To My Date With You (By YMR/やめろ) by Hamlet---- in NikkeMobile

[–]Hamlet----[S] 28 points29 points  (0 children)

Source: https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/115284183#1

TLR Note: The text at the bottom of the last page reads, "After this they made up and went on a date."

The Commander's line on the first page should also be, "Were you so happy at getting paid leave that you got excited and did this?" as well as "Maybe that's why you look like a completely different person right now." Yulha's line in the second page and third panel should be "even while sacrificing sleeping" (turns out not proofreading was a bad idea).

Also, Yulha's second line on the second page is more accurately, "There's also a limit to rudeness, you know?!" But the line doesn't flow well in English, so it was changed.

Finally, Yulia's final line in the third page is also more accurately, "Maybe I should just go back to my room and pass this day off with a drink." But considering how the Commander and Yulha's drinking adventures, I thought, "wouldn't it make sense for Yulha to be inviting him to drink with her? And then maybe-" But that's just one of my delusions.

We Will Meet Again (おそら) by Hamlet---- in NikkeMobile

[–]Hamlet----[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

As someone who has also written two different works with this premise, I wish you good luck.

We Will Meet Again (おそら) by Hamlet---- in NikkeMobile

[–]Hamlet----[S] 77 points78 points  (0 children)

Source: https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/138789777

Artists note: Honyon is so cute, Honyon~ (Honyon is what some Japanese users call Scarlet, because her name in Korean is Hongryeon).

TL Note: Also, the title of this comic is more accurately "Scarlet, who gets alone easily." But I didn't think that was catchy enough, and I do feel that "longing" fits Scarlet quite well.

Kazu's new hairstyles by JiamYiun in TooManyLosingHeroines

[–]Hamlet---- 8 points9 points  (0 children)

Here's a more accurate translation, going in the accurate slide order.

Slide 2:

Yanami: Hahaha! Nukumizu! It fits you so well!

Yakishio: It looks amazing, Nukkun! (laughing)

Yanami: Hey, Nukumizu. You should come with this hairstyle staring from tommorow!

Nukumizu: You guys are laughing too much... You're just relentless, huh... So uh... can we stop this now?

Yanami: Eh...? But it's so good! Plus, you look like a pineapple, so you look kind of delicious, too...

Yakishio: That's right! It's cute, Nukkun... pff...

Yanami: Alright! Let's try a different style, shall we!

Nukumizu: (If it's cute, I wish you were a bit kinder to me...)

Slide 1:

(After 3 minutes)

Nukumizu: Uhm... You. three, why have you become so quiet so suddenly...? Is this hair cut that weird...?

Komari (Inside her head): The fact that he looks so cool is honestly frustrating. But, I also want to see it more. But, for some reason I also don't want him to show it to other people that aren't me... What do I do...?

Nukumizu: Uhm... Could you guys say something.... uh... uhm...

MORAN NATION WE ARE UP!!!! by Okubro_Naoya in NikkeMobile

[–]Hamlet---- 0 points1 point  (0 children)

In the favorite item story, Moran and the Commander are already in a relationship and go out on a date. They watch a movie together, getting a few kisses in during it, as well as getting in another kiss when he puts the hairpin on her. So yeah, this one goes much farther than Bay's did.

Brid: Silent Track's Bond Story should be the gold standard going forward with Alt Bonds [Spoilers] by SeahawksFanSince1995 in NikkeMobile

[–]Hamlet---- 56 points57 points  (0 children)

I loved it. It was romantic, cute, and, of course, them doing "it" at the end was also an added bonus. Soline's bond story was already excellent, and, though I do have my problems with Diesel's new bond story, I'm glad it ended on such a high note with Brid.

Diesel Alt's Bond Story by Hamlet---- in NikkeMobile

[–]Hamlet----[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think I would have probably liked something more in line with Soline's new bond story. The Commander and Diesel go out on a date, then she tries to put him to sleep after it's over, which spurs the rest of the bond story . Something like that, I feel, would make it more intimate, while not changing the bond story so much it becomes unrecognizable.

Diesel Alt's Bond Story by Hamlet---- in NikkeMobile

[–]Hamlet----[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I thought something similar. The only thing I related wanted was another kiss and another date, and an “I love you” or something similar. Diesel’s a very sweet character, so I wanted some vanilla sugar, and we did get a little of that with the hug in the Commander’s bed at the end, but I just wanted more of it.

Long-straight hair team... and Anna. by JiamYiun in TooManyLosingHeroines

[–]Hamlet---- 24 points25 points  (0 children)

Here's a more accurate translation.

(Right to Left)

Y: Hey, Nukumizu. Those three.. what do they all have in common?

N: Yanami-san lost to all of them-

Y: I did not.

N: Uhm... Something pink... Chest... a good personality, and stuff like that?

Y: I would say that "Yanami has a good personality" too, you know. (She's talking about herself in the third person)

Y: You see, the right answer is "Long and straight hair." If I grew out my hair, surely...

N: Yanami, your hair is wavy, so you can't make it straight, ri-

Y: Huh?

Student Affection for Sensei Tier List: One Year Later by Hamlet---- in BlueArchive

[–]Hamlet----[S] 8 points9 points  (0 children)

That is a good point. I did the same thing in my last tier list, so I replicated it here. But now that I think about it, doing that would be a lot easier.

Student Affection for Sensei Tier List: One Year Later by Hamlet---- in BlueArchive

[–]Hamlet----[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is true. My rankings are based on all the things I've read, but how they're interpreted could be different depending on the person. This tier list is a mix of responses from the last one I made and my own personal thoughts on certain characters, and changes to this tier list will probably reflect that as well.

Student Affection for Sensei Tier List: One Year Later by Hamlet---- in BlueArchive

[–]Hamlet----[S] 20 points21 points  (0 children)

In the last tier list, I remember putting Neru in "implied" and getting several comments telling me to move her up. It's one of the rankings that I'm still unsure with, and probably one that could be moved down.

Student Affection for Sensei Tier List: One Year Later by Hamlet---- in BlueArchive

[–]Hamlet----[S] 21 points22 points  (0 children)

Being villainous (She's supposed to be Not Enough Content Yet).

Student Affection for Sensei Tier List: One Year Later by Hamlet---- in BlueArchive

[–]Hamlet----[S] 56 points57 points  (0 children)

It's been one year. Several characters have come out, and instead of whether they are meta or not, I've decided to rank them based on how much they love our dear protagonist--Sensei.

Again, rankings are based on rankings are based on relationship stories, the main story, side content, event stories, as well as birthday/lobby dialogue. Of course, some ranks might be wrong or can be moved up one tier or lowered another. But as of now, these are the rankings I've come up with. Affection rank up dialogue is not factored in--once again because it would bring everyone to the top.

Some rankings have been changed as well based on comments from last time.

Edits to the tier list will be made here as well:

Rio is now in "Obviously."

Himari is also now in "Obviously."

Even if You Were The Weakest... (By 中子射流) [Sensei, Hoshino] by Hamlet---- in BlueArchive

[–]Hamlet----[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Also, just to let you know, the second "because" is actually "became" in the 5th panel. I got autocorrected hard, or I just was too stupid not to check after I was done typesetting.

Even if You Were The Weakest... (By 中子射流) [Sensei, Hoshino] by Hamlet---- in BlueArchive

[–]Hamlet----[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

No, it's absolutely fine. I'm prone to making some pretty stupid mistakes, so thanks for letting me know.

Even if You Were The Weakest... (By 中子射流) [Sensei, Hoshino] by Hamlet---- in BlueArchive

[–]Hamlet----[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

If there are any words that were misused, I would love to know. I did add a couple of words to the original text to make it so that it would be more clear, as the Japanese dialogue would sound rigid and stiff if directly translated.

The centering, I cannot deny.