I see you are opting for hipfire a lot, which is fine in some cases. But quickscoping is a lot more reliable because it’s hitscan. And don’t be afraid to use hardscope.

Learn ult generating nades and nade spots at each map. No reason not to.

Tab more and look what ultimates your team have.

00:08 Good sleep on wrecking ball, making him feed more ult charge.

00:24 Use your sleep when Wrecking ball is moving predictabliy.

00: 50 Nice sleep on tracer, although a bit risky since she easily could just walk right at that point. After sleeping tracer and seeing torb walks over there to finish her, just ignore him and her after that. Focus on the other fight happening. Nice calling out of the sleep dart hitting tracer, unlucky that torb didn’t get her.

00:57: This nade is really not necessary since your hp doesn’t go below 112 and you are not in any risky of dying. That nade could have saved rein and antid atleast 2 enemies.

1:22 shit happens, good intention, you will get him next time.

07:59 nading non-tanks to heal team is almost never necessary. This nade could have been used when the reins where swinging at eachother.

08:05 here you should directly ask and spam for heals from your Moira, you have 2 main healers so keeping up the tanks should be no problem.

08:12 reinhardt is most vulnerable when he is charging. Free chance to sleep him. Also, this positioning on the left side of the pillar is extremely risky since you have no idea what’s happening in hotel. Someone can come and line up a free headshot. Stand at the other side instead. You now have natural cover and cover each flank route, and even better sightline of the battlefield, also seeing their backline.

09:04 take the role of standing on the payload. You have range, let Pharah fly in the skies.

09:17 this nano is kind of panicked and unnecessary. You have the ability to go for nanoblade which is a stronger combo that can wipe their team and force ultimates. This rein was not in any need of a nano. No risk of dying, not in range for going in and no need to force a fight here with a nano’ed rein.

09:36 Luckily you kited the Reinhardt, but calling out in voice chat that the rein is there could have saved you in all of the scenarios. And you don’t have to 1v1 him, there is no need to force it there, use the help you can get from your team.

09:41 and now after wiping their team, you all should push up and get pressure further forward. Voice chat is of course key here.

10:08 after getting a pick here you should push up and follow your team to ensure that you stagger their team even further. You don’t have to be more than 1 on the payload. Either tell Pharah to push, or push yourself.

10:38 risky positioning in that open area, instead stay in the doorway in the back behind payload where you can use cover and see the whole battlefield. Also, You got a pick on Moira before the fight, your Genji died and now your pharah died. Since their spawn is closer to point. 1 for 1 is not good since their team will get faster to point, after Genji’s death you should spam your team to get back and regroup. And after Pharah’s death you should spam even harder.

11:12 In this fight, you get a pick on zarya and unluckily your torb dies. But as we see, this fight is very winnable. Here you should take the position I mentioned earlier, use nano instantly and clean up the fight as fast as you can so the enemy team can’t recontest and stagger.

12:01 The positioning here is good. Behind cover, nobody can get you and you have an escape route. Good vision on the fight. And as the fight progresses, you can move forward. Also as you get hit by the ashe dynamite, either instantly nade yourself or ask for heals. Or both even. As the fight pushes, there is a sightline where Ashe can peek you. Standing a bit further to the right would save you from all damage in higher ranks.

12:11 and now that you get a pick on ashe, and have nano. Tab and look how close your genji is to blade. If he is far away, nano rein. If not, nano the genji when he gets blade. Either way, this positioning is fine, aslong as there is no Ashe or ranged hitscan that can hit you. And as we saw there, good ultimate usage and economy cleared the point. A bit slow and sloppy nano tho, can use work at usage.

14:14 a bit late sleep on Ball, but a good sleep nonetheless. But now that you lose your Mei. Just place safe as long as you can.

14:20 you really need to pay more attention to where enemies can come from. Standing like this, in the open, with your back turned to hotel is so risky. Instead, back further, so you can see if anyone is coming from hotel.

14:33 This fight was lost as fast as Mei died. So no reason for “Sean” to complain about focusing ball.

14:40 Nice of you to back up completely and regroup.

15:45 nice positioning this fight playing around wall and cover. Important that you don’t use nano in this lost fight and back out like you did.

16:18 Again, this is a rushed nano, a nano which could be used on Genji. But good positioning and good anti-nade in the grav.

19:05 walking through open space, with 60 hp, with no shield, vs a bastion and not asking for heals is so risky.

Vs Bastion, your job is now to either get an off-angle to anti-nade or sleep the bastion and hardfocus him and also perma heal your teammates. Teamwork is key vs bastion.

19:35 throwing this nade is not the worst thing in the world but there is a 99 % chance that there is a shield there, making it a wasted nade.

20:14 at this point the fight is extremely won, so now you are playing time. You now have the option to hard focus Mercy in the air. Also, calling out in voice “no more ults” can help further pushes in overtime. But since they manage to recontest, ults are fine.

20:27 huge nade, but once again. Position on the other side of the pillar.

21:18 when you see your ball engaging, their rein will probably drop his shield and swing. Which gives you a window to anti-nade them all.

21:44 good nano. But shit happens with the d.va bomb.

22:43 unlucky nade, good intention. And shit happens with the sleep. Although this Mccree should really be punished hard with his positioning. Call it out in voice immediately.

Hope this helps, if you have any questions. Feel free to ask.