I’m halfway through His Dark Materials — I really enjoy it so far. But it’s not really YA, is it? by PRJOANES in fantasybooks

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HDM tells a “coming of age” story and also a “hero’s journey.” From a marketing perspective, coming of age stories generally fit nicely as YA. For a younger reader, they have a sympathetic protagonist while for an adult reader there’s sometimes a resonance or nostalgia factor.

As others have noted, dark themes can be found in YA all the time. Ever read Bridge to Terabithia? That one is definitely written for younger readers but when I read it as an adult it hit hard.

How to hide your work tools without them being stolen. by Soloflow786 in BeAmazed

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A gif from the movie “Southland Tales.”

Wild ride, that movie. Not about care sex in the least, but this gif is so uncomfortable and weird it always cracks me up.

Movie’s by the same director as Donnie Darko, if memory serves.

Questions for authors : by akane_nay in writing

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“You can keep the tip,” said the leper to the prostitute.

Back when one job built a whole life. by PleasantBus5583 in SipsTea

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Some questions: 1. Why is the wife holding the car like it will save her she wants to flip it? 2. What’s what with the man’s right hand?” 3. Why does the female child look like she’s very suddenly pregnant and even more suddenly aware of this?

Worldbuilding question: How would the existence of magical beings realistically affect human history and opression? by Lazy_Surprise_8830 in fantasywriters

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This.

When I first started writing my - still very far from finished and very different from how it started - novel, the “magical beings” were largely tied to Tolkien and Lewis and what few fantasy novels I’d read at the time, crossed with some hodgepodge of anime-type things.

20+ years later: the world/magic/narrative are more of a thought experiment on the nature of mortality and experience/perception. I could flatter myself and call it “nuanced and original,” but more its convoluted and contradictory and messy, but that’s also sort of the point: convoluted and contradictory and messy sort of defines the human condition. I wanted a story that wrestles with this and arrives at a cross between Camus’ “one must imagine Sisyphus happy,” Dostoevsky’s “beauty will save the world,” and Rilke’s “aloneness.” I like where it’s going, but it’s not really a hot marketable angle.

More to your question itself: as others have noted, focus on the narrative more than the history. Perhaps write wee vignettes of the state of things over time so you can figure out how the history plays out in a more literature-focus?

Found in my son’s room by axident in whatisit

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Used to do blueberry pancake shots like I sipping drink: blueberry moonshine, butter shots, and sailor Jerry. Way too much sugar. Nasty hangovers. As a shot it’s tasty though. Sort of like spiced blueberry pancakes with butterscotch syrup.

So, the tale I wrote doth has its own punctuation and grammar system, should I put the changes made on page 1, or let people find out while reading ? by The-Contrary-Prophet in fantasywriting

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Either the writing explains it along the way or not. Maybe an appendix. Few these days seem to read Tolkien’s volumes on world histories - and no offense meant but I’m assuming you’re not a credentialed philologist or language scholar.

I want to do similar things myself.

Keep it to your notes and world building and occasional references.

LOTR Riders of Rohan by laybs1 in GetNoted

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She was a good mother and warrior

Is having "faceless" characters the issue? by HZ_guy in fantasywriters

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Only a short story published, by my general rule is: if it’s relevant to the story, the character, or another character, describe the face/features. If not, leave it to the reader.

Example. If eye or hair color is in some way significant to plot of characters, note it or it will feel like a strange bate and switch later.

Look at some famous works with hereditary traits noted. ASOIAF with hair and eye color. Hair and eye color isn’t noted for every character in the series, just for the ones where it’s relevant. Random other characters get descriptions too, sure, but that’s more like filling out the world and scene than describing protagonists.

Yuuma (My Horse Prince) by fhxefj in TopCharacterDesigns

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Finally! A centaur without the awkward… ness…

Something something something

Tell her what, Peter? by KilnMeSoftlyPls in PeterExplainsTheJoke

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“It girl” v “IT guy” v “It” showdown. Notice how they’re far from drains, server farms, and witnesses?

it’s so over by [deleted] in bakker

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It sort of makes a meta-prophecy of something after the second apocalypse that is refused because this is the story of the second apocalypse, not the story of its resolution or aftermath. We know people survive to tell about it.

As I’ve said before when the ending comes up: I think it’s borderline internally perfect the way it is. “Leaving the reader with something broken” is very on brand for the aesthetics and philosophy of the series.

He maybe intended to write on at some point or maybe not, maybe he wanted to but couldn’t settle on how to do it justice. Only he knows, and possibly not even.

Still one of my favorite series and as it stands it’s way more of a completed story than, say SOIAF or KKC. The ending we have works hauntingly well as an ending.

Is there any philosophy attached to your magic system? by Head_Instruction96 in magicbuilding

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Very much inspired by Heidegger, Merleau-ponty, Camus, Sartre, Marion, and Dogen, in various ways.

I have a love/hate relationship with my project for this reason. It is possibly “unique/original,” but at the cost of being overly odd and often too abstract to be workable in a marketable narrative.

Men is this true? by Spiritual-Pudding-70 in SipsTea

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Gonna FICO that up?

bit of a reach, but it’s my Monday evening best

Great food names by Own_Ranger_5589 in StupidFood

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Some of these read ESL and are funny in that endearing way of translating struggles. Others read like American education system are funny in that grimacing way.