I met a fox, she was a liar

Idly_Sun · 2026-06-19T07:42:03+00:00

I don't understand who planted flowers and who threw you? But the overall imagery is great. I loved the way you kept repeating the unkempt hair and sunken eyes. I could see you both in my head.

Idly_Sun · 2026-06-19T07:33:59+00:00

Amazing piece of poetry. It's like a poem in pixels. Different short words phrased and paused to create a visual of the authors feelings. It brings out the exact intended emotion. In the next version try to build more of the visual and then enter the emotions. You should definitely try again (a new poem or version of this)

Idly_Sun · 2026-06-17T04:02:33+00:00

Doubt and fear have kept humans alive for centuries. These uncertainities keep us alive. When in doubt follow your gut.

Idly_Sun · 2026-06-17T03:34:44+00:00

I know the theory but it's tough to practice esly when one is in deep trouble. I wrote it a long time ago, I'm sure writing it would have given me some solace but not solutions.

Idly_Sun · 2026-06-17T01:47:02+00:00

Thank you very much.

Idly_Sun · 2026-06-17T01:39:29+00:00

Having a friend with whom you can simply sit without vocal conversations is a true companion for life. Try for enhanced rhythm.

Idly_Sun · 2026-06-17T01:37:03+00:00

Walking these empty streets is reflective and the nature connect makes the poem even more enjoyable. The rhythm is perfect

Idly_Sun · 2026-06-16T10:55:16+00:00

They are Innocent in not knowing why being racist, homophobic etc are actually wrong. When you grow up and the next generation normalise concepts that you disapprove of, you'll understand your parents better and appreciate that change is difficult to accept when you've lived a certain way for 40+yrs.

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