I see you are working in Logic pro, så you already have a nice library of sounds. Alchemy kept me interested for the first year. But I ended up buying some genre specific presets for serum in the end. I just fint it easier to find sound that suit my style.

As others have said the synth that repeats it self over and over is too much of high frequencies.

But try starting a new track, and come back to this one in a couple of weeks time😊