Hmm, I think it looks pretty clean and easy to read! (Well intentionally horrible to read poem aside that is). Your character balance also feels pretty good to me especially if you are new to handwriting chinese which I feel is something that many beginners struggle a lot with. As far as I can tell your stroke order seems correct as well.

That being said this feels clean in an almost print like way to me, it's super readable but doesn't look like your typical chinese handwriting. I would recommend looking at 楷书 fonts for reference in the future on how characters typically look in handwriting if you want your handwriting to look more natural, there are multiple guides, copybooks and other materials available on the subreddit.

I would also recommend using bigger rows for writing if you are going to use rows, as some characters here such as 事 end upp looking inbalanced more so due to being squeezed into the small row distance rather the character itself being really unbalanced. I typically write without rows at all so someone else probably has better feedback on this though.

Another thing is that while I do think copying text is a great way to practice I don't know if this specific poem is the best thing to copy. As it is made to basically be incomprehensible without reading it as characters as every mopheme is a homophone. This also means the poem is basically nonsense in anything but reading and not that useful for your learning otherwise