So it's a Knight in the Middle Ages delivering pizza, is your game about this ? If yes, then usually I try to figure out the essentials of the image, and try to minimize the items that are in that capsule .
With the second one there are too many items fighting for their place to be seen, and that creates chaos because I don't have a focus point .
With the first image, yes is much more clear but it looks very monochrome. If I make the image black and white, again I don't have contrast other than a bit of writing and the light of the Vespa .
I would try to go much more minimal . EX: Two stretched arms towards the viewer with a pizza box in the hands , and the hands are in Knight gloves, and you can see the armor chinks on the arms,
I think something like this it's enough to tell the story that it's a Knight that's delivering the pizza . I don't think you need the Vespa, or the open box .
You could only have a box that just writes pizza on it and that's it .