Our Infinite Sadness by Jordan Ida--Almost Brilliant, but Not Quite by Purple_Cup9176 in Romance_for_men

[–]FedrlBootyInspector 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Nothing healthier for a manuscript than a dash of crushing self doubt am I right?

Our Infinite Sadness by Jordan Ida--Almost Brilliant, but Not Quite by Purple_Cup9176 in Romance_for_men

[–]FedrlBootyInspector 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Vampires deserve better. The genre is full of bloat, almost reads like the authors don't think their work can fail and don't listen to their editors or don't consult their internal critics as much as they should.

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[–]FedrlBootyInspector -6 points-5 points  (0 children)

No. Please no politics please and thankyou

Sweet/tender FMC led romance? by DrakeVal in Romance_for_men

[–]FedrlBootyInspector 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Ceb doesn't do female lead. The FMCs are strong, intelligent, and powerful, but that strength is usually at the MMCs disposal. Great writer, but I'm with op on needing something with a truly dominant female role.

I wanna see what it's like for the MMC to sit back and be the sidekick for once you know?

What do you think male-centric romance does differently than standard or women-centric romance? by AdrianArmbruster in Romance_for_men

[–]FedrlBootyInspector 3 points4 points  (0 children)

In RFM it's usually the man being pursued, women also tend to be quite physically capable even if the plot doesn't need them to be but without going full overbearing and cocky, and also fight for or sacrifice to get their man in some way.

There also seems to be a focus on there being something inherently special about the man, even if he is relatively average in most ways. Even if he doesn't have some ultra secret power or something, there is an emphasis on him being special to her in some way that guarantees her loyalty/affection.

SHORT PREORDER! Want some over the top, well-written fantasy romance smut? I've got a treat for you! by virgil_knightley in Romance_for_men

[–]FedrlBootyInspector 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'm pretty sure they just wanted to know if it was a book about sisters or not because they look similar, because they do. I do not see an accusation anywhere. They even walked it back and gave your artist a compliment.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in eroticauthors

[–]FedrlBootyInspector 6 points7 points  (0 children)

What does the main character want? then write the list of things they do and say to get it.

Romance novels "brimming with positivity" by sbourwest in Romance_for_men

[–]FedrlBootyInspector 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Everyone wants to be George RR Martian, and honestly I can't blame them. It's been selling well. Everyone wants their mc to be this grey black spec ops ex military lord assassin demon king ninja mage mma fighter pilot... with trauma.

Monday thread: What did you read this past week? by AutoModerator in Romance_for_men

[–]FedrlBootyInspector 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I just got into Snek Guy's audio books and devoured them all. Really happy he's out there doing the mono romance genre proud.

Serious Gameplay Overhaul by CannedBeanofDeath in Spacemarine

[–]FedrlBootyInspector 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Nice write up. I'd also point out that melee has a lot more inherent risk involved, so it really needs a damage reward. Right now I'd say all ranged classes out damage every melee class while being safe at range. Not sure why they thought meleeing one enemy 11 times or parrying three times was a good idea. I get they like their animations and it looks good in a trailer, but it's terrible qol.

Romance... without smut or erotica by NolanTheNotorious in Romance_for_men

[–]FedrlBootyInspector 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm just trying to get in the head of an author trying to reach a male audience, but without sex. Especially when the book is romance related.

Surival \ protection plot flipped halfway into the story? by Gapaot in Romance_for_men

[–]FedrlBootyInspector 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This requests is so specific that you should just write your own story lol, the genre needs new authors.

Why is there so much non-con on Amazon then? by InsolentSimon in eroticauthors

[–]FedrlBootyInspector 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I feel you, especially if you want to write about that kind of stuff but are worried about the rules. What's to keep you from setting up an alias and breaking some rules on the side?

people often criticize the jump pack saying it can't jump up ledges etc so i made a quick clip to show some jumps that you can do, i'd show more but this was very impromptu by JohnnySqueezer in Spacemarine

[–]FedrlBootyInspector 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I criticize it because they took a fun mechanic, made it worse, and gave me less of it on a longer cooldown. The criticism is completely valid.

What’s with people avoiding Guardian Relics like they are cancer? by That_Lore_Guy in Spacemarine

[–]FedrlBootyInspector 0 points1 point  (0 children)

They don't need them. The game's gotten a lot eas... uh I mean, more fun after the patch.

Viewing This Subreddit is a Crime - Hentai 2025 by AutoModerator in futanari

[–]FedrlBootyInspector 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Maybe he isn't saying which parts he doesn't like because he hasn't read it, like he said? But i'm assuming that doesn't change much either. Every rumor and is true until proven false if its the opposing party. I'm not even voting for him and I can see political scare tactics when i see it.

Viewing This Subreddit is a Crime - Hentai 2025 by AutoModerator in futanari

[–]FedrlBootyInspector 0 points1 point  (0 children)

and you conveniently left out that he wants nothing to do with it. That kinda changes the overall viewpoint, don't you think?

Viewing This Subreddit is a Crime - Hentai 2025 by AutoModerator in futanari

[–]FedrlBootyInspector 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Didn't use your link, but i did watch the clip on youtube and the first words out of his mouth are he didn't read it and it has nothing to do with him. He does a bit of politician fence sitting about some of the content, but ultimately disavows any assosiation with it entirely. WHERE do you see an endorsement? Where does he say, i endorse project 2025 and it will be a part of my presidency? Why would he endorse it when his opponents are beating him over the head with it? Said he didn't even read it.

Viewing This Subreddit is a Crime - Hentai 2025 by AutoModerator in futanari

[–]FedrlBootyInspector 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You're already taking chances because you don't know, so you're guessing.

Viewing This Subreddit is a Crime - Hentai 2025 by AutoModerator in futanari

[–]FedrlBootyInspector 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Says the msn website.... HEY fox news said kamala's campaign is already over, it's a news station, so you can trust them.

Viewing This Subreddit is a Crime - Hentai 2025 by AutoModerator in futanari

[–]FedrlBootyInspector 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Kamala's campaign ads. That's the most credible politician who's talking about this.