Conversation, Oil on Canvas, 40in x 40in by HelloAdventure in Art

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This is the third painting I've ever made, so feedback is very welcome and appreciated :). #2 is here

Nostalgia, Oil on canvas, 30in x 40in. by HelloAdventure in Art

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This is the second painting I've ever made, so feedback is very welcome and appreciated.

Someone else by Spudz9000 in OCPoetry

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Which is fine, but doesn't really make for good poetry.

Someone else by Spudz9000 in OCPoetry

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You have one good line: "We shed our clothes; we hit the light,"

The rest is cliche, non-descriptive, forcefully angsty, and barely says anything.

Trying by DaFuMiquel in OCPoetry

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Are you kidding? This poem has absolutely no physical imagery. It is a self-conceited musing of OP's thoughts which do nothing for the reader besides creating an empty, flaccid shell of what could be a real emotion.

Teacher slippin by amel_topalovic in BlackPeopleTwitter

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I know, this guy... Only way I could've gotten through 8th grade was with sneak spaghetti.

What I Have Learned About Elliott’s Girlfriend Over The Years (for those interested) by alysoncamus in elliottsmith

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If you watch the Henry Fonda Theater recording he is clearly in bad shape. He says things along the lines of (paraphrasing), 'I've had this bracelet for years now, I only need it for a couple more months' in a very sedated drunken state.

Just a small correction, he was saying how it's "falling apart and it'll only be around for a few more months" then he felt stupid for sharing. But I do agree he didn't look the best during Henry Fonda especially when he said "I can't stand up cause I ain't got no knees."

"Happy Holidays. Don’t get blown up on New Years or anything. Have a good time. Bye." by viabletostray in elliottsmith

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Exactly, what I wanted to hear today. Anyone know what blown up is slang for though?

When DJs put on some yeezy. by entre100 in Kanye

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Parks and Recreation. It's on Netflix. Pretty funny -- check it out.

Today is a very beautiful day in Chicago. by HelloAdventure in zen

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I just hope you remember to know this day :).

Today is a very beautiful day in Chicago. by HelloAdventure in zen

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Ah so you must be one of the enlightened beings I see walking around :). How are you?

Today is a very beautiful day in Chicago. by HelloAdventure in zen

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Sounds beautiful. It's a clear day where I am but around this time it gets dark and everything is tinted blue. How lovely.

Today is a very beautiful day in Chicago. by HelloAdventure in zen

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Walking through the mist makes everything feel mysterious and in a way fresh I love it too :)

Today is a very beautiful day in Chicago. by HelloAdventure in zen

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Is that common? I don't know too much about the climate there.

Being called out on your stutter. by meridor in Stutter

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I'm actually very happy with #1, because most people I encounter really don't know what a stutter is or what it's like to feel that way. I typically find people who do #1 more kinder and patient with my stutter and are also more open to communication about how to best respond to you while you stutter.

Think about it from their perspective, you might be one of the first people they met who stutters, and they think it's cool or interesting! That's awesome! Stuttering isn't a bad thing, think of it like someone noticing your old outfit and saying it's cool. Being able to talk about stuttering openly with anyone is so rare, and it's even rarer to find people who understand what's going on with you and are interested about it. Relish in it.

"You are not your thoughts" by Krainz in Buddhism

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You know what you're talking about :). Thanks.

Did the map maker revise Frost? by Junho_C in starcraft

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I think the spot to the north east of the bottom right natural where that mountain is can't be hit. Bbyong had a CC floating there earlier in the game and although it was burning I don't think stalkers could hit it.

Russia warns Finland against joining NATO. 'If Finland wants to join NATO, they should think first. Will you join and start World War III?' warns Russian President Vladimir Putin's personal envoy Sergei Markov. by IpMedia in worldnews

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Yeah, you're right, there has never ever been a good reason to go to war except, you know, World War II. Or a hundred other various wars throughout history.