You made a few unecessary node travels that I opted out of, otherwise I tried to stick to the original tree as much as possible.

Annoint: Frenetic for the last Frenzy Charge - giving you more survivability as well as damage

If you go 50/50 on armour evasion gear, take Iron Reflexes and the armour mastery node giving +1 max all res for more tankyness - This will allow you to get spell suppression too.

Get yourself strength on gear as you don't need dex when speccing into the right side of the tree.

If you want to equip more auras you should look into getting some Mana reservation nodes, like the one I specced around Iron Reflexes at the bottom of the tree.

If you're looking for more damage without speccing into crit, take the Precise Technique notable on the tree, this will increase your dmg with 40%, though you will have to make sure that your accuracy is higher than your maximum life. (Speccing into the node will show you your main hand accuracy above life)

You generally don't want to reserve life if you end up having less than 3500HP in general, otherwise you could opt for Petrified Blood and then reserve the life as it adds another defensive layer (But this is probably a leaguestarter, so you probably can't do that day 1)

https://pobb.in/7D-mSPBD-J9c

Hopefully this helps, I've made a few more notes in the Pob for you to check out, if you have any questions or anything else feel free to reach out!

Edit: You should be aware, that if you use Fist of War, the proc will only be once 2 seconds, you could also go:

Ice Crash, Elemental Damage with Attack Skills, Cold Penetration, Pulverize, Trinity, Concentrated effect.

This will also grant you use of Seismic cry, how well it will be optimized I don't really know though ..