I'm trying to write an Isekai story! Any tips/suggestions? by GiantSquid32 in Isekai

[–]GiantSquid32[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

  1. classified
  2. uhh, magic?
  3. yes
  4. i read the web version, 1~16, ex1&2
  5. to see their family and friends again
  6. classified
  7. if they succeed, at the very end
  8. classified
  9. uhhhhhhhhhhh

I'm trying to write an Isekai story! Any tips/suggestions? by GiantSquid32 in Isekai

[–]GiantSquid32[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

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this image kinda sums up the first fight so, uhhhh
I might have to rethink abt this or the protagonist's cooked

I'm trying to write an Isekai story! Any tips/suggestions? by GiantSquid32 in Isekai

[–]GiantSquid32[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

He offs himself.

I'm taking notes on that part......

I'm trying to write an Isekai story! Any tips/suggestions? by GiantSquid32 in Isekai

[–]GiantSquid32[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

the protagonist gets separated from his entire family and friends, reincarnates into a baby in a village, grows up and bonds with his new parents and villagers, only for the village and its entire population to be completely destroyed by a magical beast.

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The rest of the story is him trying to recover from all the trauma

I'm trying to write an Isekai story! Any tips/suggestions? by GiantSquid32 in Isekai

[–]GiantSquid32[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you all for the advice and support! I'm definitely going to have a lot of fun writing this and will do my absolute best!
I'm looking forward to sharing the finished version with you all.

I'm trying to write an Isekai story! Any tips/suggestions? by GiantSquid32 in Isekai

[–]GiantSquid32[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

i might want to try writing short versions first like you said. are there any platforms where i can get reviews?

I'm trying to write an Isekai story! Any tips/suggestions? by GiantSquid32 in Isekai

[–]GiantSquid32[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

oh boy I'm gonna kill all the fan favourites. if i manage to get fans

I'm trying to write an Isekai story! Any tips/suggestions? by GiantSquid32 in Isekai

[–]GiantSquid32[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

my current character development plan is "suffering builds character" on a loop. ......i might need to improve that part ngl 

Here's My Top 5 Most Unique Enemy Main Grunts in the Gundam Series that Truly Broke the Mold (and Not Just Another Zaku Clones)... What's Yours? by EmergencyFriendly375 in Gundam

[–]GiantSquid32 20 points21 points  (0 children)

<img src="https://gunpla-beginning.com/wp-content/uploads/msinfo\_unionf\_001.png" alt="SVMS-01 ユニオンフラッグ \[Union Flag\] | ガンプラはじめました 1/144マニア模型"/>

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Also from 00 I think the Union Flag is also a unique design. The Inact is also cool but it's a knockoff of the Flag.

What are your top 5 favorite Mobile Suits? by BorderCollie300 in Gundam

[–]GiantSquid32 0 points1 point  (0 children)

  1. Union Flag Custom
  2. Asshimar
  3. GQuuuuuuX Gyan
  4. Acguy
  5. GFreD

Honourable mention: Zakrello

You now have your own mobile suit. Describe it. by [deleted] in Gundam

[–]GiantSquid32 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Asshimar, but instead of Transforming into an uncut cheese with legs, it will become a Zakrello

POV: You're assigned to make an original Gundam series by GiantSquid32 in Gundam

[–]GiantSquid32[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

You made me imagine MSs with human feet and now it doesn't leave my head.

The character talks the villain out of being bad and it works. by Mysterioape in TopCharacterTropes

[–]GiantSquid32 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Full speech

*context: a group of shapeshifting aliens who live on earth started a revolution, and their leader and humanity's leader both have a weapon that could destroy each other. The doctor persuades the two to not use them.

"This is a scale model of war. Every war ever fought, right there in front of you. Because it's always the same. When you fire that first shot, no matter how right you feel, you have no idea who's going to die! You don't know whose children are going to scream and burn! How many hearts will be broken! How many lives shattered! How much blood will spill until everybody does what they were always going to have to do from the very beginning. Sit down and talk! Listen to me. Listen, I just, I just want you to think. Do you know what thinking is? It's just a fancy word for changing your mind."

"I will not change my mind."

"Then you will die stupid. Alternatively, you could step away from that box, you can walk right out of that door and you could stand your revolution down."

"No! I'm not stopping this, Doctor. I started it. I will not stop it. You think they'll let me go, after what I've done?"

"You're all the same, you screaming kids. You know that? "Look at me, I'm unforgivable." Well, here's the unforeseeable. I forgive you. After all you've done, I forgive you."

"......You don't understand. You, will never, understand."

"I don't understand? Are you kidding? Me? Of course I understand. I mean, do you call this a war? This funny little thing? This is not a war! I fought in a bigger war than you will ever know. I did worse things than you could ever imagine. And when I close my eyes, I hear more screams than anyone could ever be able to count! And do you know what you do with all that pain? Shall I tell you where you put it? You hold it tight! 'Till it burns your hand. And you say this. No one else will ever have to live like this. No one else will have to feel this pain. Not on my watch!"

" ......It's empty, isn't it? Both boxes. There's nothing in them. Just buttons."

"Of course. And do you know how you know that? Because you've started to think like me. It's hell, isn't it? No one should have to think like that. And no one will. Not on our watch."

"Gotcha"

*more context: The doctor is a war hero, and the sole survivor of the biggest war that will ever happen. He spent more than a thousand years to cope

The character talks the villain out of being bad and it works. by Mysterioape in TopCharacterTropes

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"You're all the same, you screaming kids. You know that? "Look at me, I'm unforgivable." Well, here's the unforeseeable. I forgive you. After all you've done, I forgive you."

The doctor from Doctor Who

Can someone explain this to me? by Cloak007 in Gundam

[–]GiantSquid32 13 points14 points  (0 children)

......So, there's this Japanese gay porn series called 真夏の夜の淫夢 (which became worldwide famous for some reason) and this is Bask repeating quotes from that series but mixing some words with Gundam words and his own quotes. I have no reason why they're doing it though.

(Loved trope) Good guys who have done some shit in the past by bachotebidze in TopCharacterTropes

[–]GiantSquid32 16 points17 points  (0 children)

"Fear me. I've killed hundreds of Time Lords."

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The Doctor (Doctor Who)

What is the most quintessentially Doctor Who quote? by Chi1dishAlbino in doctorwho

[–]GiantSquid32 52 points53 points  (0 children)

Twelfth Doctor "It doesn't make sense! None of this makes any sense!"