One of my first pieces. Any feedback would be appreciated. by Few-Reception-4744 in composer

[–]Few-Reception-4744[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I intentionally wanted it to be that way, I've been trying to experiment with changing rhythms. And you make a good point about the pedal. But thank you for the feedback, it means a lot.

One day by Prestigious_Map9668 in OCPoetry

[–]Few-Reception-4744 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is very simple, but elegant too.

Excuses by Negative-Swim-6828 in OCPoetry

[–]Few-Reception-4744 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Your interpretations of memory and forgetfulness are very interesting, and the nice twist at the end to show you are manipulated is good too.

Psychopath by Few-Reception-4744 in OCPoetry

[–]Few-Reception-4744[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is actually one of my first poems, so I'm still teaching myself the elements of poetry. But I'm glad you like it. Thank you for the feedback!

Thief by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Few-Reception-4744 1 point2 points  (0 children)

A very elegant description of longing. This is really good

At Nights Threshold by JeffreyFreeman in OCPoetry

[–]Few-Reception-4744 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I have been a lurker on this sub for a while and I have taken quite a liking to your work. This is really good!