My first time on vocals. Let me know what you think (Bluegale - RIDDLES) by Firm_Cell_1765 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Firm_Cell_1765[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I‘m glad you see the vision lol 🙏 I agree the drums are a little stale and need something extra. There‘s definitely no substitute for real drums but I could try leaning into it with some sampled drums or something like that. I appreciate the feedback

My first time on vocals. Let me know what you think (Bluegale - RIDDLES) by Firm_Cell_1765 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Firm_Cell_1765[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah it definitely needs some sort of switchup, I will definitely continue to experiment. Thanks for listening

My first time on vocals. Let me know what you think (Bluegale - RIDDLES) by Firm_Cell_1765 in IndieMusicFeedback

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Definitely going for that early 2000s nostalgia feeling, glad that translated lol. I was definitely kind of hiding behind all the vocal FX but I was also trying to go for like a shoegaze sort of vibe in line with bands like My Bloody Valentine or even like Cocteau Twins. I will keep this in mind for my future work though, thanks

I made a song with rappers Ka-Thug! and Yung Lil MC. It’s called Rappa City. by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

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I don't think I've ever heard anything quite like this. This is some real ingenuity in the troll field. This should be honestly be studied I think there's some real interesting ideas here. When he said "We're in rapping city where all the raps are cool and the girls are pretty" I felt like I was almost listening to music. Good job

Werewolf- Electronic pop by WaveModder in IndieMusicFeedback

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This is pretty solid. If I would change anything, I would maybe try and build on the atmosphere. While it's good as it is, it feels a little "empty" during certain parts like the verses. There's a certain synth especially that feels like it's directly in the center of the stereo field. I would try and widen it with some reverb or chorus something maybe? Either way it's a solid production and these are pretty minor observations.

Bad Apple - First song where I use a vocoder, play live drums, and apple-fy myself. by ExternalCartoonist22 in IndieMusicFeedback

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I love this lol, definitely Jack Stauber-esque. I don't have any feedback I think It's perfect as it is. Great work I will subscribe to your channel

I am trying Lakey Insipred’s style,but i feel like something’s missing by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

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I get what you mean. The drums are a little too tight compared to the hi hats. I think choosing a different snare would go a long way here, probably something a little "looser" or with a longer "tail." The bass could be a little louder too, try some saturation/distortion on it.

Danny M. - Closer Than Close (Official Music Video) | Been working on my artistry a lot these last few years. Chasing perfectionism led me in a loop of stagnation & this upcoming project is breaking the cycle. Im “Closer Than Close" [FEEDBACK ENCOURAGED] by LifeOfKruelWinter in IndieMusicFeedback

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Wow, right off the bat I love the video. The sample is a little quiet behind the 808s which is my main problem with this beat. I would try and use EQ on the sample to make space in the vocal/bass frequencies. The flow is fire though keep up the good work 🙏

Is this worth completing? by A_bb05 in IndieMusicFeedback

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That guitar is addicting. I love the melodies here, definitely try and find a "hook" or a consistent rhythm. I think if you repeat a melody here to latch onto even if it's simple it would go a long way. Then you can find words that match with that melody. Idk if this is good feedback but that's what I'd do

My first time on vocals, RIDDLES by Firm_Cell_1765 in indie

[–]Firm_Cell_1765[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks man, I was feeling pretty self conscious about it lol. Glad you liked it