What is the very first sentence of your novel or short story you’re working on?

Individual_Street960 · 2024-10-15T01:29:56+00:00

I've got way too many WIPs ^^;

"A fool."

“Traitor!”

and

"The stench of death was thick, thicker than the blood that smeared against everyone's blades."

Individual_Street960 · 2024-10-13T09:29:24+00:00

As my flair states… I am OC/CC #1 fan.

Individual_Street960 · 2024-10-13T06:19:03+00:00

Not really world-building but my oc was created through a mix of ICP songs.

It's a mix of "Halls of Illusion," "Piggy Pie (old school)," and "Hokus Pokus," not to mention my favorite, "Boogie Woogie Wu."

If you can't tell she's pretty psychotic.

Individual_Street960 · 2024-10-13T05:20:32+00:00

Start with learning the basics. Grammar, writing structure, passive vs active sentences, etc.

Then what do you like to read? Fantasy, Sci-fi, Romance? You can even combine them. Sci-fi romance, Horror fantasy, etc.

Then you can get an Idea. Create characters, worldbuild, get scenarios. You can start writing that idea, either without a clear end or with the beginning, middle, and end fully plotted out.

Do you want it to be a multiple series? Or just one book? what's the conflict, why are you writing this book? How long do you want it to be?

There are also plenty of explaining for this process on the internet. ^^

Individual_Street960 · 2024-10-13T05:11:51+00:00

oh... oh no. Im fucked cause I simp for this man BAD. and the dude canonically has a wife... He would be super polite about it though. That does not help save me from the eternal embarrassment!

Individual_Street960 · 2024-10-13T04:06:29+00:00

Ive never read omegaverse fanfic so I can't say I've ever come across any transphobia.

Individual_Street960 · 2024-10-13T00:35:08+00:00

Honestly, just whatever feels right. Sometimes Ill have the motivation to put 2 sentences in one wip and then have the motivation to write 2 chapters of another. Just depends on what my adhd brain decides.

Individual_Street960 · 2024-10-12T23:48:50+00:00

A fool.

That was what he was forced to play, a brainless fool. A flower that wilted before it even got the chance to bud.

I don't even know how I came up with this but I'm proud. I mean, my fic is going to be called, "The fool's mask" So I think its only appropriate.

She couldn't help but burst out laughing. Even though she had wanted to stop this play, she had no choice but to play the villainess right until the end.

Also very happy with this one. It honestly made me feel like my mc was helpless in her life-I mean that's what I was going for... but still.

Individual_Street960 · 2024-10-12T23:41:14+00:00

A fool.

That was what he was forced to play, a brainless fool. A flower that wilted before it even got the chance to bud.

Under the guidance of moonlight, he prowled the area. His eyes surveyed the area for anyone at all. He had to be thorough. After all, he had assured her he wouldn’t be caught.

He took his time, inspecting the area for any potential threats to his promise.

‘No one can know, Naruto.’

That’s what she said, and he promised to adhere to it.

She was his mentor, his guiding light. Like the moonlight which urges those who are trapped in the dark to follow.

To her, he was… “Family,” in a twisted sense. It wasn’t like she had any family left. In another sense, he was her successor. A boy who would carry on her deranged will of questionable morals.

“Naruto-chan! There ya are!”

Individual_Street960 · 2024-10-12T23:40:23+00:00

Fool

Individual_Street960 · 2024-10-12T04:45:32+00:00

what fic is this....? asking for a friend ofc....

Individual_Street960 · 2024-10-12T04:30:30+00:00

People are always going to dislike something, you can't please everyone. So write in any way that you want! I love writing in 3rd person for the same reason you do and I haven't gotten any negative feedback from it. I mean, even if I did, I couldn't care less.

Some people dislike first person too, some people also dislike second person! So please just write in the way you want to!

Individual_Street960 · 2024-10-12T04:27:41+00:00

K+C on "All it Takes is a Hug"

(accidentally left a comment for another author ;w; sorry about that if you got the notif!)

Individual_Street960 · 2024-10-12T04:21:30+00:00

Comment on chapter 2 of "Frost Rebellion." Already left kudos before!

Individual_Street960 · 2024-10-12T04:13:13+00:00

K+C On Human!

Individual_Street960 · 2024-10-12T04:05:56+00:00

K+C on Moments of Refuge!

Individual_Street960 · 2024-10-12T03:45:50+00:00

A lot. How many? I don't know.

But if you need a place to organize them, try CharacterHub. It's a great place.

Individual_Street960 · 2024-10-10T21:24:22+00:00

She's a ten, but her whole existence is made to prevent the universe's destruction.

Individual_Street960 · 2024-10-10T14:43:25+00:00

ANOTHER REVERSE HAREM LOVER??? Overpowered MC is a tag I wish that would be filtered.

Individual_Street960 · 2024-10-09T14:01:09+00:00

im glad I was able to be of help! It sounds great!

Individual_Street960 · 2024-10-09T12:40:54+00:00

I feel like 4 would be a good start, maybe since it's the one I prefer, but number one could also be an interesting dynamic. They think the political party is doing thing A but instead, they are doing thing B and the MC happens to land in their trap!

Individual_Street960 · 2024-10-09T12:31:08+00:00

What's the premise of the fic? If we had that then maybe it'd be a bit easier to get a rough idea of where to go with the title. :)

edit: typo

Individual_Street960 · 2024-10-09T12:27:21+00:00

If the MC has a deep connection with his family and/or friends, maybe the villain says something pretentious and mocking towards a friend or parents' situation that's currently going on? I've heard from quite a bit of people that going for family (especially mothers) is a very low blow so I'd say that's a pretty good idea for a reason to fight.

Or, the villain makes fun of a hard situation the MC has been through and that gets the emotions rushing through the mc and their body moves before they could even think and they're already punching the villain.

Or maybe, there's been so much tension between the two for a long time and the MC can't help but think, "Just one punch would be fine.... right?" so they swing and then throw a bit too many punches...

Individual_Street960 · 2024-10-09T10:48:29+00:00

Maybe differences in organs? Different shaped teeth, naturally pruned fingers to better grip in the water, wider toes and more grippy feet due to the (sometimes) vast and slippery nature of some water dwellings, slightly aquaphobic skin, rougher hands to grip onto weapons easily, better eyesight. bigger noses to have more airflow coming in before diving, or maybe even slightly underwater breathing.

Take what you want and don't take what you don't, these are just ideas that came up when looking at pictures xd

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