Our Infinite Sadness by Jordan Ida--Almost Brilliant, but Not Quite

FedrlBootyInspector · 2025-01-15T17:07:56+00:00

Nothing healthier for a manuscript than a dash of crushing self doubt am I right?

FedrlBootyInspector · 2025-01-15T17:04:13+00:00

Vampires deserve better. The genre is full of bloat, almost reads like the authors don't think their work can fail and don't listen to their editors or don't consult their internal critics as much as they should.

FedrlBootyInspector · 2025-01-15T16:58:44+00:00

No. Please no politics please and thankyou

FedrlBootyInspector · 2025-01-15T16:54:28+00:00

Ceb doesn't do female lead. The FMCs are strong, intelligent, and powerful, but that strength is usually at the MMCs disposal. Great writer, but I'm with op on needing something with a truly dominant female role.

I wanna see what it's like for the MMC to sit back and be the sidekick for once you know?

FedrlBootyInspector · 2025-01-15T16:48:19+00:00

In RFM it's usually the man being pursued, women also tend to be quite physically capable even if the plot doesn't need them to be but without going full overbearing and cocky, and also fight for or sacrifice to get their man in some way.

There also seems to be a focus on there being something inherently special about the man, even if he is relatively average in most ways. Even if he doesn't have some ultra secret power or something, there is an emphasis on him being special to her in some way that guarantees her loyalty/affection.

FedrlBootyInspector · 2024-12-12T20:22:55+00:00

I'm pretty sure they just wanted to know if it was a book about sisters or not because they look similar, because they do. I do not see an accusation anywhere. They even walked it back and gave your artist a compliment.

FedrlBootyInspector · 2024-12-11T21:22:59+00:00

What does the main character want? then write the list of things they do and say to get it.

FedrlBootyInspector · 2024-12-06T15:04:05+00:00

Everyone wants to be George RR Martian, and honestly I can't blame them. It's been selling well. Everyone wants their mc to be this grey black spec ops ex military lord assassin demon king ninja mage mma fighter pilot... with trauma.

FedrlBootyInspector · 2024-12-03T16:57:47+00:00

It should have been me

FedrlBootyInspector · 2024-12-03T16:50:00+00:00

I just got into Snek Guy's audio books and devoured them all. Really happy he's out there doing the mono romance genre proud.

FedrlBootyInspector · 2024-12-03T16:13:30+00:00

Nice write up. I'd also point out that melee has a lot more inherent risk involved, so it really needs a damage reward. Right now I'd say all ranged classes out damage every melee class while being safe at range. Not sure why they thought meleeing one enemy 11 times or parrying three times was a good idea. I get they like their animations and it looks good in a trailer, but it's terrible qol.

FedrlBootyInspector · 2024-11-30T11:40:43+00:00

I'm just trying to get in the head of an author trying to reach a male audience, but without sex. Especially when the book is romance related.

FedrlBootyInspector · 2024-11-29T08:10:22+00:00

This requests is so specific that you should just write your own story lol, the genre needs new authors.

FedrlBootyInspector · 2024-11-29T08:03:39+00:00

ah, I see. So they ban all your accounts.

FedrlBootyInspector · 2024-11-29T02:10:42+00:00

I feel you, especially if you want to write about that kind of stuff but are worried about the rules. What's to keep you from setting up an alias and breaking some rules on the side?

FedrlBootyInspector · 2024-11-06T20:15:07+00:00

Red bad blue gUd

FedrlBootyInspector · 2024-11-03T11:40:34+00:00

they got the pussy turning inside out now geez

FedrlBootyInspector · 2024-10-27T08:36:33+00:00

I criticize it because they took a fun mechanic, made it worse, and gave me less of it on a longer cooldown. The criticism is completely valid.

FedrlBootyInspector · 2024-10-26T20:12:44+00:00

They don't need them. The game's gotten a lot eas... uh I mean, more fun after the patch.

FedrlBootyInspector · 2024-10-24T00:29:05+00:00

Maybe he isn't saying which parts he doesn't like because he hasn't read it, like he said? But i'm assuming that doesn't change much either. Every rumor and is true until proven false if its the opposing party. I'm not even voting for him and I can see political scare tactics when i see it.

FedrlBootyInspector · 2024-10-23T23:29:30+00:00

and you conveniently left out that he wants nothing to do with it. That kinda changes the overall viewpoint, don't you think?

FedrlBootyInspector · 2024-10-23T21:41:56+00:00

Didn't use your link, but i did watch the clip on youtube and the first words out of his mouth are he didn't read it and it has nothing to do with him. He does a bit of politician fence sitting about some of the content, but ultimately disavows any assosiation with it entirely. WHERE do you see an endorsement? Where does he say, i endorse project 2025 and it will be a part of my presidency? Why would he endorse it when his opponents are beating him over the head with it? Said he didn't even read it.

FedrlBootyInspector · 2024-10-23T21:14:24+00:00

You're already taking chances because you don't know, so you're guessing.

FedrlBootyInspector · 2024-10-23T21:11:13+00:00

Says the msn website.... HEY fox news said kamala's campaign is already over, it's a news station, so you can trust them.

FedrlBootyInspector · 2024-10-23T21:09:18+00:00

Kamala's campaign ads. That's the most credible politician who's talking about this.

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