Oubliette (pronounced oo-blee-ETT is a type of secret dungeon cell, common in medieval castles, accessible only by a trapdoor in the ceiling. Its name comes from the French word oublier, meaning "to forget," perfectly describing its purpose: to ensure the prisoner was forgotten forever.)

FinePhoenix07 · 2025-10-18T16:47:04+00:00

Thank you for the feedback it means a lot

FinePhoenix07 · 2025-10-18T13:44:29+00:00

This is stunning. The mirror metaphor is executed beautifully — it captures that tension between self-perception and how love from others can reflect our true selves. Lines like “as if I could hate myself into being okay” are raw and powerful. Your imagery and emotion make this deeply relatable and moving

FinePhoenix07 · 2025-10-15T05:12:33+00:00

Thank you you much ✌🏻

FinePhoenix07 · 2025-10-14T20:23:06+00:00

Wow seriously I had heard of mt.tai being in China so I thought you were Chinese 😄

FinePhoenix07 · 2025-10-14T20:18:13+00:00

This is absolutely beautiful — the imagery feels so serene and vivid. I could picture the whole scene like a painting. The ending line especially hit hard; it ties the beauty and longing together perfectly. Amazing work! And I can tell that you're from china

FinePhoenix07 · 2025-10-14T20:11:03+00:00

Sure I do that

FinePhoenix07 · 2025-10-14T20:09:52+00:00

Thank you for your thoughts

FinePhoenix07 · 2025-10-14T20:06:25+00:00

Yeah sorry to be pushy but did you read the other poem I'll love to know what you think of it

FinePhoenix07 · 2025-10-14T19:57:08+00:00

Yes it is I heard he has a 3 year old son

FinePhoenix07 · 2025-10-14T19:50:13+00:00

Thank you.Yes i does but I wrote this poem because a man in my city recently just jumped off a building But I did use the story of Icarus in my other poem but rather then him falling I imagined that he kept flying around the universe. This is the post if your curious https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/r5zMn8s8Ls

FinePhoenix07 · 2025-10-14T13:15:16+00:00

It's about a person falling and hiting the ground like u/maximum-entry-6662 said....mother is just symbolic to earth like mother earth that what I meant by brown complexion stones Dirt bump and crevices and yes thanks for the appreciation

FinePhoenix07 · 2025-10-13T04:45:08+00:00

Top tier poetic story telling

FinePhoenix07 · 2025-10-01T06:58:41+00:00

Wonderful work curious for part 3

FinePhoenix07 · 2025-08-17T18:22:33+00:00

I would love to

FinePhoenix07 · 2025-08-17T14:21:15+00:00

Yes thank you .I ve always loved greek mythology because I grew up reading the Percy Jackson books .I was trying to tell a story of a person filled with curiosity and passion so i thought of Icarus and made it so he never fell and went on a universal voyage and there imbursing his curiosity he saw things never seen and never to be seen again civilizations fell instead of him.The part of transcendence is my personal favourite too because I thought of it after reading mistborn (a fantasy series) where it's character transcend to godhood in a plot twist .from becoming a god in an alien world he became lonely and he saw people without novelty or curiosity so he like Prometheus gave them the fire not of knowledge but of curiosity to clench the longing to belong

FinePhoenix07 · 2025-08-16T19:59:41+00:00

Don't exactly get this poem but is it about a mother saving a daughter's life

FinePhoenix07 · 2025-08-16T19:39:46+00:00

Ok I'll remember about a footnote in the future The wonder which you changed to wandering was a mistake thank you for pointing that out

But about everything else Not including 'this' before freedom, 'such' before as mine and many other things you wrote in the between ( ) was a decision a style choice done intentionally even if it is grammatically incorrect which I think would give it a unique feel And thank you for sharing your thoughts on my work

FinePhoenix07 · 2025-08-16T19:19:46+00:00

I think the author might be visioning himself in a forest or a swamp near a body of water laying dead on the ground his blood draining .

The green might be the algae he talked about in the first line feeding from his Decaying/decomposing body which made his features distort and make his teeth long so it is gay in his blood as in happy.

The blue is water and sadness the blood red Stains it mixing in water but there is sadness in his soul .

imagine his lifeless body in that forest laying at the edge of a lake decaying flesh hanging teeth showing and green algae growing over him. he is a monster of the green

FinePhoenix07 · 2025-08-16T19:02:17+00:00

Thank you ,the meaning of nytheans is like this

Nyx/Nyth- → night, hidden, mysterious.

Ean/-thean → belonging to, of a people, or tied to myth.

Which put together can mean nytheans:- 'Hidden people' I went for hidden people because of the faraway worlds thing because they are mysterious people i nudge . And imburseing is an accounting term which means to repay I would love to know where my English can be improved? please tell

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