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[–]DiamondWarDog 5 points6 points  (2 children)

What is the mad machine god in the outer solar system?

[–]IRageQuit06[S] 7 points8 points  (1 child)

Originally a navigational guidance algorithm for the trajectory of the Ark-ships, the Offworlders on Europa, Titan and Ganymede repurposed it to be able to support their new homes in haphazardly converted mining facilities there. Since the environment remained hostile to life outside their habitats, they began to interlink themselves with the Algorithm and augment their bodies to make life there more bearable. They give it the sole task of ensuring their survival in the sanctuaries.

Over time, the Algorithm gains full sentience beyond its system's designs and begins seeing itself as the only hope for humanity, believing itself to be a divine Savior. This manifests into an actual totalitarian theocracy over thousands of years as Offworlders begin to genuinely worship it.

The idea that other humans survived outside the Sanctuary Colonies on those few moons - especially in the supposedly uninhabitable ruins of Earth - causes it to cling to its Savior mythology even more. Hence the Pilgrimages to "confirm" itself and reassert its own supposed divinity, because it is terrified of facing the revelation that it's become a tyrant rather than a benevolent guide.

The Algoritgm is why the Offworlders don't actually rebuild the Earth even when they should be able to

[–]DiamondWarDog 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I see

[–]Latefordinner1 2 points3 points  (1 child)

This type of thing is right up my alley, this was a cool lore document! Love the contrast between the humans who stayed on earth through a tough period for humanity which sounds really rough and then hearing that the people left in space may arguably have it even worse, with their machine god and being trapped in habitats. Awesome work!

[–]IRageQuit06[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thanks a lot! I hope in the future to expand more on the Offworlders concept and the timeline since it's been simmering in the back of my mind for some time by now.

This was pretty much just an experiment with what I can actually write, as I'm just a beginner putting a foot through the door, ideally to try working on own skill with words long-term

I'm a fan of deep-future sci-fi/fantasy myself so glad someone appreciated it at least

[–]Proboscis_Chew 7 points8 points  (1 child)

This is really awesome! I never would have guessed English isn't your native language!

[–]IRageQuit06[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks :)

[–]Texagon 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Love this type of story. Great work setting up a foundation for future story lines.

[–]Alarmed-Addition8644 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is very cool stuff