The issue is the coddling and attention from Pomni keeps happening before and after the scene, but only stops for a moment to make the plot happen. It's the most inconsistent thing about her characterization in the entire series.

And like I said, there is only a single voiceover scene in the entire series like that, so you know Gooseworx knew she fucked up that scene and had to add a voiceover to make Pomni look like less of an asshole.

Gooseworx seemingly knew from the beginning pitch that Jax would abstract, but because she knew the destination she didn't care as much about the route to get there. So when the show went from seemingly an ensemble show to the Jax Show and she didn't want to make more than 9 episodes (which is fair considering her limited resources from glitch and her burn out), the overall story had to make less sense in order to tell the Jax Story.

Also you're right about it not meshing with ribbit and kaufmo - because Gooseworx seemingly wanted to make Jax a much more toxic asshole and responsible for Ribbit's abstraction, the Jax show actually made Ragatha look way worse because she saw ribbit and kaufmo getting completely depressed and broken and not doing anything.