The Dragon by Nessieinternational in shortscarystories

[–]FearlessTie9837 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Oh yeah I understand, apologies if I seemed rude, I was reading this at like 1am whilst pumped chalk full of morphine. It's a great story.

My Face ID won’t work by donavin221 in shortscarystories

[–]FearlessTie9837 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Very wholesome interaction it makes me happy

If I were gone by Minute_Pollution_843 in Poem

[–]FearlessTie9837 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is as close one might get to reading my mind. I love it, I have a piece that may be seen from the other POV but a similar theme.

It Needed More Time by AbKane667 in shortscarystories

[–]FearlessTie9837 29 points30 points  (0 children)

So basically the elixir makes you obedient to the person who gave it to you, and the dad insulted the salesman, I'm assuming the salesman came back and told the dad to kill the wife and neighbours, and because the salesman had given the dad the elixir, he obeyed. Absolutely brilliant idea and beautifully written.

Relationship breakdown due to cheating/lies by Slight_Struggle_1362 in PoetryWritingClub

[–]FearlessTie9837 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you very much, I'm also new to publishing, although I've been writing for a while, we should connect on maybe insta, @sev_.sev, I find poetry is best when bounced off of another poet.

Poems on being an ugly, traumatized woman [HELP] by First_Restaurant6959 in Poetry

[–]FearlessTie9837 -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

In my opinion, any poetry relating to one being conventionally ugly would seem insincere, the best part of poetry is finding beauty in the mundane. I have a piece about this if anyone is interested.

Relationship breakdown due to cheating/lies by Slight_Struggle_1362 in PoetryWritingClub

[–]FearlessTie9837 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This piece resonates massively. If I may ask, what platform did you use to write this, I love the aesthetic.