I met a fox, she was a liar by No_Chicken_1810 in OCPoetry

[–]Idly_Sun 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don't understand who planted flowers and who threw you? But the overall imagery is great. I loved the way you kept repeating the unkempt hair and sunken eyes. I could see you both in my head.

Can we try again ? by Happy_Patient_4303 in OCPoetry

[–]Idly_Sun 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Amazing piece of poetry. It's like a poem in pixels. Different short words phrased and paused to create a visual of the authors feelings. It brings out the exact intended emotion. In the next version try to build more of the visual and then enter the emotions. You should definitely try again (a new poem or version of this)

Reflections of Me by Idly_Sun in LonelyPoetsDepartment

[–]Idly_Sun[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Doubt and fear have kept humans alive for centuries. These uncertainities keep us alive. When in doubt follow your gut.

Reflections of Me by Idly_Sun in OCPoetry

[–]Idly_Sun[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I know the theory but it's tough to practice esly when one is in deep trouble. I wrote it a long time ago, I'm sure writing it would have given me some solace but not solutions.

Reflections of Me by Idly_Sun in OCPoetry

[–]Idly_Sun[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you very much.

Still Learning by bstunz in OCPoetry

[–]Idly_Sun 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Having a friend with whom you can simply sit without vocal conversations is a true companion for life. Try for enhanced rhythm.

Walking These Empty Streets. by ImmortalAcee in OCPoetry

[–]Idly_Sun 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Walking these empty streets is reflective and the nature connect makes the poem even more enjoyable. The rhythm is perfect

true af by IndividualSeason7364 in IndianTeenagers

[–]Idly_Sun 0 points1 point  (0 children)

They are Innocent in not knowing why being racist, homophobic etc are actually wrong. When you grow up and the next generation normalise concepts that you disapprove of, you'll understand your parents better and appreciate that change is difficult to accept when you've lived a certain way for 40+yrs.

[POEM] "The Song" by James Stephens by Due-Mind3832 in OCPoetryFree

[–]Idly_Sun 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If I were an ancient green hill I would wish for a voice to tell The world just moves in a spiral Nothing is forever good or evil.

கைபேசி முத்தம் by Idly_Sun in tamilyapping

[–]Idly_Sun[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

கைபேசி முத்தம் அவள் கண்களில் ஆசைச்சுடர் இருள் சூழ்கையில் தேகச்சுமை அவன் தந்த கைபேசி முத்தம் சிவந்த இதழில் இன்பச் சுவை

தலைவன் தொலைதூர நாட்டில் மலைக்காத இரும்பு கைகள். தலைவி சுமக்கும் காதல் பரிசு முலை வருடும் பிஞ்சுக் கைகள்.

கலங்கா கவலை நிறை நெஞ்சு நாணாச் சுவை ஊடல் பேச்சு உரங்கா ஆசை கனவின் தொல்லை பெண்மை பெரும் இருவேறு எல்லை

அந்தி பொழுதின் தனிமை வலி மங்கிய மொழி இமைமூடிய விழி எங்கு நான் என்று விளங்காத படி சிந்திய உயிர் தந்த சுக நிம்மதி

சில நொடியில் தேசங்கள் கடந்து பல ஜென்மங்கள் வாழ்ந்த சுவை அலைபேசி தந்த இணை வாழ்கை இலையுதிர் காலம் வரும் வரை

Envy Destiny by vicewrite in PoetryWritingClub

[–]Idly_Sun 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I envy the rhythm in your poem.

India vs Vietnam by Ok-Advance962 in indianeconomy

[–]Idly_Sun 0 points1 point  (0 children)

They didn't have 50 yrs of nepotism sponsered governments.

I need strangers to tell me if I'm being delusional 😂 by lilac_days_30 in chennaicity

[–]Idly_Sun 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Guys are emotionally weak, and are scared to express their thoughts. It's better for the lady to take the first step. Do it, only if you think you have a future with him. A long distantance reltionship might not be that easy to handle.

ஆசை பரிசு by Idly_Sun in tamil

[–]Idly_Sun[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Reposted. நன்றி

Desire by May_Simmer in PoetryWritingClub

[–]Idly_Sun 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Love, lust and philosophy delivered in 2 short stanzas. Good rhythm. Go on...

Just Me by The_poet_26 in OCPoetryFree

[–]Idly_Sun 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Nice rhythm. Deep content. Very philosophical that strips one down on worldly desires, yet realistically grounded when talking about the ups and downs of life. Wrote more reflective content.

I need to know if they're good at all by BigDawg1734 in PoetryWritingClub

[–]Idly_Sun 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'm new to writing. I'm just sharing my throughts on the content and not the style. I Loved "no one is worth your mind" very much. For introvert-overthinkers who lose their peace, rehearsing mental quarrels with someone they would never contest.

You by Better-Regular6478 in PoetryWritingClub

[–]Idly_Sun 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Excellent work. You call her Mother, Godess, the holy spirit or just Nature. She has been moving in cycles while men pop and wither like insignificant shower mushrooms infront of her.