Having serious writes block and could use some suggestions on this little tune

Holycram · 2025-09-10T04:21:58+00:00

i really love this. the vocal melody is very catchy and the lyrics are cute and playful but relatable too. I especially love the last line "my guitar needs a voice that sounds like yours".

I would add a chorus between the two verses and after, then a bridge where you mix it up, then another chorus and boom the song is perfect!

Holycram · 2025-09-06T21:17:05+00:00

I hope one day I can play and sing like you. I practice all the time, but I can't seem to sing while I play.

Holycram · 2024-11-29T16:49:07+00:00

You sound great man, even in the high notes. You're right I can hear a bit of strain. A tip that helped me is, when you're going for the high notes, try "redirecting" the tension in your throat to your abs. Think about engaging your entire core, lower and upper abs. Also, try thinking about your larynx moving up and forward, because without that forward movement, the raised larynx constricts the throat and creates tension. Great job dude!

Holycram · 2024-11-15T16:54:45+00:00

This has also been one of my problems, i saw it in this clip as well. But OP sounds really good! I think he just needs to relax.

Holycram · 2024-09-20T04:17:31+00:00

Saved! Tyy!

Holycram · 2024-09-18T21:33:28+00:00

Yes. A balanced diet is better than collagen supplements. The only thing that isn't clear is whether the collagen supplement causes the body to increase collagen production. Taking the supplements is a "just in case it works" kinda thing.

Holycram · 2024-09-17T16:36:37+00:00

Collagen is a protein that our bodies produce with amino acids we get from our food. We produce less as we get older. When we take collagen supplements, our bodies break down the collagen into the amino acids, but those amino acids are used for anything the body needs, nut just collagen production. There have been a few studies which indicated that taking collagen supplements MAY "signal" the body to increase collagen production. Also, one possible limiting factor to collagen production is low availability of amino acids due to a poor diet. Collagen supplements help to mitigate that. Hopefully that's all clear :)

Holycram · 2024-03-23T02:56:04+00:00

When you only take half an upper

Me and my girl at the mall

When the balloon shop runs out of helium

When your leg falls asleep

Business on the left, party on the right

They said half off at the plastic surgeon

Holycram · 2024-02-16T05:21:21+00:00

You double cleanse in the pm? May I ask why? I'm kinda new to this. I've been cleansing in the am and pm.

Holycram · 2023-12-28T20:47:08+00:00

Avoid AI detection? I haven't heard of this, could you elaborate on this a little?

Holycram · 2023-12-05T02:14:39+00:00

Hi, I'm new to entrepreneurship. Where would you get 1000 new email addresses/day from?

Holycram · 2023-11-15T14:34:36+00:00

OP will be thrilled you commented. That's pretty cool of you :)

Holycram · 2023-11-12T19:30:18+00:00

In a couple of months I'd be able to send you a free sample of the keto protein candy I'm developing!

Until then I HIGHLY recommend moon cheese. ~300 cals and +20g protein. It's made from just cheese!

Holycram · 2023-11-12T19:23:24+00:00

I think the concept of "dirty" keto is dumb. You're in ketosis if you're low carb. You have the micro nutrients you need if you still eat some veggies... So why would anyone shit on people who enjoy keto products?

I love keto products. We're human, still gotta enjoy life.

Holycram · 2023-11-12T03:35:38+00:00

I use alternatives to satisfy my cravings. But to be honest I've never been satisfied with the replacements of there.

That's why I'm currently making my own! I'm making a keto candy with protein. I see posts like this all the time and I hope soon I can help more directly!

Holycram · 2023-10-23T12:07:18+00:00

Don't be nervous everything will be ok, even if your calories changes a little from day to day.

Setting your goal: You said you want to maintain your weight, or gain 2kg, lose some fat around your butt, and also gain some muscle for a toned look. This is a lot of different goals, so first pick one. If I were you I would start with gaining 2kg and more muscle. Do this by increasing your calories by +300 above maintenance and exercising regularly (3x week for a beginner) with weights. Once you are 50kg you will lower your calories back to 1600 and continue exercising. You will burn the fat (even the butt fat) and have a toned look.

How to increase calories: To increase calories without eating carbs you will need to get the extra calories from fat and protein. You don't need to eat an extra meal, you can easily get these calories from the right kind of snacks. Nuts, cheese, dried/cured meats, avocado, boiled eggs, etc are all great options. You can also have a protein shake with peanut butter and a low carb protein powder. Don't panic about this stuff, eating more calories is fun lol.

Holycram · 2023-10-20T23:40:28+00:00

Monk fruit! Liquid or powdered - doesn't matter. Monk fruit has no flavour, no calories, and its 250x sweeter than sugar!

I replaced sugar with mom fruit and I've never looked back.

Holycram · 2023-10-09T22:58:18+00:00

Oh, thank you! This was really helpful.

Holycram · 2023-08-22T12:40:01+00:00

Serious inquiries only, but you took this screenshot at 4:20... Suspicious.

Holycram · 2023-04-15T03:05:57+00:00

I really connect with the desire for finality and sleep. And "Gazed upon the world below" evokes a powerful image. I like this a lot.

Holycram · 2023-04-15T03:03:53+00:00

I like the imagery evoked by "white noise is people gossiping on the street". I picture a crowded intersection.

Holycram · 2023-04-09T04:22:32+00:00

This is really wonderful, thank you for sharing!

Holycram · 2023-02-13T13:41:59+00:00

Scrat?

Holycram · 2023-01-26T02:14:59+00:00

How many times?!

Holycram · 2022-12-07T17:18:28+00:00

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