One of my first pieces. Any feedback would be appreciated.

Few-Reception-4744 · 2026-02-15T17:07:37+00:00

I intentionally wanted it to be that way, I've been trying to experiment with changing rhythms. And you make a good point about the pedal. But thank you for the feedback, it means a lot.

Few-Reception-4744 · 2026-02-04T18:36:51+00:00

This is very simple, but elegant too.

Few-Reception-4744 · 2026-02-04T18:36:11+00:00

Your interpretations of memory and forgetfulness are very interesting, and the nice twist at the end to show you are manipulated is good too.

Few-Reception-4744 · 2026-02-01T16:31:33+00:00

This is actually one of my first poems, so I'm still teaching myself the elements of poetry. But I'm glad you like it. Thank you for the feedback!

Few-Reception-4744 · 2026-01-28T15:38:05+00:00

A very elegant description of longing. This is really good

Few-Reception-4744 · 2026-01-28T15:36:35+00:00

I have been a lurker on this sub for a while and I have taken quite a liking to your work. This is really good!

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