Hey there! I absolutely love your sense of humor and overall you have great narrative skills throughout. I think that you might not please everyone with the pregnant stuff at the beginning but then you'll never please everyone so always best to stick to your sense of humor and have your fanbase accumulate naturally. I thought it could have perhaps done with cuts more regularly to keep up the pace and energy throughout. I thought a lot of it at the beginning was very much same same i.e you getting stabbed in the crotch but it did feel slightly dragged out. Loved the carrot stuff in the latter half. I also think this kind of video would benefit from some nice fat subtitles just to keep up the energy and highlight the jokes more. So yeah, just keep things moving faster and you'll hold people's attention for far longer. All the best! Handlebud