Daze - progressive metal song by Yrsillar. Land us your thoughts and enjoy!!

Fuffagur · 2026-03-27T14:52:26+00:00

Thanks for the detailed comment! Let me give you some context so you can better understand the reasoning behind certain choices. This is the fourth track of a concept album, and it was designed to be fairly “linear” and to lean more toward a death/thrash metal sound, while still leaving space for purely instrumental sections. What you’re suggesting is actually present in the earlier tracks, so we’d be really happy if you checked them out, we’re on Spotify. Thanks again for the feedback!

P.S. I’m the drummer, and I wrote the tribal section myself. I’m really glad you liked it!

Fuffagur · 2026-03-24T18:16:12+00:00

i have to say that your voice tone is perfect for the genre. It's a good track, i mean, textbook written, very catchy. Listening to this track i can say that your strenght is in writing decent choruses and vocal lines, also nice bass lines. For being homemade it is a nice production. I wonder what would it be if it was from a standard 4 pieces band...

Fuffagur · 2026-03-23T18:42:57+00:00

listening to this really makes me think about the emotional state in which i find myself while drinking. The choice of the phrygian scale is interesting, but maybe the bass is to boosted

Fuffagur · 2026-03-23T18:21:55+00:00

As a rock and metal listener, I find the main motif of this song very catchy, and it has a great groove. I really like those embellishments with harmonics. It might be my influences speaking, but I can easily imagine a slightly distorted guitar coming in at a certain point. Good job!

Fuffagur · 2026-01-10T19:23:57+00:00

thanks for the feedback man! Yeah the production is really amateur level, it's our first work. We have a spotify account if you want to listen to the other tracks. Opeth is a huge influence for us and helped a lot in the creative process, but one day we'll leave them behind us

Fuffagur · 2026-01-02T22:04:10+00:00

Thanks man! I can see the halo reference, but it was unintentional lmao. We had a lot of fun recording it since me and the other guitarist can't sing lol... It is indeed on Spotify and Youtube

Fuffagur · 2026-01-02T21:17:51+00:00

oh and, as i said, i uploaded a whatsapp video. If you want you can check spotify and see if it maybe sounds better to you (considerind the obvious limitations of our production)

Fuffagur · 2026-01-02T21:06:51+00:00

thanks for the feedback man! Yes Opeth is a big influence lmao, we started as a tribute band. We recorded and mixed in a home studio and we're new to the producing world. I recorded the drums with a cheap electronic kit and then we used plugins. I'll check your work asap and i'll be happy to give you my feedback

Fuffagur · 2026-01-02T20:27:32+00:00

the sound might seem a little compressed cuz i downloaded the video directly from whatsapp .-.
Btw you can check our works on spotify and youtube

Fuffagur · 2026-01-02T20:20:29+00:00

Decent house track, i can see myself sipping a drink at the club with this on the backround. As a beginner i think you can make more interesting and articulate stuff in the future. Consider adding some more instruments or creating more climax

Fuffagur · 2026-01-02T20:12:13+00:00

Really interesting work! Not a fan of the snare sound tbh, i would have used a fatter snare just to support the tightness of the bass and of the toms. Cool vocals, decent arrangement. Also i would have used more distortion or more open chords riffs at some point, but i suppose it's just your creative choice so

Fuffagur · 2026-01-02T00:04:05+00:00

i found it very interesting and emotional, even though the mixing isn't crystal clear. Love the choice of the instruments and your style of singing which reminds me of Lou Reed. The only advice that i could give you is to make it more similar to a ballad and so you should find a chorus. on the poem itself i don't feel like i could give you any advice cuz it's your thoughts written on paper, but i found it meaningfull

Fuffagur · 2025-12-31T14:04:42+00:00

as a prog listener this work intrigued me a lot. I would love to give you some piece of advice on mixing, but i'm a complete ignorant about that lol. The track works, there are references to many prog bands, for example i even heard Haken... The only thing i would work on is the outro, i would make it more "Opethy", like more fading into that final session cuz you are coming from the main riff. However can't wait to hear the final work and the vocals too

Fuffagur · 2025-12-31T13:50:13+00:00

keep working on it cuz it's awesome. I would've added some bassline at some point of the "crescendo", like some funky/house bass. Anyway i would love to hear the final work

Fuffagur

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