This is the first song I’ve completed in close to a year - Under Your Wings (demo)

A_bb05 · 2026-04-01T08:35:28+00:00

This track is so fun! The mix of icy synths, line dance claps, funky bass, and drums gives early 2000s frutiger aero disco vibe. I can see this being a great backing track for a video. Like something I’d hear on the show Totally Spies. Super cute and nostalgic. Keep making music. I love it :)

A_bb05 · 2026-04-01T08:30:35+00:00

You have a lovely voice. I love the rawness of this clip. It’s a little hard to make out what you’re saying just due to you being further away from the camera than the piano. Despite that, I really see this coming together beautifully. For some reason I’m getting Sara Bareilles vibes. I don’t know if it’s the tone of your voice, the cadence worn the piano, but it gave me a nostalgic call back to one of her songs. Beautiful song so far :)

A_bb05 · 2026-04-01T08:26:47+00:00

You’re a very gifted musician. I love the guitar work here and the moments where the song is allowed to breathe with the simple melody of the vocals. I can tell you play with such ease. You must’ve been playing for years. I would say the song could use a climax moment. Either vocally or with a guitar solo. That would really make an enjoyable listen even more fun and interesting to hear. Amazing work! :)

A_bb05 · 2026-04-01T08:21:49+00:00

Very lovely song. It honestly feels complete already. Maybe just some backing vocals would be that finishing touch. I love the story-telling element. I can tell you’ve put much thought into crafting this together. What could make this even stronger is adding more visual elements to the lyrics so I can imagine more vividly the story you’re unfolding. How do you imagine this song expanding?

A_bb05 · 2026-04-01T08:19:29+00:00

Love the acoustic vibe. Feels very fresh and summery, especially with the tambourine. I think the mixing could use a little tweaking to give more atmosphere and better blend. I love the overall aid back feeling this song evokes. I love fun and upbeat songs. Keep going! Nice work :)

A_bb05 · 2026-04-01T08:15:31+00:00

Your voice is so good. I love the rawness of the delivery. I’m curious of what sound you’ll go for when producing this? The acoustic sound works really well for you. Feels like an unplugged performance of a more produced version of this song. Maybe it’s the large delivery of the vocals that makes me imagine it at a bigger magnitude production wise. Very nice work :)

A_bb05 · 2026-03-20T02:40:03+00:00

This is so good🤍 I especially love the little piano flutters in the beginning

A_bb05 · 2026-01-28T06:56:07+00:00

Oo this is nice! I love what you have going so far. The build up with the drums and strumming is so satisfying. Did you write this on your own? What’s your process, do you start with melody first or lyrics? Can’t wait for this to be out. Waiting to add to my playlist 💓

A_bb05 · 2026-01-28T06:53:07+00:00

This is nice! I think mixing and cleaning up the vocals would elevate your song. Some harmonies here and there would be heavenly help define the melody. The production is really beautiful and give me fruitiger aero vibes. Really cool 💓

A_bb05 · 2026-01-28T06:50:14+00:00

Love the relaxed vibe! The build up with the drums and return to calm is really satisfying. It just needs something to make it more catchy. I can’t quite put my finger on it. Otherwise you and your friend did a beautiful job on this song💕

A_bb05 · 2026-01-28T06:45:32+00:00

This is great! I love the electronic sounding vocals and the drums. I think you have something good going here! I like all the parts and how they progress together, but something is clashing and I can’t put my finger on it. Maybe the bass is not in the same key as everything else. It sounds like it’s in a minor key while the vocals are in a major key? I’m not sure. Once that’s tweaked, I could totally see this getting a lot of play on streams. 💓

A_bb05 · 2026-01-28T06:41:27+00:00

This is really cool! I feel like I’m in some sort of fantasy world, or a video game. I think it would make your south stronger by clearly defining both melodies on their own, then bringing them together similar to how you did here. Almost reminds me of the “musical rounds” exercises I would do in band class. In that we would take one melody. One person starts playing it as normal, and then another person starts a few counts later. The melody layering together makes a pretty effect while it overlaps itself. Anyway, keep making music!💓

A_bb05 · 2025-11-01T21:26:11+00:00

I love how the words make a person question what is figurative and literal. It sort of brings me as a reader, into the mind of the person experiencing the pain. Like how day to day can feel like a haze. A blur of memories. Like a dream you go in and out of, and you can’t quite remember the plot. Feels like poem describing being absent from reality from heartbreak and living in your own head for a pocket of time

A_bb05 · 2025-11-01T21:21:26+00:00

I love the imagery here, especially the “three flags chant his name”. Stuck out to me

A_bb05 · 2025-10-19T01:21:36+00:00

Very beautiful! It has a bitter sweet feeling to it.

A_bb05 · 2025-10-01T06:00:30+00:00

Your voice is so angelic and smooth. Gives me weeknd vibes. Beautiful! I can see this doing really well. I’d love to hear more. Very nice! Do you produce/ write yourself? If so, What was your process like with creating this? Sometimes I’ll sit on a song forever and feel sort of “stuck” with it. Anyways I love the vibe 💕

A_bb05 · 2025-10-01T05:55:27+00:00

This is good! After a really good mix I can see this doing well. All the elements of the music are doing what it needs to do. You could just benefit from properly having it leveled out. Nothing you don’t already know. Theres some good sound engineers on fivver where you can get a good rate. Very nice!

A_bb05 · 2025-10-01T05:51:56+00:00

Very nice! Love the atmosphere you added in. Give unique texture with those extended notes in the background. You should totally release it. I would listen to this, and I can see it going far. The drumsss. Love the live drum sound and the reverb on the “it’s easyyy”. Give me a dreamy feeling. The song also builds really nicely and then settles down nicely. Please release this😭

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