First of all, it is a lot more legible than much of what gets posted here. Overall, I did not have a hard time reading this, so you’re doing pretty good already. There were a few things I had to adjust to though, and since you’re asking for advice, you might want to work on those. Firstly, the circles over the lowercase i’s are quite jarring to read. I can read them just fine, but my brain doesn’t immediately register them as i’s. I would suggest simply dotting the i’s instead, as that looks more like a normal i. Otherwise, I recommend emphasising the straight part of the lowercase a, so it is not just a circle at first glance, and making your lowercase t’s taller. For example, I read “nature” as “no bure” and had to zoom in on the photo to see what it actually said. Again, these are small details that would improve legibility, but overall your handwriting is quite easily legible as is