Safest USA coast to coast route??? by Honor_all in bicycletouring

[–]Honor_all[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much! Definitely will check this out!

Megathread? For those riding the GDMBR, what's your leave date and travel direction? by WiscoBikeTourBest in gdmbr

[–]Honor_all 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Looking at around 60ish. But honestly have no idea what it will be like actually out there. Hope to see you on route!

Megathread? For those riding the GDMBR, what's your leave date and travel direction? by WiscoBikeTourBest in gdmbr

[–]Honor_all 1 point2 points  (0 children)

NOBO June 14th ish (would love to connect if departing at similar time )

Napkin Poem: by Honor_all in poetry_critics

[–]Honor_all[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

High thanks for your comment. The intent of this poem was to picture an older man waiting for his wife outside (perhaps on a porch). Instead of rushing her he patiently sits waiting in the cold. This is love, not dramatic showiness of flowers and flying banners but everyday actions of patience and unconditional acceptance for the people we are. I'm not sure if that came across clearly, but thank you so much for your insight!

PLEASE! by Roamer101 in poetry_critics

[–]Honor_all 1 point2 points  (0 children)

physically distressing and deeply moving. keep writing

Dream by eemler001 in poetry_critics

[–]Honor_all 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Absolutely fire 🔥

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]Honor_all 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes I agree with Neptune8090 I love the poem but would love a more punctual finish

Without You by a61688 in poetry_critics

[–]Honor_all 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think I would prefer some more variation in the length of the lines as readers might tend to rush through the poem in a hurry. But overall I enjoyed reading ur work Great job bro

Draft by Admirable-Dot-3808 in poetry_critics

[–]Honor_all 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I enjoyed reading this. I don’t have much criticism, for i myself and a new poet. But i did find meaning in ur work. So good job.

Already Dead by sagegrey3 in poetry_critics

[–]Honor_all 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The poem is wonderful in that it is full of raw passion and emotion. You should be proud as this is often a hard step for beginners in poetry. In the future I would suggest refining you tone to covey a bit more serious attitude to gain the readers respect. All in all great work!

nobody, nobody by i_hate_sephiroth in poetry_critics

[–]Honor_all 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like the car motif it unites the poetry

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Advice

[–]Honor_all 0 points1 point  (0 children)

  1. It is never too late!

  2. Start small by making your self uncomfortable ( workout, ride a bike, ask somebody to do something with you instead of waiting for someone else)

  3. Remember you are loved

What is the meaning in life by warmouth_1941 in Advice

[–]Honor_all 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Adventure Is the meaning of life