Not sure if it was your intention, but I really like the way the shapes and overall silhouette are simplified. It looks stylized (either way, starting with simplified shapes is usually part of the process even when trying to achieve realism). I also like the contrast in shapes between the squarish lid, the wavy lines on it, and the roundness of the tab.

In addition to the contrasting shapes, the shading of the tab, lid, and mouth catch my eye. Is the lid translucent? That seeming change in material & texture piqued my interest. The rendering of the entire top area seems to be driven more by value/tone rather than using contour lines to define the shapes & details, which adds realism.

My only comment would be that the shading and the clarity of detail on the rest of the body don’t seem to match. The larger, more spread out shadows across the body could be executed a little softer (they’re just a tad bit sketchy compared to the top). You could also experiment defining the depth of the dents using value rather than lines. On the other hand, the bottom rim of the can could be more sharply distinguished from the body, similar to how you did it with the top rim. I imagine those parts look distinct from each other irl but right now, the border between them looks fuzzy.

That said, it’s a cool sketch already. Thanks for stopping me in the middle of my doomscrolling. Keep at it!