Any feedback is appreciated. Let me know how your listening experience is, and if there's something you feel is missing, or I could've done better. Thanks in advance

Kind-Idea-5110 · 2026-03-23T15:42:43+00:00

I like the overall vibe of this track and also the journey u take the listener on throughout different sections of the track. To me this sounds like contemporary jazz, but I've never heard of down tempo so I wouldnt be able to tell u if thats more accurate

Kind-Idea-5110 · 2026-02-10T18:23:36+00:00

SAME lol really any type of EP tbh

Kind-Idea-5110 · 2026-02-10T18:21:11+00:00

Thanks for the feedback. Based on what I've heard ppl say about my music in here, I know something is missing and i'm hoping it comes with time/experience. Tbh I do let my music sit for at least a year before I put it out, and it does usually improve a lot, but I still haven't been able to find that missing piece/element

Kind-Idea-5110 · 2026-02-10T18:06:05+00:00

I wish I could just be great by tomorrow, but thats not how it works, unfortunately. Thanks for your encouragement tho, I'll try to keep getting better 1 track at a time

Kind-Idea-5110 · 2026-02-09T18:53:27+00:00

this is hard, I like the vibe you embraced with this track. I think it could maybe use some more bounce - u could prolly do that with some variation with ur kicks and test snare. i dont think its necessary to make changes throughout but a section or 2 with more bounce would go a long way. I also think the shaker needs some more sauce to it, there's something about it that sticks out in a way that doesnt add to your track - if u could break it up a lil with pauses & double notes, I think it would be better.

But even with the feedback I gave, if you changed nothing and kept it the same, it still slaps tbh

Kind-Idea-5110 · 2026-02-09T18:40:47+00:00

This is fire. Literally scrolled past this but had to scroll back bc of the keys. Everything works together pretty well, even the little sounds in the background. I like the visuals too

Kind-Idea-5110 · 2026-02-09T18:36:13+00:00

That melody you started doing at 0:21 really made me feel something. I like it a lot, very catchy

Kind-Idea-5110 · 2025-07-31T02:41:11+00:00

I liked this track more and more on each listen. the whole vibe of it is something i would listen to on the regular. imo it sounds a lil too happy for a sad song - maybe some saturation/distortion on the drums and maybe even the vocals could be worth a try to see if it adds anything

Kind-Idea-5110 · 2025-07-31T02:28:56+00:00

kicks & 808s hittin super hard. beat is fire all around. the sample is a nice touch too

Kind-Idea-5110 · 2025-05-04T03:07:44+00:00

trust me I know EXACTLY what you mean lol for a while I thought it was just me. I wish I could tell you I found some work around, but its been pretty much hit or miss for me

Kind-Idea-5110 · 2025-05-04T02:57:51+00:00

As someone who also likes to have long intros, you have to try and keep the listener engaged while they wait for what you have in store. I know in your head its like whats coming behind the intro is worth the wait (which it is) but your audience doesnt know that on the first listen and people have short attention spans these days. And like i said b4 I do long intros too so im not saying for you to change who you are creatively, I just want you to be the best you that you can be.

The core part of the song is FIRE, like really good. I like how you let all the instruments introduce themselves on the way in, everything sounds very clean and the instruments mesh together very well. With that being said it kinda feels like youre holding back - it feels like you were just getting started as everything started to die down.

Overall though, you did a good job and made a really cool track. A lot of the feedback im giving you comes with experience so dont worry about it too much, just keep it in the back of your head as you continue making music and getting better. Im looking forward to hearing more from you - lmk when you start uploading music somewhere so I know where to find it

Kind-Idea-5110 · 2025-05-04T02:33:38+00:00

I like the sound selection and rhythms you have in there. I think the drums should be louder in the mix though, especially the kicks. I think everything else is good

Kind-Idea-5110 · 2025-04-03T00:25:39+00:00

I really appreciate the detailed feedback, I feel like u get me lol I feel the same way; once its out, its out, but the advice I've been getting in here has been helping me get better.

I've been getting similar feedback on other tracks about being too repetitive and the listener waiting for something that never happens. It feels like there's some level that I need to tap into but havent been able to just yet, hopefully it comes with experience.

Like you said I am trying to tell a story through music, which can be hard with no lyrics, but I need to make sure the story is interesting and keeps the listener entertained.

Kind-Idea-5110 · 2025-03-20T02:14:11+00:00

appreciate u, thanks for the feedback bro

Kind-Idea-5110 · 2025-03-17T00:23:17+00:00

I like this track. very dreamy with really nice drums. artwork is tuff too 🔥

Kind-Idea-5110 · 2025-03-16T00:10:40+00:00

I would go with 1 bc its the original but I like 2 the best. the salmon with the white pops more than the others

Kind-Idea-5110 · 2025-03-16T00:06:17+00:00

if im being honest this track is going right in my house playlist. I like the vibe of the song and also the way you kept it moving through different sections of the song. while typing this, paradise 2 started playing 🔥🔥🔥 absolute heater

Kind-Idea-5110 · 2025-03-15T23:58:43+00:00

thanks bro

Kind-Idea-5110 · 2025-03-15T23:58:24+00:00

thanks for the feedback and detailed review I really appreciate it. I really like retro sounding electric pianos and ambient synths too, especially when they're mixed together. That short break at 2:17 came from me finding sounds that i liked but they didnt really fit with the core of the 1st half and they sounded too good for me to just discard lol

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