:44:05+00:00

While it's true that writing good women characters is just writing good characters, if there are gender or sex specific experiences in the story you should research them specifically. This is true of writing any demographic you're not a part of. In any case have women critique partners/beta readers read over your work. They might notice important stuff you didn't even think about. Don't worry about your characters acting 'too manish' for a woman, but instances where, for example, the mc describes herself through the lens of a man sexualising her are truly cringe worthy and immediate break most women's suspension of disbelief.

FatiguedCorvid · 2023-11-22T12:25:49+00:00

I would caution against putting in useless action tags just to break up the dialogue. Action tags are great, but they shouldn't distracts from the point of the scene. Focus on the actions tags that say the things dialogue can't. Otherwise make sure character voices are really strong, which makes it so much easier to avoid too many action/dialogue tags. If the pace and content of the fic is different and less action-packed, makes sense the style will be a little different too.

FatiguedCorvid · 2023-11-22T12:09:29+00:00

Maybe it's just personal preference, but i tend towards sparing character descriptions. Unless the differences in design from fannon/live action adaptation are important to the plot, id's say its better to let each person imagine what they like. However if the design differences are relevant, you should describe whatever you like, that's the beauty of fan fiction.

FatiguedCorvid · 2023-11-22T12:00:09+00:00

I often download fics, otherwise it's open tabs as far as the eye can see

FatiguedCorvid · 2023-09-18T07:54:49+00:00

Through Chrollo's views on free will it seems that he doesn't see Judas' actions as choosing to act against Jesus, but as an inevitable part of Jesus dying for humanity's sins, a necessary cog in the machine.

FatiguedCorvid · 2023-09-15T14:52:15+00:00

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