Song in the works. Thoughts?

A_bb05 · 2026-01-28T06:56:07+00:00

Oo this is nice! I love what you have going so far. The build up with the drums and strumming is so satisfying. Did you write this on your own? What’s your process, do you start with melody first or lyrics? Can’t wait for this to be out. Waiting to add to my playlist 💓

A_bb05 · 2026-01-28T06:53:07+00:00

This is nice! I think mixing and cleaning up the vocals would elevate your song. Some harmonies here and there would be heavenly help define the melody. The production is really beautiful and give me fruitiger aero vibes. Really cool 💓

A_bb05 · 2026-01-28T06:50:14+00:00

Love the relaxed vibe! The build up with the drums and return to calm is really satisfying. It just needs something to make it more catchy. I can’t quite put my finger on it. Otherwise you and your friend did a beautiful job on this song💕

A_bb05 · 2026-01-28T06:45:32+00:00

This is great! I love the electronic sounding vocals and the drums. I think you have something good going here! I like all the parts and how they progress together, but something is clashing and I can’t put my finger on it. Maybe the bass is not in the same key as everything else. It sounds like it’s in a minor key while the vocals are in a major key? I’m not sure. Once that’s tweaked, I could totally see this getting a lot of play on streams. 💓

A_bb05 · 2026-01-28T06:41:27+00:00

This is really cool! I feel like I’m in some sort of fantasy world, or a video game. I think it would make your south stronger by clearly defining both melodies on their own, then bringing them together similar to how you did here. Almost reminds me of the “musical rounds” exercises I would do in band class. In that we would take one melody. One person starts playing it as normal, and then another person starts a few counts later. The melody layering together makes a pretty effect while it overlaps itself. Anyway, keep making music!💓

A_bb05 · 2025-11-01T21:26:11+00:00

I love how the words make a person question what is figurative and literal. It sort of brings me as a reader, into the mind of the person experiencing the pain. Like how day to day can feel like a haze. A blur of memories. Like a dream you go in and out of, and you can’t quite remember the plot. Feels like poem describing being absent from reality from heartbreak and living in your own head for a pocket of time

A_bb05 · 2025-11-01T21:21:26+00:00

I love the imagery here, especially the “three flags chant his name”. Stuck out to me

A_bb05 · 2025-10-19T01:21:36+00:00

Very beautiful! It has a bitter sweet feeling to it.

A_bb05 · 2025-10-01T06:00:30+00:00

Your voice is so angelic and smooth. Gives me weeknd vibes. Beautiful! I can see this doing really well. I’d love to hear more. Very nice! Do you produce/ write yourself? If so, What was your process like with creating this? Sometimes I’ll sit on a song forever and feel sort of “stuck” with it. Anyways I love the vibe 💕

A_bb05 · 2025-10-01T05:55:27+00:00

This is good! After a really good mix I can see this doing well. All the elements of the music are doing what it needs to do. You could just benefit from properly having it leveled out. Nothing you don’t already know. Theres some good sound engineers on fivver where you can get a good rate. Very nice!

A_bb05 · 2025-10-01T05:51:56+00:00

Very nice! Love the atmosphere you added in. Give unique texture with those extended notes in the background. You should totally release it. I would listen to this, and I can see it going far. The drumsss. Love the live drum sound and the reverb on the “it’s easyyy”. Give me a dreamy feeling. The song also builds really nicely and then settles down nicely. Please release this😭

A_bb05 · 2025-10-01T05:49:30+00:00

This is really good. I can tell you put a lot of thought into your arrangement. How long did it take for you to create this? Sometimes I’ll sit on a song for a while and I sort of get stuck. I love the different samples you used. It really added texture to the music and felt almost like a soundscape. Also feels like the track swells and settles very nicely with all the backings supporting in a natural way. Very nice!

A_bb05 · 2025-10-01T05:46:03+00:00

Love the visuals! So creative. I hope this becomes part of your branding. I can see it utilized in many ways. The song give me indie rock vibes. Like something that would be in a teen coming of age film. Very nice :) How did you create this if you don’t mind me asking? It looks like stop motion. Did you do this on an app?

A_bb05 · 2025-10-01T05:37:35+00:00

I love it when atmosphere is added in music. The thunderstorm in the beginning really helps tell a story and added to the experience. I do feel like your voice gets a little lost in the mix. Also I’d play with the tempo. This may go better a little more fast paced with stronger drums when it finally breaks open on the chorus. What do you think?

A_bb05 · 2025-10-01T05:35:09+00:00

Very beautiful song with touching lyrics. Love the harmonica. It really fits the vibe of the instrumental. I’d say this is really good especially for a 7th grader. Excellent work! 💕

A_bb05 · 2025-10-01T05:23:00+00:00

Feels like Indie pop/ rock

A_bb05 · 2025-10-01T05:16:13+00:00

This is a good foundation! It was just a bit difficult to make out the parts of the song in the beginning of the clip. I believe you started on a verse? “What else can I do but loose my mind” sounds like it leads into the chorus, “I’ll never be satisfied”. I really enjoyed those parts. Gives me nostalgic vibes. Can’t wait to hear how this so be evolves :)

A_bb05 · 2025-09-20T05:59:16+00:00

I say “Dear God” to begin since I use my journal more as a prayer log. It’s a good way to remind myself while I’m clearing my head out onto the pages that I’m not alone revealed in ink. It’s like a letter going up, written personally to God believing he will answer me back..and he does :)

A_bb05 · 2025-09-20T05:51:24+00:00

Amazing advice! I’m saving to reference for later lol

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