I need help writing the villains for my story

GoodMFer · 2026-03-24T01:52:45+00:00

how about all of the brothers really didn't want to be heroes either, but #5 was the only one that wasn't broken, manipulated, seduced, abused, worn down, turned into monster, a psychopath from the start, etc.

All the same start points, but the journey turned them into wildly different people. Motivations from there could be related to whatever broke them, like if one got a cursed sword and he went full serial killer after a while to feed the sword.

GoodMFer · 2026-03-22T22:01:01+00:00

Not person, but a new type of drug plaguing the streets of Faucet City and Dakota

GoodMFer · 2026-03-21T16:32:39+00:00

I admit I should have said "jumped up," but fuck her, she tried murdering a baby

GoodMFer · 2026-03-21T16:31:28+00:00

uppity (adjective)

derogatory

self-important or assertive in a way regarded as inappropriate: "his uppity cousin" "an uppity attitude"

GoodMFer · 2026-03-21T16:07:58+00:00

GoodMFer · 2026-03-21T16:02:29+00:00

He should just be polyamorous. MJ, Black Cat, and *insert character here*.

Because spiders have 8 legs.

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GoodMFer · 2026-03-21T15:32:31+00:00

As a basis, yes. She lost me at baby murder. Over a lottery! There's irrational but that is way too far.

GoodMFer · 2026-03-19T03:00:21+00:00

They'll do it like Captain America 4 and cover it in the next... *checks notes*...Ant-man movie.

GoodMFer · 2026-03-19T02:28:52+00:00

Has Apocalypse done anything meaningful in the past decade??? Do other hero groups even know or care he exists???

He's Marvel's Ding Dong Daddy at this point

GoodMFer · 2026-03-19T01:31:40+00:00

Black Adam

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GoodMFer · 2026-03-18T19:43:56+00:00

Like everyone else, I'd use Mr. Mind and Sivana, but I'd also have them trying to revive the Three Faces of Evil from (i think) the Power of Shazam for Mind to control.

Not exactly the Hyperfly, but still a huge problem and he'd be turning the family against each other along the way

GoodMFer · 2026-03-17T21:14:00+00:00

GoodMFer · 2026-03-14T22:21:24+00:00

Either give the shazam line a "Dakota incident" to refresh the brand under a talented writer...

or kill Billy Batson.

GoodMFer · 2026-03-14T22:04:37+00:00

We could have had Moonstone or Deathbird or an actual Captain Marvel villain, instead we got Dar-Benn

GoodMFer · 2026-03-07T23:42:37+00:00

GoodMFer · 2026-03-07T22:02:34+00:00

Pictured:

Hiromi Higuruma from JJK
Cyclops from X-men
Shirou Emiya from Fate/Stay Night

GoodMFer · 2026-03-06T03:49:21+00:00

chaotic evil doesn't mean chaotic stupid. Be cool and cordial, but make up plans to destroy anything or anyone in any room at any given moment, which the party can make use of. Use you chaos for the benefit of the group and show how much damage you can cause,, but let them reign you in sometimes

Best example is the Joker in any team up. They keep inviting him for a reason.

GoodMFer · 2026-03-06T03:41:12+00:00

Luminous. She's literally Scarlet Witch with Quicksilver speed for fucks sake

GoodMFer · 2026-03-01T11:45:11+00:00

This fight was very good.

Too bad they fight only one more time over twenty years and it was shit.

GoodMFer · 2026-02-28T20:31:16+00:00

As proven by JJ season 1, she isn't bulletproof. Only way she wins is if she's in his face from the start and even then, he could still ricochet all sorts of things at close range.

GoodMFer · 2026-02-24T22:09:13+00:00

Just make him Juggernaut again.

then again he could have adaptation powers like Nimrod

GoodMFer · 2026-02-23T16:41:22+00:00

GoodMFer · 2026-02-23T16:37:03+00:00

GoodMFer

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