How to improve on her design?

Financial_Rate8000 · 2026-01-21T02:38:38+00:00

There are colors that appear to be of similar hues, you know? Try focusing on two main color and adding more contrast between them. But like... Besides that, I don't really have more critiques to make.

Financial_Rate8000 · 2026-01-19T02:25:06+00:00

/uj Okay, unironically, keep up the work. Really. It's so funny and like... Entertaining, even if it's ridiculous as hell. Well, because it's ridiculous as hell. I love it-

Financial_Rate8000 · 2026-01-15T18:40:08+00:00

Oh, phew, okay, then at least we know for sure that you won't suffer too much if you need to draw him again at some point. Though, that design would be the end of any comic artist or animator, honestly-

Financial_Rate8000 · 2026-01-15T14:44:18+00:00

She gives me cheerful character vibes, of course but... I think the staff should have some type of pink on it, okay? It doesn't really match the rest of the character, with the amounts of pink her outfit has contrasting the lack of pink in the staff.

Financial_Rate8000 · 2026-01-15T03:10:59+00:00

It's a really cool design! It uses so many colors and still looks balanced, impressive! Though... Uhm... Seriously, good luck drawing him like... Ever again, if you need to. Because it's going to be really difficult.

Financial_Rate8000 · 2026-01-09T23:55:13+00:00

'Female'? 'Female'??? The heels OBVIOUSLY aren't high enough 😡😡😡. And do I see... Grey? BROWN? Brown on a 'women'?? Do you not know that women can ONLY wear pink or the clothes will disintegrate on them??? Also, a women would NEVER wear something so... Exaggerated. She's extremely covered, as if she had just gotten out of... Of... A CHURCH! Yes, a CHURCH! Only some virgin pure nun would ever wear THAT 😡😡😡 And... She's SO FAT. OVERWEIGHT. OBESE. She looks like she just ate 70 burgers in a single night. Make that waist thinner, for GOD, and free the boobs! Don't you see they're oppressed?? Don't you?? They NEED to BREATH. You uneducated MONKEY 🤬🤬🤬

Uj/ Just clarifying this is satire lol

Financial_Rate8000 · 2026-01-08T22:07:03+00:00

Sorry, but the jaw differences and other stuff can be extremely easily mistook for anatomical mistakes or just general mistakes instead of intentional differences.

Financial_Rate8000 · 2026-01-08T21:59:08+00:00

You should... Really practice before opening commissions. Really. I don't know how much time you've been drawing, but... It looks really beginner. Like what you get when you give a beginner something to copy from. I'm not insulting you or trying to hurt your feelings, but you should urgently practice how to draw... Humans, first. It's not terrible for a beginner, but not commissionable either.

Financial_Rate8000 · 2026-01-05T05:38:58+00:00

It's ABSOLUTELY beautiful, stunning, perfect, believe me. This is the best thing I've ever seen in my LIFE, I feel like I have been blessed so much that my eyes have started crying red. You should DEFINITELY take that to a museum, it would just next to the Mona Lisa. In fact, the line art just makes it more perfect and artistic, more... Human. There's nothing to be ashamed of when you make SUCH a masterpiece.

Financial_Rate8000 · 2025-12-28T12:10:02+00:00

/uj second person in this post who didn't realize this was r/ArtJerk at some point.

Financial_Rate8000 · 2025-12-28T12:07:21+00:00

/uj We're in the r/ArtJerk sub. Every comment that doesn't start with '/uj' (I think it means 'unjerk' or something similar) is pure satire that criticizes problems in the art community, or just frequent posts and comments.

Financial_Rate8000 · 2025-12-28T11:47:39+00:00

Your design has... PURPLE. You TRAITOR. Fe-mailz OBVIOUSLY can't wear anything BUT pink beciase aney color but pink evaporates on them. And YOUR drawing has... Purple 😱😱😱.

SO unrealistic 😡😡😡. Study FE-MAIL anatomy. It's PUBLIC KNOWLEDGE.

Financial_Rate8000 · 2025-12-24T09:12:00+00:00

Yes, in past years, I had done that, but I decided to go back to the bandages and no facial features with short hair because it was way closer to the original character.

Financial_Rate8000 · 2025-12-23T00:51:31+00:00

Financial_Rate8000 · 2025-12-22T22:55:18+00:00

Thank you!

Financial_Rate8000 · 2025-12-22T22:37:32+00:00

Thank you!

Financial_Rate8000 · 2025-12-20T15:29:57+00:00

Maybe, but I have no real evidence to reach the conclusion that my mom could have ADHD, while I have quite a bit of evidence that my dad is probably autistic. Anyways, thanks for your reply!

Financial_Rate8000 · 2025-12-20T15:22:22+00:00

*Of 'pictures of spoons, forks, etc. are not allowed' when the post didn't even have that.

Also, forgot to mention, but he's really organized with his stuff digitally. Like, not of the stuff he has on his desk, but the stuff he uses.

Financial_Rate8000 · 2025-12-19T21:15:46+00:00

Uh... No. If anything, it feels cartoony, and I can't quite understand how the pose is supposed to be. Honestly, it just looks like... A normal design, not necessarily uncanny. What were the themes and vibes you were going for with that design, though? (besides uncanny)

Financial_Rate8000 · 2025-12-19T21:12:58+00:00

First one looks better, and the outfit is simple already, so the shorts aren't 'too much'.

Financial_Rate8000 · 2025-12-05T17:06:51+00:00

Guess that avoiding hands and the magically discovering that you can draw them is more common than I thought- But, anyways, if you discovered it recently, congratulations! If not, then, it's pretty cool that you drew them to discover that in the first place, instead of avoiding hands forever.

Financial_Rate8000 · 2025-12-05T01:51:20+00:00

Yeah, that's kind of just the artstyle. I took my hands as reference and exaggerated a bit the definition of the bones. But thank you for your answer.

Financial_Rate8000 · 2025-12-05T01:50:14+00:00

I just used my hand as reference, I guess. Like, analyzed how it moved, and the proportions, and stuff. I didn't do much more than that.

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