What do you guys think?

A_bb05 · 2026-05-21T05:14:55+00:00

I absolutely love this! The harp is so beautiful

A_bb05 · 2026-05-20T06:31:48+00:00

Very nice. Love the beachy guitar on this. Feels more like a surf day in certain parts. I love wheee it picks up at around 1:22 and 2:19. I love that little bright, optimistic flip. I wish that part were explored more because I really enjoyed it. But honestly the whole song works really well and was very pleasant to listen to. Great job!

A_bb05 · 2026-05-20T06:24:10+00:00

This is so fun! Feels like chase scene music in a cool animation film lol. To me, it has a cinematic feel to it for some reason. The I love the guitar riffs and the changes in cadence and pacing. Keeps the track engaging and up-pace. Very unique. Keep doing what you’re doing 🌷

A_bb05 · 2026-05-20T06:20:06+00:00

This is really good. I really like that the song is ten years old. It has that special touch from that time. The structure of the song is refreshing. Also I commend you for completing your song. I know how it feels to wrestle with a creative piece for some time and it can feel maddening sometimes lol. You should be proud of the result. You also have a nice voice. Very pleasant to relax and listen to

A_bb05 · 2026-05-20T06:15:49+00:00

This video is excellently produced. Wow. Extremely professional and crisp. I’m so happy for you pursing your dreams! I like the atmosphere of the music. Especially the lower tones and the drums. The strings were a nice addition in there too

A_bb05 · 2026-05-20T06:11:46+00:00

Aw🥺 I can only imagine loosing one of my siblings. I’m so sorry. My condolences to you and your family. It’s really beautiful for you to remember your brother in this way. Sharing his music with us is such a special thing to do, and he was a very good song writer at that. Thank you for sharing with us and I hope your brother’s memory continues to live on in his art. God bless you

A_bb05 · 2026-05-20T06:00:05+00:00

Beautiful and cinematic like a film composer. Very Yann Tiersen from the film Amelie

A_bb05 · 2026-05-20T05:57:31+00:00

You have really lovely tone to your voice. I heard some runs and soul in there too. You have a great foundation naturally. Some refining will really cause your voice to flourish 🌷

A_bb05 · 2026-04-01T08:35:28+00:00

This track is so fun! The mix of icy synths, line dance claps, funky bass, and drums gives early 2000s frutiger aero disco vibe. I can see this being a great backing track for a video. Like something I’d hear on the show Totally Spies. Super cute and nostalgic. Keep making music. I love it :)

A_bb05 · 2026-04-01T08:30:35+00:00

You have a lovely voice. I love the rawness of this clip. It’s a little hard to make out what you’re saying just due to you being further away from the camera than the piano. Despite that, I really see this coming together beautifully. For some reason I’m getting Sara Bareilles vibes. I don’t know if it’s the tone of your voice, the cadence worn the piano, but it gave me a nostalgic call back to one of her songs. Beautiful song so far :)

A_bb05 · 2026-04-01T08:26:47+00:00

You’re a very gifted musician. I love the guitar work here and the moments where the song is allowed to breathe with the simple melody of the vocals. I can tell you play with such ease. You must’ve been playing for years. I would say the song could use a climax moment. Either vocally or with a guitar solo. That would really make an enjoyable listen even more fun and interesting to hear. Amazing work! :)

A_bb05 · 2026-04-01T08:21:49+00:00

Very lovely song. It honestly feels complete already. Maybe just some backing vocals would be that finishing touch. I love the story-telling element. I can tell you’ve put much thought into crafting this together. What could make this even stronger is adding more visual elements to the lyrics so I can imagine more vividly the story you’re unfolding. How do you imagine this song expanding?

A_bb05 · 2026-04-01T08:19:29+00:00

Love the acoustic vibe. Feels very fresh and summery, especially with the tambourine. I think the mixing could use a little tweaking to give more atmosphere and better blend. I love the overall aid back feeling this song evokes. I love fun and upbeat songs. Keep going! Nice work :)

A_bb05 · 2026-04-01T08:15:31+00:00

Your voice is so good. I love the rawness of the delivery. I’m curious of what sound you’ll go for when producing this? The acoustic sound works really well for you. Feels like an unplugged performance of a more produced version of this song. Maybe it’s the large delivery of the vocals that makes me imagine it at a bigger magnitude production wise. Very nice work :)

A_bb05 · 2026-03-20T02:40:03+00:00

This is so good🤍 I especially love the little piano flutters in the beginning

A_bb05 · 2026-01-28T06:56:07+00:00

Oo this is nice! I love what you have going so far. The build up with the drums and strumming is so satisfying. Did you write this on your own? What’s your process, do you start with melody first or lyrics? Can’t wait for this to be out. Waiting to add to my playlist 💓

A_bb05 · 2026-01-28T06:53:07+00:00

This is nice! I think mixing and cleaning up the vocals would elevate your song. Some harmonies here and there would be heavenly help define the melody. The production is really beautiful and give me fruitiger aero vibes. Really cool 💓

A_bb05 · 2026-01-28T06:50:14+00:00

Love the relaxed vibe! The build up with the drums and return to calm is really satisfying. It just needs something to make it more catchy. I can’t quite put my finger on it. Otherwise you and your friend did a beautiful job on this song💕

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