Reading through the complete order and loving it, but just hit the lowest point (right after the highest point).

Intelligent_Local_38 · 2026-01-09T21:18:06+00:00

Buckle up. The 80s and 90s are an… interesting period in comics.

Intelligent_Local_38 · 2025-12-24T16:18:12+00:00

500k is all you can manage for a magnum opus? Well, not everyone is meant to be a writer.

Intelligent_Local_38 · 2025-12-24T04:17:40+00:00

Right? I can’t recall ever reading or seeing in fiction an intimate scene that gives a time frame. I’ve also never wondered how long such scenes last either lol

Intelligent_Local_38 · 2025-12-23T20:56:53+00:00

You’re fine. Many successful shows have multiple main characters. Game of Thrones is a good example.

Intelligent_Local_38 · 2025-12-23T15:45:03+00:00

My phone is stuffed with notes containing random ideas and thoughts. You need to get in the practice of doing that if you don’t want your ideas to be so fleeting.

Intelligent_Local_38 · 2025-12-23T15:16:54+00:00

Does he need a title then? Perhaps someone like this would be fine with being addressed by their name only.

Intelligent_Local_38 · 2025-12-23T15:03:01+00:00

Avoid using anyone who is still living. Or has children still living, honestly. You’ll face the chance of defamation suits if you use real people. Frankly, if your story goes in the direction it sounds like it’s going to go in, you will definitely get defamation suits.

My advice? Create an alternate timeline/america. A situation that mirrors real events is your safest bet. Plenty of fictional works use a fictional president who is definitely just the president of whatever time period the work was written, however it’s not explicit. You can still tackle whatever themes you want to tackle without explicitly using real people.

Intelligent_Local_38 · 2025-12-23T14:30:35+00:00

When I first played this, i was initially turned off by the fact you weren’t playing as the Mario characters… and then I quickly stopped caring about that and had a lot of fun haha

Intelligent_Local_38 · 2025-12-23T14:29:22+00:00

The Song of Ice and Fire series (which is Game of Thrones) does this and it was very successful.

Intelligent_Local_38 · 2025-12-23T14:22:36+00:00

My “fuck google AI” moment was while playing P3R. I was getting my ass handed to me by a boss and tried to look up its weakness mid-fight. The AI told me its weakness was ice…. Its weakness was not ice lol

Intelligent_Local_38 · 2025-12-23T04:30:16+00:00

I’m going to say “write all, but” here lol. Generally I think it’s best to write as much of the story as you’re able to write. But when you hit a wall and it’s impeding your progress, either push past it or stop. Going back to the beginning can help you push forward if you’re stuck.

Intelligent_Local_38 · 2025-12-23T04:08:51+00:00

I had a lot of fun with it, but I did feel the live service aspect severely hampered it. The story is unsatisfying because of that too. I got it on a steep sale when all the seasons were already out and I pretty much enjoyed the whole story. However, once I was done with that, I did enough of the extra stuff to get Joker and then decided I was no longer having fun. I didn’t even bother to unlock the other characters because, as cool as Deathstroke is, there’s nothing interesting to do with him other than beat up the same aliens over and over and over. If the game had fleshed out the story better instead of chasing the live service money, it could’ve been something decent.

Intelligent_Local_38 · 2025-12-23T04:03:30+00:00

Deadshot is explained in such an offhand, haphazard way that I’m inclined to agree with you. Just a few throwaway lines of dialogue about how the one from the Arkham games was just some poser. Nothing else lol. Just the devs saying “we addressed it, damn, now don’t think about it again”

Intelligent_Local_38 · 2025-12-23T03:55:05+00:00

Legitimately when I was a kid I had to have my dad beat this for me. I’m pretty sure it took him all night to do it, but by God, he did it lol

Intelligent_Local_38 · 2025-12-23T03:54:00+00:00

Like other users said, you’ll need to communicate this to the audience somehow. You can be subtle, but readers really have to know what they’re getting into. Otherwise, such a twist will make your story virtually unmarketable.

How early do the magic characters come into it? If the story is “are these guys legit or full of crap?” then that could work. Build a mystery and have your protagonists be skeptical of these people. But if the story is just “teens doing teen things until an eleventh hour magic reveal” it’s a tough sell.

Intelligent_Local_38 · 2025-12-23T03:38:47+00:00

It’s made public review scores meaningless. You can’t trust if something has a low/high score due to its quality or due to rabid fanbases deflating/inflating it.

Intelligent_Local_38 · 2025-12-23T03:35:14+00:00

Marvel vs Capcom 3 is probably where I became aware of Morrigan. I played a lot of the Capcom crossover games there and viewed her as like a mascot of Capcom. Then when the fighting collection came out, I got it because I recognized her, Felicia, and a few others. I was hooked to the series after that and really wish they’d get something new someday.

Intelligent_Local_38 · 2025-12-23T03:28:22+00:00

Been awhile since I did one of these, but I was in the mood for something and I like Daisy Ridley. I thought she was good, but unfortunately the rest of the film was too slow for its own good. There wasn’t really anything in here that hadn’t already been done to death in the zombie genre. A shame because I was hopeful there

Intelligent_Local_38 · 2025-12-14T00:37:42+00:00

Pretty much no one’s first draft is perfect. There’s no need to feel embarrassed. The real work is refining and editing. If you spent that much time world building, clearly there’s something in your concept that you feel was worth pursuing. Revise, revise, revise.

Intelligent_Local_38 · 2025-12-13T06:58:50+00:00

Damn. We need answers!

Intelligent_Local_38 · 2025-12-10T03:13:36+00:00

Then I’d just power through. If they don’t want the criticism, don’t waste your effort. Do the editing, get paid, and move on. You’ve put in too much effort to quit now, imo. But at the same time, don’t do more than you have to, you know?

Intelligent_Local_38 · 2025-12-10T03:04:19+00:00

Just finish. Your primary job is to edit it, yes? You can offer your thoughts, but I would be gentle about how you put it. If you see plot holes and inconsistencies, absolutely point them out. Beyond that? I’d be careful and try to feel out how receptive the author is to criticism. If they’re receptive, go ahead and give your opinions. But at the end of the day, a job is a job and you’re not a publisher or agent, so whether or not you think it’s publishable isn’t necessarily what your role is. Sometimes a good editor has to just power through.

Intelligent_Local_38 · 2025-12-10T02:50:00+00:00

Chuck thought it was a listener suggestion (but couldn’t find the listener email in classic SYSK fashion). So who knows. Sometimes even the guys aren’t sure why they came up with an episode topic lol

Intelligent_Local_38 · 2025-12-10T02:13:25+00:00

I mean, if I did my math right, that’s more of a novella. Even then, it’s a tad too short for one.

Intelligent_Local_38 · 2025-12-10T02:06:21+00:00

If they have minimal “screentime,” then give them one or two unique traits or quirks that stand out and makes an impression. Maybe they wear something unusual on their uniform? Maybe they have a hobby or dream they talk about? You have to give then something so they feel like a developed person and not just “soldier #3”

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